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Thread: Fading (0 Replies, 1,915 Views) by emoskittle66
A song I wrote tonight, I'm only 15, and perhaps not as skilled as many other writers on this forum site. But please, give it a chance, critique it, it's a short song.
Verse1
Your silhoutte is...
Thread: Your Evil Brown Eyes (3 Replies, 2,445 Views) by emoskittle66
Thanks again. And totally, thats what I've realized. It's a bit overused, I was trying to use it, to portray that I was confused with my emotions. But Im sure Ill be able to find another way to do...
Thread: Your Evil Brown Eyes (3 Replies, 2,445 Views) by emoskittle66
Does anyone know if this name has been used before? It sounds un original to me. Anyways, as usualy, critique/criticize my lyrics please. And I will love you forever, here is another exerpt straight...
Thread: Sailboats (A ship fit for Lovers) (3 Replies, 1,637 Views) by emoskittle66
Thanks a bunch, I love the comments. I will write another verse as soon as I get some random inspiration, so that could be anywhere in between five minutes and a week, lol. Sometimes I just come up...
Thread: song i wrote...tell me wut u think (7 Replies, 37,498 Views) by emoskittle66
I think it's really good. Theres a particular part I like, I'll quote it.
"Just broke my heart
Stole my pride
Left me in a ditch
Just trying to survive
Who ever knew that 3 more words
Led...
Thread: Sailboats (A ship fit for Lovers) (3 Replies, 1,637 Views) by emoskittle66
~Bump~
Thread: Sailboats (A ship fit for Lovers) (3 Replies, 1,637 Views) by emoskittle66
Hey, please feel free to critique, give advice, or make fun of my lyrics, I'm only fifteen and haven't written much, so try not to kill me.
Sailboat
Verse
And her I am, trapped in a sailboat...