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Thread: So I Dream - Criticism is Warmly Welcomed, Tear it Apart (0 Replies, 1,267 Views) by nyvega002
I squint
My eyes
Staring into a thickening darkness
Hoping
To see
The light reflecting from your eyes
Your hand
Reaches
Grabbing for my lifeless body
And then
Thread: New Song, No Title (2 Replies, 1,367 Views) by nyvega002
You're being dragged into a world where you're unsure of many things, and that makes you uncomfortable. You're putting a lot of pressure on yourself to make one choice that could potentially make...
Thread: PLZ COMMENT - Criticism is well respected (0 Replies, 1,078 Views) by nyvega002
Let Me Burn
MV1:
I wake up every morning
screaming, only to find
lightning out my window
I fight myself to sleep
every night, every time I find
the insanity brewing in my mind
Thread: First Song in a Year - Constructive Criticism is Always Appreciated (0 Replies, 1,136 Views) by nyvega002
I haven't been able to write in a long time, mostly because of a lack of inspiration, but during my trip to New York, this just suddenly hit me. Why? Well, read it and it will be obvious.
So I...
Thread: Let Me Burn - Please Take a Look (1 Replies, 1,055 Views) by nyvega002
MV1:
I wake up every morning
screaming, only to find
lightning out my window
I fight myself to sleep
every night, every time I find
the insanity brewing in my mind
B:
And I lie
Thread: CMNT PLZ..... Night of Unbearable Loss (1 Replies, 959 Views) by nyvega002
Oh, also, the person who is doing the reaching out is trying to cope with it themselves while also taking the responsibility of helping the other who can't seem to find the power to help them self.
Thread: CMNT PLZ..... Night of Unbearable Loss (1 Replies, 959 Views) by nyvega002
I wrote this a while back so I;m not quite sure exactly what I was trying to write about, but I'm pretty sure it's about that period of time between breaking up and the feeling the first breeze of...
Thread: I'm Sorry (5 Replies, 1,163 Views) by nyvega002
I liked it. It was a very creative idea and I would like to commend both of you for it.
There is a big sense of "real" while reading it. Even if you didn't give any background on it, it is not...
Thread: Comment Please: First Post in Looong Time (3 Replies, 1,039 Views) by nyvega002
Well I always have an idea for a tune in my head as I write my lyrics, but later on they'll change as I look at them again. I can't write or read music unfortunately, so what ends up in my head is as...
Thread: Have a title for this song? (13 Replies, 1,876 Views) by nyvega002
I would go with Unending Circle, Endless Tunnel, or Hopeless Wish
Thread: Comment Please: First Post in Looong Time (3 Replies, 1,039 Views) by nyvega002
Let Me Burn
I wake up every morning
screaming, only to find
lightning out my window
I fight myself to sleep
every night, every time I find
the insanity brewing in my mind
Thread: Comment PLZ - Mist Covered Shadow (1 Replies, 1,439 Views) by nyvega002
Mist Covered Shadows
Wading slowly
Through the waters of my breath
Breathing carefully
I do not want to test
How far my lungs will go
To help keep me alive
I don't know what to expect
Live...
Thread: First Song in Months - Mist Covered Shadows (0 Replies, 1,041 Views) by nyvega002
Mist Covered Shadows
Wading slowly
Through the waters of my breath
Breathing carefully
I do not want to test
How far my lungs will go
To help keep me alive
I don't know what to expect
Live...
Thread: Plz Comment - One of my first songs (0 Replies, 1,700 Views) by nyvega002
Goodbye For Now…
I might not have everything
Might not be that revealing
But I can tell
When the most precious to me is unhappy
I can’t face letting you go
Although I know it’s for the best...
Thread: Breaking Point.....Plz comment (1 Replies, 1,142 Views) by nyvega002
Breaking Point
Everything you’ve said to me, all the lies
You’ve went and broken all the ties
All the things that kept me sane
And held me from tearing you apart
Now I’m starting to hear...
Thread: Dangers of a Heavy Mind (1 Replies, 4,553 Views) by nyvega002
Hear the loud sounds
Will you hold out
Can you count down
Control all the thoughts you have
Remember the name
Can stay you stay sane
Live with the fame
Oh
Will you stay down
Thread: The Question, plz comment (7 Replies, 2,967 Views) by nyvega002
Thanks a lot you guys.
Nah, I'm not going to be conceited and praise myself, it's not my style. Writing lyrics is just the only way I've been able to efficiently express myself.
Thread: Crystal Teardrop, plz comment (2 Replies, 2,102 Views) by nyvega002
It's based on everyone who hides their emotions from others because they're ashamed of how they feel or don't want to be a burden on them. The song is pretty much saying don't worry, let it out, let...
Thread: Untitled Song, Plz Comment (2 Replies, 1,289 Views) by nyvega002
Tell me what it’s like
Breathing all alone
Sitting underneath
The moonlight
No one there next to you
To move the sun out from behind
Tell me what it’s like
Floating by yourself
Laying down...
Thread: The Question, plz comment (7 Replies, 2,967 Views) by nyvega002
Thanks a lot for the feedback guys
Thread: The Question, plz comment (7 Replies, 2,967 Views) by nyvega002
The Question
The question is not
Where will you be in ten years
But what about tomorrow
Will you be full of regret and sorrow
The question is not
Can we change the past
Cause the past is...
Thread: Broken Thoughts (0 Replies, 2,267 Views) by nyvega002
I wrote this last year when I broke up with my first girlfriend so it was when i was an extreme amateur.
Broken Thoughts
The times I leave for myself
They are not...
Thread: First Alternative-Type Song (1 Replies, 1,412 Views) by nyvega002
Find My Way Back
Have you seen me lately
Feel like you’re avoiding it all
I’m drowning
Save me
Pick me up if I trip and I fall
Don’t let the oceans separate
Thread: Calling All Song Writers (14 Replies, 3,080 Views) by nyvega002
Broken Thoughts
The times I leave for myself
They don't turn into comfort
These attempts to clear my mind
Fail and they no longer work
Staring through this window
The reflections in my eyes...
Thread: Calling All Song Writers (14 Replies, 3,080 Views) by nyvega002
Well I have two that I had already written, so they're not based on their personal experiences, but I figured I might as well post them and let you see them.
...
Thread: Tell Me (0 Replies, 893 Views) by nyvega002
Tell me
What are you thinking
How are you doing
Don’t think I’m nosy
Im just curious
As to how you’re doing
Im just waiting
I want to hear you
Tell me you care
Thread: Daises - Even If You Don't Comment On Any Other One Today, PLEASE Comment This! (5 Replies, 3,496 Views) by nyvega002
WOW, i have to admit I do like it.
Especially the lines "This is a song, For the victims love devours" because unlike many songs that deal with love, whether it for good or bad, you're writing it...
Thread: New to Lyric Writing...."All Again" (1 Replies, 974 Views) by nyvega002
All Again
Would you believe me
If I said it hurt me too
All of those negative things, not one of them were true
You showed me what it was, to feel so close
Everything filled my life, but you...