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Thread: Remeber Me (14 Replies, 3,943 Views) by Tim Mayband
I'm thinking this is a rock or alt rock lyric. Assuming that, very good, raw and emotional. I do disagree with previous posts that seem to say all is perfect. In my opinion, your instincts to make a...
Thread: I wish everyday was christmas (7 Replies, 1,745 Views) by Tim Mayband
Good first draft, needs some work. I like your rhyme with Christmas but this one not only telegraphs itself to the listener long before it happens, it's too worn out and simplistic, almost like a...
Thread: Another Drink Tonight (3 Replies, 2,669 Views) by Tim Mayband
When i first saw your title I was thinking country but reading it I'm not so sure. The cadence suggests it is but it's a little dark/morbid for a country tune. "There's Been A Murder On Music Row"...
Thread: My first song!!!!! Please help me with some tips!!! (5 Replies, 1,267 Views) by Tim Mayband
Well, for a first draft on your first try it's a great effort. You have some good ideas but in some places just aren't sure about how to best present them.
This is your chorus because it sums...
Thread: Have a bunch of lyrics for sale! (4 Replies, 27,173 Views) by Tim Mayband
If you reside outside the U.S.A. then you should consult an entertainment lawyer but basically, in the U.S. it's not legal to directly sell your songs to an individual or music industry professional....
Thread: Song chorus good or bad? (11 Replies, 6,883 Views) by Tim Mayband
I think your lyric has great potential with a rewrite. But as-is it has too many cliches and some of the rhymes definitely qualify as "knee-jerk rhyming" (rhymes that are way overused and telegraph...
Thread: Copyright My Songs (19 Replies, 57,153 Views) by Tim Mayband
The "poor man's copyright" and at least one of the other methods mentioned above may make you feel better but they absolutely won't work should you ever need to prove ownership in a court of law.
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