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Thread: My Phantoms (3 Replies, 1,776 Views) by SljSlj
A lyric about drugs and addiction.
MY PHANTOMS
Verse 1
The most haunting phantom
Is not made of ectoplasm
Just lots of drugs and cheap rum
The real horror...is yet to come
Thread: All Or Nothing (3 Replies, 1,880 Views) by SljSlj
Thank you both very much. I'm well aware that my style is different and not for everyone, but you seem to have enjoyed it enough. If you'd like, you can check out my entire collection of lyrics (the...
Thread: All Or Nothing (3 Replies, 1,880 Views) by SljSlj
ALL OR NOTHING
I've been here several times before
Several hundred in my mind
Every time I leave this hellish place behind
In the glow of my taillights
It is soon iluminated again
Ten-fold,...
Thread: This Damaged Soul (2 Replies, 2,293 Views) by SljSlj
I've no particular genre in mind. I'm partial to metal (specifically prog metal), so I'll probably do something that fits into that genre if I ever record this one.
Thank you for your kind words,...
Thread: This Damaged Soul (2 Replies, 2,293 Views) by SljSlj
THIS DAMAGED SOUL
This damaged soul
Makes peace null and void
Who do we blame?
The soul itself?
Or the world in which we live?
There is no end to violence
Not until the world is silenced
Thread: Untitled (0 Replies, 1,398 Views) by SljSlj
Living a life of a dead sort
Knowing if fate asks, I've no retort
'Cause these secrets I'll never tell
I'll take 'em with me, even if that means taking 'em to hell
Dieing a death a lively sort...
Thread: God? (3 Replies, 2,277 Views) by SljSlj
Thank you. "Non-cliche and clever" are among the best compliments a poet can recieve, so I appreciate it.
I have plenty of lyrics and poems that talk of the non-existance of God (or gods)....
Thread: Set On Fire (3 Replies, 1,659 Views) by SljSlj
man... I think....
Thank you. People give me alot of reviews on other sites saying it's too unoriginal and cliched. Of course, that doesn't bother me much... I like it and that's really all that...
Thread: First song in months I had a block please comment (5 Replies, 1,923 Views) by SljSlj
Pretty good. I'm not feeling the flow, but it may just be the way I'm reading it... know what I mean?
But I like the story itself. Seems like you're saying you're torn between trying to make a...
Thread: all They want is War (2 Replies, 1,440 Views) by SljSlj
I hear a Dragonforce type sound, though much heavier, when I read this. Sorry if I'm way off.
I have nothing constructive to say about it, but I just wanna say that I enjoyed it, and would love to...
Thread: God? (3 Replies, 2,277 Views) by SljSlj
GOD?
There's something very wrong
This world ain't what it used to be
Something I can feel, but I cannot see
Is it God?
Is time fast or slow?
Will we ever know?
Or will we die before we...
Thread: Door (0 Replies, 1,468 Views) by SljSlj
DOOR
God, my head hurts so bad
But not as much as my soul
I'm heading down a dark corridor
At the end I see a dead-end, but...
Is that a door?
And sometimes I lose my feet
Thread: Set On Fire (3 Replies, 1,659 Views) by SljSlj
Blackened thrash metal.
SET ON FIRE
Whether you're the disease or the diseased
Whether you're the bringer of death or the deceased
Whether you're the lie or the liar
Tonight, your soul will...
Thread: What Is Reality? (0 Replies, 1,217 Views) by SljSlj
WHAT IS REALITY?
Everything around me
Is this reality?
I can't accept that this all
Life has to offer
Maybe it's just insanity
But I question
What is reality?
Thread: Arachnoid / Faux Serenity (0 Replies, 1,207 Views) by SljSlj
ARACHNOID / FAUX SERENITY
Arachnoid
Hiding in the void
Between two realities
In your faux
Serenity
Little boy
Hiding with your toys
Thread: I Say (0 Replies, 1,272 Views) by SljSlj
I SAY
Hating, when anyone else would love
And I'm fading, out of the minds of everyone
They've all had enough
I say I'm growing
Say I'm doing fine
I say I'm happy
Say my head's in line
Thread: I Thought... (0 Replies, 1,685 Views) by SljSlj
I THOUGHT...
I thought when I found the meaning of life
I’d know the next step I’d have to take
But in this universe, there’s no escape
In the mirror, always redundancy
Fitting perfectly in...
Thread: You Suck (0 Replies, 1,121 Views) by SljSlj
One I wrote almost a year ago that I realized I hadn't yet posted here. Enjoy.
YOU SUCK
You suck
You bit a chunk from my leg
Apologized to my face
Before gnawing off my arm
Your words
Thread: I Say (2 Replies, 1,488 Views) by SljSlj
Thanks. You're not the first person to imply that it's too short, assuming that's what you mean by "I'd love to see you expand on this.", but I intended for it to be short and have no plans of adding...
Thread: I Say (2 Replies, 1,488 Views) by SljSlj
I SAY
Hating, when anyone else would love
And I'm fading, out of the minds of everyone
They've all had enough
I say I'm growing
Say I'm doing fine
I say I'm happy
Say my head's in line
Thread: By Your Own Tongue (0 Replies, 1,239 Views) by SljSlj
Okay, got a new one for ya. This one was inspired by Lamb Of God's song, Omerta, and just the overall concept of omertà.
BY YOUR OWN TONGUE
You are nothing but tongue
Nothing at all when your...
Thread: Nibiru (4 Replies, 1,804 Views) by SljSlj
I'm thinking doom metal, like Triptykon or Electric Wizard, but I'm not really sure yet, I might make it a dark hard rock kind of thing.
Thread: Nibiru (4 Replies, 1,804 Views) by SljSlj
This is a song about a planet some believe exists just beyond our solar system called Nibiru, or sometimes Planet X, something I'm very interested in. It is supposedly four times the size of Jupiter...
Thread: From The Inside Out (Now) (1 Replies, 2,044 Views) by SljSlj
FROM THE INSIDE OUT (NOW)
I thought I cut problem at the root
But every day, another black leaf
I'll take one more sip of pesticide
And leave the garden's fate
For mother earth to decide
...
Thread: Hail-Oh (0 Replies, 1,466 Views) by SljSlj
My second attempt at black metal lyric, more like black hard rock, but w/e, just trying something new. It doesn't read exactly way I sing it, so some parts my seem not to flow well when actually they...
Thread: By Your Own Tongue (0 Replies, 1,650 Views) by SljSlj
BY YOUR OWN TONGUE
You are nothing but tongue
Nothing at all when your throat is slit
You will not be missed
For a life like yours has barely begun
Ignore the reaper
Running your mouth
The...
Thread: Those Who Look To Heaven Burn In Hell (0 Replies, 1,627 Views) by SljSlj
This is my first attempt at black metal. I based it off my experiences and research in spiritual satanism. I do not mean offend anyone with this and I apologize if I do.
THOSE WHO LOOK TO HEAVEN...
Thread: Red And Black (2 Replies, 1,958 Views) by SljSlj
Well, thank you. This one is very personal to me, so it's very flattering that you enjoyed it so much. I get better with each lyric I write, so please keep checking back for my new stuff.
Thanks.
Thread: The Picture On The Wall (0 Replies, 2,421 Views) by SljSlj
THE PICTURE ON THE WALL
The picture on the wall is frightening
But I can't seem to look away
It causes me to do things I'd never do
The picture on the wall
The picture on the wall
I wanna...
Thread: Red And Black (2 Replies, 1,958 Views) by SljSlj
RED AND BLACK
There's no morality
In addiction
Nothing but insanity
And internal friction
I can never be afraid
That I might die
Not when every single day
Thread: Red And Black (0 Replies, 1,512 Views) by SljSlj
RED AND BLACK
There's no morality
In addiction
Nothing but insanity
And internal friction
I can never be afraid
That I might die
Not when every single day
Thread: Let's Just Get This Over With (working title) (0 Replies, 2,212 Views) by SljSlj
LET'S JUST GET THIS OVER WITH (working title)
I just wanna start over
Because over and over
I lost myself
No four-leaf clover
When Summer's over
I lost my purpose
Thread: Worth Living (0 Replies, 1,658 Views) by SljSlj
WORTH LIVING
Desire
To destroy yourself
A fire
You keep feeding
You're a liar
Don't tell me your okay
Forgive yourself
Thread: The Fight For Freedom (0 Replies, 1,510 Views) by SljSlj
THE FIGHT FOR FREEDOM
I'm only looking to stay true
To myself
I'm only looking to keep it real
For myself
There is no one else
A million paths converge
I feel it in my head
Thread: Destruct / Positive Negatives (0 Replies, 1,483 Views) by SljSlj
DESTRUCT / POSITIVE NEGATIVES
All these birds flying at me
Looking to peck out my brain
I can't, why can't I wave them away?
I just let them eat me a little longer
Until...
I destruct
Thread: Keep Your Eyes On The Sky (working title) (2 Replies, 2,427 Views) by SljSlj
Sorry I didn't reply right away... I had alot going on over the course of the past week. I'm so happy you enjoyed it! This is one my favorite things I've written. I'll keep 'em coming just as long as...
Thread: Deconstruction (0 Replies, 1,274 Views) by SljSlj
This is about me getting help (therapy) with my drug addiction and suicidal depression.
DECONSTRUCTION
Take it down
A lifetime spent building
Walls that, quite honestly, aren't stable...
Thread: Keep Your Eyes On The Sky (working title) (2 Replies, 2,427 Views) by SljSlj
The message of this is hard to explain, but maybe it's one that is better left to the reader to decipher. Btw it's a poem, not a lyric.
SUN EXITS SKY
Sun exits sky
But there's still light...
Thread: Borrow Your Pain (0 Replies, 1,260 Views) by SljSlj
BORROW YOUR PAIN
I'd like to borrow your pain
Just for a little while
I'd like to borrow your pain
Cause it hurts me less this way
I just wanna see you smile
For just a little while
Thread: Broken Mirror (Fake It 'Till I Make It) (0 Replies, 1,360 Views) by SljSlj
BROKEN MIRROR (FAKE IT UNTIL I MAKE IT)
Reflection in a broken mirror
Don't you look at me that way
I know just where I'm lighting this fire
Under my ***, under my soul
And don't tell me it's...
Thread: New (0 Replies, 1,263 Views) by SljSlj
NEW
There's gotta be two sides to this
I'll find the point where it splits
The point where I split in two
Don't think I know what I want
But i don't think I want to know
I'd give anything...
Thread: Out Of The Into (0 Replies, 1,236 Views) by SljSlj
OUT OF THE INTO
How much more can I take?
Before I'm over-riden by hate
And you commit suicide by my hand
Maybe we weren't meant to be
Why should I stick around and see?
God, I wish I could...
Thread: One pill (0 Replies, 1,332 Views) by SljSlj
ONE PILL
I’m losing myself to my decisions
Only one thing can give me another second to breathe
Unfortunately, I must drown at this point
But I might as well go into the water
With my head...
Thread: Here's my first song, what do you think? (4 Replies, 1,777 Views) by SljSlj
I've definitely read worse things than this, but it could be alot better.
It's typical for beginners to try to rhyme every line, something that's not at all necessary. Overuse of rhyme, to me,...
Thread: Lie, Then Die (2 Replies, 1,396 Views) by SljSlj
Thank you very much.
Thread: Hurts Like Nothing (1 Replies, 1,536 Views) by SljSlj
This is one I wrote some time in the first half of last year, I believe. I wrote this because after my gf broke up with me, she would not even acknowledge me and naturally, that made me upset....
Thread: Holy? (0 Replies, 1,390 Views) by SljSlj
HOLY?
Holy arsenal
Jesus as a weapon
It's phemonenal
The way they can take
This beautiful concept
And make it a deathtrap
Sympathy they've felt
Thread: Lie, Then Die (2 Replies, 1,396 Views) by SljSlj
These are not yet dark times
But rather time for preparation
Getting ready for devastation
And once we lied, we lied
To try to hide the horns creeping in
As they poked barely through the skin...
Thread: Eight-Thousand Hours Sleep... A Blissful Coma (1 Replies, 1,860 Views) by SljSlj
I'd like to here what y'all think of this, please. I just haven't heard enough feedback across the web on this one as I would like.
Thread: The Light Seeping Through The Cracks, Pt. 1 and 2 (9 Replies, 2,214 Views) by SljSlj
Well, it will be a bit better by the time the album is finished 'cause we talk often about what we could do to make it better and have made about half a dozen minor changes, and one big one (the...