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Thread: Questions & Answers (1 Replies, 2,434 Views) by PointZero
(Verse 1)
It feels like something's out of place
My head keeps spinning
And it's been like this for days
I want to meet you where you are
I want to see if I can start a fire
In your heart
...
Thread: Fish In The Scene (with Music) (4 Replies, 2,539 Views) by PointZero
I think you're right Jim ;)
Thread: Fish In The Scene (with Music) (4 Replies, 2,539 Views) by PointZero
https://soundcloud.com/0point0zero0/fish-in-the-scene-album
So sick, so sick of all of this
And getting ready for proverbial plot-twists
And signs that describe the way you
Cover up your lies
...
Thread: The Truth Exposed (2 Replies, 1,369 Views) by PointZero
Thank you so much :)
Thread: The Truth Exposed (2 Replies, 1,369 Views) by PointZero
www.soundcloud.com/0point0zero0/the-truth-exposed
(Verse 1)
I want answers to questions asked
But they're like dancers prancing around the facts
Humanity is bursting at the seams
Of who made...
Thread: Winding Road (0 Replies, 1,009 Views) by PointZero
https://soundcloud.com/0point0zero0/winding-road
(Verse 1)
If you're a visual learner I don't know what to say to you
Cause simply seeing with your eyes ain't never gonna prove
All the doubts...
Thread: Darling (with music) (2 Replies, 1,157 Views) by PointZero
Thanks! It's actually a banjo. Mandolin and ukulele are used as well.
Thread: Darling (with music) (2 Replies, 1,157 Views) by PointZero
https://soundcloud.com/0point0zero0/darling
(Verse 1)
Well love ain't what it used to be
We got these silly little people with their ever-after dreams
But one night stands won't get you hand in...
Thread: Parasitic Love Affair (2 Replies, 1,445 Views) by PointZero
Thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Thread: Grow Up, Be Brave (3 Replies, 1,500 Views) by PointZero
I'm glad your honest, though! It means a lot. Thanks for the compliments!
Thread: Parasitic Love Affair (2 Replies, 1,445 Views) by PointZero
https://soundcloud.com/0point0zero0/parasitic-love-affair
(Pre-Chorus)
Dead is the way, I felt when I saw
Your name but not mine on the marquee
Dead is the way, I felt when I saw
Your feet but...
Thread: Grow Up, Be Brave (3 Replies, 1,500 Views) by PointZero
https://soundcloud.com/0point0zero0/grow-up-be-brave
(Verse 1)
Girl you make me sick, sick, sick
Your checkered Vans put holes in plans that stitches cannot fix
And I've tried so hard to rid...
Thread: Trains & Tracks (1 Replies, 1,290 Views) by PointZero
[Listen to the song here]
https://soundcloud.com/0point0zero0/trains-and-tracks
Thread: Trains & Tracks (1 Replies, 1,290 Views) by PointZero
[Listen to the song here]
https://soundcloud.com/0point0zero0/trains-and-tracks
(Verse 1)
What you see is what you get
And what you wish you had is dead
But I just feel so sorry for you boy
...
Thread: Fish in the Scene (0 Replies, 1,440 Views) by PointZero
So sick, so sick of all of this
And getting ready for proverbial plot-twist
Enzymes that describe the way you
cover up your lies
Well I know just what you want from me
But I can tell you that...
Thread: Famous Old Painters (2 Replies, 1,852 Views) by PointZero
Thank you! :) And yeah.. I'll have to revise it now. :P
Thread: Famous Old Painters (2 Replies, 1,852 Views) by PointZero
Liberty has led the people
down the tunnel
Deep in the heart
of glowing red ink
My mind is hurting,
my heart is breaking
When did they have
the time to think?
Thread: Serendipity (3 Replies, 1,668 Views) by PointZero
Ah, thanks Doug!
And thanks Rickey, you always have positive things to say. :)
Thread: Serendipity (3 Replies, 1,668 Views) by PointZero
(Verse 1)
Fourteen nights and fourteen days
Struggles, fights and troubled ways
Will you be there in the end?
I guess I'll have to see again
You tried to run but you ran too slow
And now I...
Thread: Colossal Space Collapse (1 Replies, 1,231 Views) by PointZero
Thanks! :) I was kinda going for a space-type feel.. like a group of people leaving Earth to go out in the unknown.
Thread: Colossal Space Collapse (1 Replies, 1,231 Views) by PointZero
Disconnect the head from this body
Rocket propulsion never felt so good
Breaking the bounds of Earth
and we're hurdling towards the unknown
Sounds of silence deafening me
I'm doing things I...
Thread: We Need A Revolution (4 Replies, 2,852 Views) by PointZero
Thank you! It's refreshing to see other people with the same thought processes.. except I'm sure we all know how a revolution would go over in today's society: not well.. :P Anyways, thanks a lot for...
Thread: Cut the Cord (0 Replies, 1,161 Views) by PointZero
Come with me
and I'll take you to
a better place than this
And we'll be
surrounded by
an element of bliss
You don't have
to worry anymore
Thread: Hourglass (0 Replies, 1,181 Views) by PointZero
And then again she crossed my mind
I swore that yesterday was the last time
But I was never really into promises,
was I?
All alone with not a breath to breathe,
tied up to a noose that's...
Thread: Cosmical Simplicity (7 Replies, 1,856 Views) by PointZero
(Part 1: Introduction to the Precursor to the Preface)
Cosmical simplicity
even as things merge into intricate designs
and ways of life
With the interdependencies;
birds upon insects
leaves...
Thread: Secret Club House (1 Replies, 1,089 Views) by PointZero
Did I rush in too fast again?
Just a simple yes and I'll be,
on my way back to the start.
Is there an answer?
He stood up just to excuse,
himself from the rest of the pack.
It's a smash hit...
Thread: Keep Your Fingers Crossed (2 Replies, 1,635 Views) by PointZero
(Verse 1)
I love the way you shine
All your intricate designs,
they align,
perfectly
You are beautiful and kind,
and I wish I could rewind,
to the time,
when you were mine
Thread: Alive With You (0 Replies, 1,207 Views) by PointZero
ApprehensuOkkkk n
Thread: Someone Is Humming (5 Replies, 1,771 Views) by PointZero
Sad to see that no one comments on lyrics anymore. I have to say, I'm a fan of the cryptic-ness used in these lyrics. Sorta like a hidden meaning is somewhere within. I like the "drowned out by a...
Thread: Car Crash (3 Replies, 1,895 Views) by PointZero
Thanks for telling me.. I revised the whole thing now.
Thread: Car Crash (3 Replies, 1,895 Views) by PointZero
(Verse 1)
We had the time of recreation, not superstition, oh no
We had the time of our lives
And they could have told us that we were hitting the wrong keys
They could have told us we were part...
Thread: Apprehension (1 Replies, 1,222 Views) by PointZero
(Verse 1)
You continue to ignore
Don't you know that there is more?
It keeps getting steeper,
you're digging deeper,
you think that you can elude the reaper.
But he's underneath your skin.
...
Thread: Outside (0 Replies, 1,046 Views) by PointZero
(Verse 1)
I close my eyes and the inside's taking over
And I hear you say,
that I spent my life looking for a four-leaf clover
Well you might be right,
but I just can't help myself, I'm growing...
Thread: Good Morning Sunshine (New Horizon) (0 Replies, 1,088 Views) by PointZero
(Verse 1)
Good morning sunshine, hey how have you been?
It's always nice to see your charming grin.
You have love and grace written on your face, oh.
And I tried to leave but I couldn't break, oh...
Thread: Incompatible (6 Replies, 1,926 Views) by PointZero
http://soundcloud.com/alex-harbolt/incompatible
The audio.
A rough demo of just vocals and acoustic.
Thread: Incompatible (6 Replies, 1,926 Views) by PointZero
http://soundcloud.com/alex-harbolt/incompatible
The walls are closing in and there is nowhere left for me to hide
No matter where you go you can't escape what's on the other side
And as the...
Thread: I'm No Animal (4 Replies, 1,826 Views) by PointZero
It is two songs in one, became too lazy. But yeah thanks for being the first two people to give a **** about something I write. I find it ironic that someone notices the worst piece of **** I put on...
Thread: I'm No Animal (4 Replies, 1,826 Views) by PointZero
Hearts are wise and everything else
Your life was safe
I don’t know if,
you know the way
Snakes in my head are always,
catching me on the highway
Turn the mission off
I’ll never see you again
Thread: Misunderstood (0 Replies, 1,371 Views) by PointZero
(Verse 1)
It's profound you see
We've got a chance at destiny
It's an endless bounty
And its out of our reach
Forget-me-nots
Litter all the sidewalks
Tread on floors that talk
Just sticks...
Thread: To You From Me (0 Replies, 1,446 Views) by PointZero
(Verse 1)
Don't go to work today
Just life your life away
Why do you have to listen,
to what they have to say?
There's a hero in the rooftops
And he's begging to be seen
He's just one of us ...
Thread: I Am Free (6 Replies, 2,566 Views) by PointZero
Thanks for the feedback.
Thread: I Am Free (6 Replies, 2,566 Views) by PointZero
Thanks. A change of pace for once.
Thread: I Am Free (6 Replies, 2,566 Views) by PointZero
I'm so sick of no one saying ANYTHING to the stuff I write.
Thread: I Am Free (6 Replies, 2,566 Views) by PointZero
I'm a corporate ***** but I know the difference
Like Bob Dylan if he could give two more cents
But in a world full of mechanized robots
They march one after one singing:
Grow up,
get a car,...
Thread: We Need A Revolution (4 Replies, 2,852 Views) by PointZero
Thanks. I just want people to know the truth.
Thread: Best Lyricist? (27 Replies, 17,335 Views) by PointZero
Billie Joe Armstrong, Thom Yorke, Chris Martin, Kurt Cobain, John McCrea..
Thread: We Need A Revolution (4 Replies, 2,852 Views) by PointZero
(I)
I never said it was easy
They didn't give us a chance
We’re not the land of the free
Believe what you want to believe
But that’s how it has to be
What rights do we have?
They don’t...
Thread: Dine With The Devil (1 Replies, 1,989 Views) by PointZero
You're right about it being dark, metaphorical and twisted, but I just can't find a good melody haha. I mean the content is good, but I think they'd be hard to put music to.
Thread: zacky g (2 Replies, 1,310 Views) by PointZero
lmao, that was pretty funny... I hope that it wasn't supposed to be serious.
Thread: Over the Bullshit, feedback plz :D (6 Replies, 2,206 Views) by PointZero
Is this rap? Because if so, then there's a subform just for rap lyrics review and I'm sure you'd get more responses there.