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Thread: Seconds after midnight (0 Replies, 1,539 Views) by 4 shades of reason
No don't enjoy the wicked
Things iv done*
Things i do
At least not after they*
Are done*
After its run thru*
I feel I'm no fun*
I feel like iv run out
Sleep
Thread: New (0 Replies, 1,218 Views) by 4 shades of reason
One day I'll love another girl as much as I love you and she will call you mom;*
Your just a tiny person*
With your mothers smile an
Your mothers eyes*
Dimples that have yet to set in*
You...
Thread: First song in months I had a block please comment (5 Replies, 1,922 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Thanks jay
Thread: C4c love feedback (0 Replies, 1,111 Views) by 4 shades of reason
House of sand*
I wanna take you to the beach build us a house of sand*
Then if it doesnt work out we can knock it down*
Start over again
I wanna finger paint your body*
Trace every line*
Make...
Thread: Set On Fire (3 Replies, 1,659 Views) by 4 shades of reason
I like this one a lot I love the chorus sick man or woman lol
Thread: First song in months I had a block please comment (5 Replies, 1,922 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Sljslj you nailed it thanks
For
The feed back an ya it's hard
Sometimes to get across the way you want a song to
Flow thanks a lot for
The posts i love feed back
Thread: First song in months I had a block please comment (5 Replies, 1,922 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Euphoria:
She said don't come*Around here
*I'm I'm a little lost and*Leaving*
but without you to*Hold I'll*Be freezing*
so ill drink an ill get high just to
Pass the time*
I lay among these...
Thread: What if (0 Replies, 1,212 Views) by 4 shades of reason
What if?
what if i told you that i never want to let you go
what if i told you that i loved you just to let you know
what if i screamed all that you made me feel
Thread: Most days (0 Replies, 1,148 Views) by 4 shades of reason
MOST DAY"S
most days spent thinking about you
sometimes i pretend i'm better off without you
i like remembering things we used to do
then thinking theres nothing left i hold my breath...
Thread: Really ruff draft want feedback (0 Replies, 1,066 Views) by 4 shades of reason
I didn't know how to respond to the snow cause the winters no place for being alone its to damn cold
And I could use anything some kinda sign to know I'm
Still alive*
Im falling harder then i ever...
Thread: She it's been a really long time (0 Replies, 1,056 Views) by 4 shades of reason
she never sees but with her heart
shes all i want
all i know is where we are
skins pure as snow
she asks why there are changes in the moon
then again i guess we all do to
and the leaves...
Thread: twice that: feed back plz (6 Replies, 2,267 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Okayy
Thread: What Is Feeling 4 (7 Replies, 2,737 Views) by 4 shades of reason
New input on old stuff plz
Thread: Hollow me out (6 Replies, 1,743 Views) by 4 shades of reason
New input on old stuff plz
Thread: untill the motions gone (1 Replies, 1,494 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Trying
To
Get new imput on my stuff before I post more
Thread: Padded room (3 Replies, 2,662 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Redresh
Thread: December (17 Replies, 3,402 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Refresh
Thread: whats not there (1 Replies, 1,932 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Refresh
Thread: not speaking (3 Replies, 1,744 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Redresh
Thread: Tell me nothing (10 Replies, 3,673 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Refresh
Thread: one shot: please read and comment (11 Replies, 3,118 Views) by 4 shades of reason
how so?
Thread: puses between smiles and words (2 Replies, 1,098 Views) by 4 shades of reason
im a lil confused as to what you mean but thanks for reading
Thread: i'll meet you (1 Replies, 995 Views) by 4 shades of reason
thank you for commenting
Thread: puses between smiles and words (2 Replies, 1,098 Views) by 4 shades of reason
because it took me a moment to speak
and it took you a second to smile
our words were few but understood
you've already given me more then most ever could
/i love you like a dreamer loves art...
Thread: i'll meet you (1 Replies, 995 Views) by 4 shades of reason
i'll meet you on the edge of sin and sweet innocents
i'll meet you where hearts stop and love begins
i'll meet you on the edge of where the sky thouches the earth
i'll meet you love in the space...
Thread: Dead Man Walking (8 Replies, 3,098 Views) by 4 shades of reason
i ment the story behind the reason you wrote the lyrics bro
Thread: new one (0 Replies, 997 Views) by 4 shades of reason
i say i dont know if iu ever been really loved
so im a little untrusting
and sometimes i wonder if i ever been good enough
but your lips silence my words
as my fingers find the space between...
Thread: new comment this an others plz really want feedback (1 Replies, 1,260 Views) by 4 shades of reason
this one is the next to be put into a song me an my band i really want feed back
Thread: just to make up please tell me what you think (0 Replies, 1,251 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Stop yelling an just kiss me
Hold me tight an make it hurt
Through me down an lets start forgettin
what we were fighting fo at first
/push me down take controll
grab your rage an let it go...
Thread: this house plz tell me what you think (0 Replies, 1,120 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Trimed sky blue walls countless windows
curtins pulled aside letting the sun peek in
white picket fence our balconey our swing
all the dreams we never got to begin
. . So all i have are some...
Thread: pretty girls and angels (7 Replies, 2,985 Views) by 4 shades of reason
wow thanks for the feed back love it alot an ok i will
Thread: pretty girls and angels (7 Replies, 2,985 Views) by 4 shades of reason
thanks alot
Thread: December (17 Replies, 3,402 Views) by 4 shades of reason
thanks alot what u mean by deaper in what part or what do u mean
Thread: new comment this an others plz really want feedback (1 Replies, 1,260 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Alone now your maskara like your heart bleeding
Running down you face
Barefoot on the floor
longing for something more
Then all this empty space
Thread: December (17 Replies, 3,402 Views) by 4 shades of reason
this is still one of my fav
Thread: not speaking (3 Replies, 1,744 Views) by 4 shades of reason
thanks man glad you liked it
Thread: What Is Feeling 4 (7 Replies, 2,737 Views) by 4 shades of reason
thanks an glad someone can relate to it bro
Thread: What Is Feeling 4 (7 Replies, 2,737 Views) by 4 shades of reason
thanks and and ya i didnt want to offend anyone
Thread: pretty girls and angels (7 Replies, 2,985 Views) by 4 shades of reason
thanksssss
Thread: dont know what to call it please tell me what you think (0 Replies, 1,152 Views) by 4 shades of reason
Whats this infection
Your complection wraps and pulls me in
Seeping compleating
Falling i begin
Hear me feel me my dear stigma
Thread: whats not there (0 Replies, 1,178 Views) by 4 shades of reason
WHATS NOT THERE
I don't mind the sun sometimes
Its a nice break from the moons greys and blues
Where loanly shadows in the night are replaced by siluhets of you
/ Its then i almost taist...
Thread: fallen (0 Replies, 1,121 Views) by 4 shades of reason
the sun is gone and my smiles lost
words you say without meaning
picking up the pieces of my broken trust
can feel my heart barly beating
i shouldnt have broke down when you told me how you feel...
Thread: pretty girls and angels (7 Replies, 2,985 Views) by 4 shades of reason
wow i have not posted in a long time so here is a new one hope you like it
i said lets just leave getta ticket to anywhere
they say that were not ment to be but were happy why should we care ...
Thread: one to us (6 Replies, 1,274 Views) by 4 shades of reason
if anyone has any ideas to help me wit a third verse plz tell me
Thread: Tell me nothing (10 Replies, 3,673 Views) by 4 shades of reason
plz comment on this one
Thread: Sever It At The Neck (2 Replies, 1,249 Views) by 4 shades of reason
thanks alot a love gettin coments thanks
Thread: December (17 Replies, 3,402 Views) by 4 shades of reason
ya ok i will and welcome
Thread: MOST DAY"S tell me what u think (39 Replies, 4,108 Views) by 4 shades of reason
how the bang working out
Thread: not speaking (3 Replies, 1,744 Views) by 4 shades of reason
the clocks constant ticking picking me apart reminding me
i'm still waiting for you
this chill keeps me loanly silence holds me closely
i just sit waiting for you
/ not much here really...
Thread: whats not there (1 Replies, 1,932 Views) by 4 shades of reason
hi been awhile so i thought i would post a new one hope you like it
WHATS NOT THERE
I don't mind the sun sometimes
Its a nice break from the moons greys and blues