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Thread: The Stars Tonight (0 Replies, 1,165 Views) by Reags
Hey guys, this is my first post here so I'm hoping you can all tell me what you think of this lyric. I wrote it about a year ago, and its since been through a few incarnations. This is what I've...
Thread: Can anyone help me with this line? (8 Replies, 2,751 Views) by Reags
I love how this thread shows us that a single line can change an entire song.
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Thread: An OLD lyric of mine. Puzzle Girl. (1 Replies, 1,631 Views) by Reags
So no one has any ideas?
Thread: An OLD lyric of mine. Puzzle Girl. (1 Replies, 1,631 Views) by Reags
So heres a lyric that i wrote AGES ago. I think it has some merit. I like where it ended up harmonically, so I'm gonna try record it and post it.
Puzzle Girl.
Shes a puzzle that i just cant...
Thread: Another lyric... Awkward Fool (5 Replies, 1,974 Views) by Reags
Thats brilliant! I do this nearly every day. The thing is though, I bring it on myself by doing something stupid, like forgetting I have alecture and walking half way across campus and then have to...
Thread: First Lyrics (12 Replies, 16,845 Views) by Reags
SpudMunky brought up a good point in your use of colours to create imagery, and really thats what this kind of lyric is all about. Its fantastic work for your first attempt, very clear stylistically,...
Thread: Can anyone help me with this line? (8 Replies, 2,751 Views) by Reags
Nothing scares me more but I want to fly
And I'll regret it if I dont try.
Thread: My lyric post...Delivery. (6 Replies, 2,076 Views) by Reags
Thanks so much! Thats a huge compliment for me, you've really just surmised what I try to do with my lyrics, so to have someone nail it like that leads me to believe I'm on track.
Cheers!
Thread: My lyric post...Delivery. (6 Replies, 2,076 Views) by Reags
I think the next step is going to be thinking of a few musical ideas, and patching things up to scan with the meter nicely.
Ah, so many decisions. Thanks for the feedback atmaster, anyone else...
Thread: Some lyrics i wrote plz read be honest (17 Replies, 11,882 Views) by Reags
I think at this point the songs are waiting on music.
Lots of decisions to be made, what key? Tonality? Major, minor? Where are your vocal hooks gonna fall?? Instrumentation?
I like to think of...
Thread: Another lyric... Awkward Fool (5 Replies, 1,974 Views) by Reags
BTW, thanks heaps for the feedback. I really appreciate it.
Thread: Another lyric... Awkward Fool (5 Replies, 1,974 Views) by Reags
I like your reading of it. Always enjoy hearing peoples reactions. The song for me was about being judged before people actually got to know me. Then, in this section:
First impressions last
Too...
Thread: Another lyric... Awkward Fool (5 Replies, 1,974 Views) by Reags
I’m just an awkward fool
I loose my page
I get lost in crowds
I get uneasy when I can’t see the sky
Don’t take me
Too seriously
I’m an awkward fool
I sing in the shower
Thread: My lyric post...Delivery. (6 Replies, 2,076 Views) by Reags
If you run that line on from the previous line it reads:
"With your travel bags and coffee mug that'd last back to the USA"
It tells the listerner shes from the USA, and implies a very big...
Thread: i live for the music and for the music i live (2 Replies, 1,448 Views) by Reags
That was fantastic, I thought. Some real inventive rhyme used, which is not something I find to be easy.
Good job.
Thread: My lyric post...Delivery. (6 Replies, 2,076 Views) by Reags
Hi everyone. This is m first lyric post and also my first post on these forums. Good to be here.
So this is a song I wrote a few weeks ago. Tell me what you think.
Delivery
Ill never...