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• Thanks for giving it a read Eccer, it's...

  Thread: Crimson Man (4 Replies, 1,239 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Thanks for giving it a read Eccer, it's appreciated. I'm not sure what you mean though..This is a heavy metal song, sang with angst and forcefulness, and I couldn't see it being sang to a baby. I'm...

• Crimson Man

  Thread: Crimson Man (4 Replies, 1,239 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  (Vs)
  I wield a sword with fierceness;
  stained with the blood of tyrants.
  With my cold sharp steel,
  I kill with skill;
  striking down in silence.
  They never see it coming
  die right where they...

• Very unique way of putting the situation in...

  Thread: Danger Zone Love (4 Replies, 2,072 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Very unique way of putting the situation in writing and you convey the feeling well.

• You tackled a controversial subject and situation...

  Thread: Our Secret (2 Replies, 1,572 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  You tackled a controversial subject and situation well. Growing up, this is an all to real predicament that can bring emotional scars and broken hearts, yet it is a fact of life. I really enjoyed...

• Like I said in another forum. I like it, and it...

  Thread: Legend Of Bret Maverick (3 Replies, 1,296 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Like I said in another forum. I like it, and it brings back old black and white memories from yesteryear.

• This is a good progressing story and flows very...

  Thread: (Homage to) Foul Play (5 Replies, 1,756 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  This is a good progressing story and flows very well, and it's pulled off well too. Unique and totally unexpected. Nice work Elegant!

• Some really great lines in here and it exudes...

  Thread: Nothingtown (5 Replies, 1,167 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Some really great lines in here and it exudes somewhat of a dark brooding vibe. Yea, I like the feel to this, almost an Evanescence kind of music comes to mind.
  
  "when my boots they hit the ground...

• Sticky: Hi all. I just wanted to point out something I...

  Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 357,539 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Hi all. I just wanted to point out something I have been sitting in the background watching, and it concerns the posting of lyrics. When I post a lyric, I always leave one or preferably two comments...

• This is a very very good lyric Kerri. Great...

  Thread: Money (9 Replies, 1,901 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  This is a very very good lyric Kerri. Great wording and flows great. Nice work!

• Mending Music

  Thread: Mending Music (2 Replies, 1,043 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Oh give me an upbeat rhythm that will take away my blues
  Play me something special that I've never listened to
  Let the lyrics be uplifting, so I want to sing along
  play me, play me, a good old...

• Thanks Doug, Rock Rules!

  Thread: She's An Earthquake (2 Replies, 1,198 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Thanks Doug, Rock Rules!

• This is a good lyric, that is disrespected by a...

  Thread: Tonight (2 Replies, 7,605 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  This is a good lyric, that is disrespected by a spammer posting nonsense. Nice work Rashid1739

• She's An Earthquake

  Thread: She's An Earthquake (2 Replies, 1,198 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  (Vs)
  She takes that dance floor pretty as you please
  Moves my world right then and there
  Her jarring looks weaken my knees
  Sportin daisy dukes and long blonde hair
  
  (Ch)
  She's an earthquake...

• Hiya amaryn, thanks for reading and...

  Thread: Hindsight (4 Replies, 1,306 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Hiya amaryn, thanks for reading and commenting...... I believe in a relationship that my body is not mine but my spouses and vice versa. Self brings selfishness, but when you live for someone else,...

• Thanks Doug if you saw the gazzilion lyrics I...

  Thread: Hindsight (4 Replies, 1,306 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Thanks Doug if you saw the gazzilion lyrics I have, you would find a lot of experimental and different genre lyrics. This one has a collaborator working on the music as well as one I posted a while...

• Oh, ok..lol..I don't really read through other...

  Thread: One For The Road (24 Replies, 8,831 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Oh, ok..lol..I don't really read through other comments in a post at the moment. It's hard on my peepers. :)

• Hindsight

  Thread: Hindsight (4 Replies, 1,306 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  (Vs)
  Today the paper brought heartbreaking news
  Saw your wedding picture in section 2
  Said your honeymoon would be in Paris France
  and I cursed myself for my missed chance
  
  (Vs)
  There was a...

• Good stuff, well worded without the cliches. Nice...

  Thread: Glossy Eyes (4 Replies, 1,642 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Good stuff, well worded without the cliches. Nice job on this. Kudos

• Good stuff, put this one to music.

  Thread: I'm Not A Stalker (2 Replies, 940 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Good stuff, put this one to music.

• Good stuff Doug! You laying a track for this?

  Thread: One For The Road (24 Replies, 8,831 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Good stuff Doug! You laying a track for this?

• Looks like you have found you a muse of late....

  Thread: All That Blonde Hair! (1 Replies, 1,236 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Looks like you have found you a muse of late. Another Nice one Jim.

• This is a very well written lyric. In verse 2 ...

  Thread: Let Me In (1 Replies, 1,101 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  This is a very well written lyric. In verse 2
  
  "You’re a fallen angel that
  has beaten, and
  buried into the ground."
  
  Of the whole lyric this the only thing that seemed off to me
  
  This is...

• Who Are We

  Thread: Who Are We (1 Replies, 799 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  (Vs)
  Sometimes I wonder where I am in the scheme of things;
  I often ponder who I am.
  The more I age the more epiphany's I get;
  each of them making a different man.
  Yesterday's me could never...

• Man, I hate to hear about your bass players...

  Thread: I Don't Know (7 Replies, 4,537 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Man, I hate to hear about your bass players daughter, that sucks. I feel for him. I have a positive attitude about my problem. I did some reading up on it and the success rate for recovery is pretty...

• A good dark, ominous lyric with some really good...

  Thread: We will not run,we will not hide (8 Replies, 1,880 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  A good dark, ominous lyric with some really good lines and a touch of hope thrown in. Nice one true

• Really enjoyed this. I'm a sucker for...

  Thread: Save My World (7 Replies, 2,034 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Really enjoyed this. I'm a sucker for introspection in a song. Good work.

• Nice sentiment and emotion pull. Conveys the...

  Thread: Strangers (5 Replies, 1,543 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Nice sentiment and emotion pull. Conveys the drifting away of love that we all experience once or more in our life. Nice work Kerri.

• Nice Doug, I get a melody for this, just by...

  Thread: Fantasyland Magic (16 Replies, 4,532 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Nice Doug, I get a melody for this, just by reading it (don't know if it's the same as yours) Nothing like love to make a man sing.....or run :)..Each has their day. Good work dude, keep'em comin.

• I Can't Breathe

  Thread: I Can't Breathe (0 Replies, 940 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  (Vs)
  I'm just a used chrysalis who's butterfly has flown
  empty as a vacuum and twice as freezing cold
  Alone as a pendulum without a clock to grace
  broken as the lines that crack a tortured face
  ...

• Thanks for reading Doug and for the kind comment....

  Thread: I Don't Know (7 Replies, 4,537 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Thanks for reading Doug and for the kind comment. I've been away for a bit and battling writers block besides a tumor on the back of my eyeball. Can't see well right now, but I couldn't stay away :)

• This is some good writing. I like it bunches. I...

  Thread: False Belonging (11 Replies, 2,770 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  This is some good writing. I like it bunches. I do however have one question
  
  "Like shattered mirrors upon the wall,
  There’s no way to save us all."
  
  I may be missing something and if so.."duh"...

• I Don't Know

  Thread: I Don't Know (7 Replies, 4,537 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Had a tune for this humming in my head for almost a year. Finally decided to try to put words to it. Lines in parenthesis is backup singers part.
  
  
  (Vs)
  The ultimatum has been put out
  You've got...

• Nice Jim, really like this one.

  Thread: Long As I Can Get To The Stage (2 Replies, 1,233 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Nice Jim, really like this one.

• Thanks for reading Doug. It was the shock value I...

  Thread: Little Wood Box (4 Replies, 1,724 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Thanks for reading Doug. It was the shock value I was going for, to bring this sad, horrific school shootings into perspective. If I can elicit emotion, I'm happy, although sometimes it's not a feel...

• So...Lets break this down....First you said: ...

  Thread: Idiots (5 Replies, 1,723 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  So...Lets break this down....First you said:
  
  "My posts on here have 20k+ views. You know why? Because my work is ****ing good."
  
  So what you are saying here is...every time you get a view it's...

• Little Wood Box

  Thread: Little Wood Box (4 Replies, 1,724 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  (Vs)
  In a little wood box
  lies her greatest treasure
  A priceless gem
  it's worth can't be measured
  
  (Vs)
  In a little wood box
  There's a pair of shoes
  A special gift

• I'm an old fogey and not real big on rap, but...

  Thread: L.I.E. Cocaine And Pain Freestyle (1 Replies, 2,890 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  I'm an old fogey and not real big on rap, but this was some good stuff with some crafty wording. Nice work.

• Nice!! It reads more like a poem, but a darn good...

  Thread: You (3 Replies, 1,348 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Nice!! It reads more like a poem, but a darn good one. Profound words in here and good insight. Very nice Eccer, very nice

• I hope you don't write lyrics. Calling people...

  Thread: Idiots (5 Replies, 1,723 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  I hope you don't write lyrics. Calling people idiots for probably an honest mistake of not seeing the link, is a sure fire way of not getting anyone to read your work. I know I wouldn't, and I won't....

• It's A Granny

  Thread: It's A Granny (5 Replies, 1,537 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  I've got behind her waaay too many times. Had to write about her just for fun.
  P.S. This a true story except for the curb pass and going to work part...the finger was true also.
  
  
  (Vs)
  I can...

• Thanks Doug, I am doing a second version to this...

  Thread: Moving Pictures (4 Replies, 1,629 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Thanks Doug, I am doing a second version to this to play on "Moving pictures" in a movie sense with reliving the snapshot.

• Moving Pictures

  Thread: Moving Pictures (4 Replies, 1,629 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  I've heard the expression "If these walls could talk"
  I say that they sometimes do
  Through all the pictures hanging along the stairs,
  the hallway and living room
  
  (Vs)
  Heard it said "A...

• A somber but striking lyric..Loved this addition...

  Thread: Life Sucks & Then We Die (1 Replies, 1,073 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  A somber but striking lyric..Loved this addition toward the end
  
  Life is full of misery and pain
  And it's over much too soon
  
  Kudos

• This pretty good true! I like it. Not much to...

  Thread: Watching time (3 Replies, 1,050 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  This pretty good true! I like it. Not much to suggest, maybe one thing..the last verse "Use my feet one and two" seems a lil awkward for some reason (imo) but with the right music it may be fine. I...

• Did I say "Kinda"? I meant "Definitely"...My...

  Thread: Wild West Jess (36 Replies, 10,553 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Did I say "Kinda"? I meant "Definitely"...My bad...typo...lol

• Did I say "Kinda"? I meant "Definitely"...My...

  Thread: Wild West Jess (36 Replies, 7,854 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Did I say "Kinda"? I meant "Definitely"...My bad...typo...lol

• Greenback

  Thread: Greenback (2 Replies, 1,285 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  The melody is sort of a Black Stone Cherry and Pink Floyd fusion.
  
  
  (Vs)
  He's searching rainbows but comes up empty
  on either side of the spectrums end
  The fountain of youth long ago went dry...

• I like what you're going for here and the tone of...

  Thread: Wrong Words (2 Replies, 1,157 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  I like what you're going for here and the tone of what you want to say is evident. I like the 1st verse opening, but the second verse sounds a little forced and choppy with the "zero" reference. I...

• Interesting and an enjoyable read. Although it...

  Thread: Chiasmus (3 Replies, 1,209 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  Interesting and an enjoyable read. Although it reads more like a poem. I have an extensive vocabulary (not tooting my own horn) and yet you still made me break out my dictionary!! Anyway, I enjoyed...

• This is not bad and has a good opening. I would...

  Thread: Loosing Control(possible title) (5 Replies, 1,412 Views) by LooknGlass

  
  

  This is not bad and has a good opening. I would however change the word "unstrengthning" It is not a real word or used in the English vocabulary. Maybe use "Weak and draining" or something in that...