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Thread: Meh. (0 Replies, 21,303 Views) by Olly West
Autumnal shifts in weather patterns
breathe new life into what's been a deadbeat year
boozing off pocket money
Top Cat's low grade gear burrows into vulnerable mindsets
never again
least til...
Thread: April (1 Replies, 1,913 Views) by Olly West
Every day I'm waiting
for someone who's got taste in
coffee and food
records and shoes
who tells me how she's feeling
talks about the world we live in
games will be a given
but no alarm bells...
Thread: Haze Pon Reflection (0 Replies, 5,568 Views) by Olly West
Infatuated with ideas that never make it past a mention
inundated with fears that smear progression
tension stiffens my battle hardened bones
I don't walk the way I used to
or get loose to...
Thread: Anterior Cruciate Ligament (1 Replies, 5,527 Views) by Olly West
Through on goal I was
Bursting through on goal
Stretching
Extending
Bending for the ball
Fell on the ground I did
Collapsed straight down to the ground
Snapped
Cracked
Tapped out
Thread: Great Pain (0 Replies, 1,406 Views) by Olly West
Great pain sticks to your heart
It won’t let you pass your past
Yet your laugh,
It lights up a room when we are sat in the dark
Makes me wonder how my life seems so hard
And I just want to tell...
Thread: Loose Lipped L-Kid (3 Replies, 5,987 Views) by Olly West
Teshka & Eccer....
Thank you both for your lovely comments. It really is so nice to find that people enjoy something that I've written.
Eccer, you are right it is a bit of a puzzle. Glad you...
Thread: Hues of Us (2 Replies, 5,854 Views) by Olly West
Hi Eccer.
Thank you for your kind words about the work I submitted previously.
As Teshka said... I would love to be able to read this as a Norwegian speaker. The translation maybe makes it a...
Thread: Loose Lipped L-Kid (3 Replies, 5,987 Views) by Olly West
You lay lines in the path of the intruders
pricked ears saviour every sour drop
you hold your head high and brush me off smoother
than my touch that's lingered enough to rot
You've a legion of...
Thread: Dalston Night Tale (7 Replies, 7,011 Views) by Olly West
Thank you both for your feedback!
Technist, a definition of jaundice for you: a medical condition with yellowing of the skin or whites of the eyes.
Eccer...I agree, a comma does work well...
Thread: Dalston Night Tale (7 Replies, 7,011 Views) by Olly West
Aw thanks Teshka!
I have been checking in and hoping that somebody might pass comment on it. Glad you enjoyed.
Would love to hear some more feedback!
Thread: Dalston Night Tale (7 Replies, 7,011 Views) by Olly West
Jaundice cheeked and a bath salt reek
you met me in the heart of Dalston
scraggly haired
a hollow despair
covered the night over there in Dalston
Your disregard for honesty pumped blood...