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What Can I Do?
Thread: What Can I Do? (0 Replies, 1,622 Views) by cah
This is just something I wrote up in about 15 minutes, just a in-the-mood type deal. Just thought I'd see what everyone thinks about it. :)
/* What Can I Do? */
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You always asked me... -
I would love to give some structural criticism,...
Thread: She Was Just In The Way (2 Replies, 1,319 Views) by cah
I would love to give some structural criticism, but it sounds great. I personally think it would make an amazing R&B song, or possibly a slow acoustic/piano song.
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The Mistake You Didn't Make - Would love some feedback!
Thread: The Mistake You Didn't Make - Would love some feedback! (2 Replies, 1,267 Views) by cah
The Mistake You Didn't Make
People always say that everyone makes mistakes
But you never hear about those on the other side of them
The ones who have to immediately suffer
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How Could You
Thread: How Could You (0 Replies, 776 Views) by cah
/* How Could You */
Nothing people say
will take my pain away
Nothing people say
will make me feel ok
All I can see is your face
scattered all over the place
Those beautiful blue eyes -
I think it sounds good for real, but I think if...
Thread: what do you think about my lyrics ? (4 Replies, 1,220 Views) by cah
I think it sounds good for real, but I think if you really want it to be a song then you should try to get some sort of chorus going. Not saying you have to, just something to think about. :D
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Where Do You Start?
Thread: Where Do You Start? (3 Replies, 2,715 Views) by cah
This is my first ever attempt at writing lyrics, so don't be too harsh! :)
Where Do You Start?
Have you ever wondered what it is...
About that one person
that makes them so different?...