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Thread: Your All To Late To This Raptacticians Deabate! (1 Replies, 1,051 Views) by AR.spry
dont hate for the state / i leave you in /
consider it behavin like a child / for the son
of satan / people start ratin / and
purpotraiting / my ways / but my definitions
are siftin on...
Thread: Rest in peace my soul . comment please. (23 Replies, 7,411 Views) by AR.spry
awesome man makes me wanna try and go for something deeper. its always those experiences that bring out the deep heart felt words. cant wait to read more, keep it up man.
Thread: Your All To Late To This Raptacticians Deabate! (1 Replies, 1,051 Views) by AR.spry
lets get wicked and lifted / and spit on then left gone / pounding chest of king kong / is the bass of this song / feel it the oposite of wrong / thats right so i fight / to take my lyrics to the top...
Thread: ok i know im new but why does everyone get more views. a comment would be nice to :) (2 Replies, 1,286 Views) by AR.spry
thx MZ appreciate it. did you read all the stuff i posted? most is in one post i jotted like 3 or 4 verses. the reason I ask is what do you mean by choppy, im assuming you mean theres sections that...
Thread: ok i know im new but why does everyone get more views. a comment would be nice to :) (2 Replies, 1,286 Views) by AR.spry
i study quantum physics / and question
realistics / everything thats twisted / could be
the perfect norm what is it? / hyroglyphics
signaling perfect scriptures / study up get
knowledge you dont...
Thread: rate please (3 Replies, 1,721 Views) by AR.spry
I guess im thinking more of the story telling rap or thinkings man rap. for instance heres one i just jotted down, if it shows the kinda stuff im trying for then mixing it with some of my wacky ****...
Thread: rate please (3 Replies, 1,721 Views) by AR.spry
sup man some good stuff in there for sure. i have only been on these boards a few days and im trying to contribute even though nobody has given me any feedback on my lyrics i am for everything i read...
Thread: just rhymin lol (2 Replies, 900 Views) by AR.spry
whether u like it or not its me whos gon rock
/ tip top shape holden open the golden gate /
flyin over every province its nonsense / thats
why i went to steal every cent / and once you get a...
Thread: just rhymin lol (2 Replies, 900 Views) by AR.spry
i just gotta talk and the earthquake it starts / my fire sparks and you got no smarts / comin with a thousand pounds n thats just some currency / if i bring in all the weight, your already nervous...
Thread: A Random Rhyme (5 Replies, 3,132 Views) by AR.spry
I get dirty like Redman but artistic like Rembrandt.
great line man.
and the whole verse that starts with "My rhymes are like black magic" shows me just how poor my written lyrics are lol....
Thread: just rhymin lol (2 Replies, 900 Views) by AR.spry
clippin bird wings just to hear them sing /
and oh yeah i also like chicken wings / what
a plus that brings / vibe to a song while eaten
along / hot bbq sauce makes the song more
bomb...
Thread: another rhyme (0 Replies, 1,020 Views) by AR.spry
i give you choice but your choiceless /
at the same time voiceless /
call it a kodak moment /
god damn priceless /
took a second gander at the pricelist /
it does cost to be choice and...
Thread: ill try a poem then second post (0 Replies, 2,935 Views) by AR.spry
I never got feedback on my rap so ill try this poem I jotted. Something about me at the time or life around there got me thinking about it so.
the matrix
it was such a nice summer day
put i...
Thread: totally new to this feedback is my goal ty (1 Replies, 829 Views) by AR.spry
[QUOTE=AR.spry;675049]I never posted anything I write but ill try some random lyrics. later I might put out my whole raps with choruses to get opions. Anyway hit me back please... all started...
Thread: totally new to this feedback is my goal ty (1 Replies, 829 Views) by AR.spry
I never posted anything I write but ill try some random lyrics. later I might put out my whole raps with choruses to get opions. Anyway hit me back please... all started somewhere
Im thinking...