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Thread: "You live with the world" (3 Replies, 3,553 Views) by MissMay3
Is it THAT bad? What's missing? Any tips ideas on how to make it better???
Thread: "You live with the world" (3 Replies, 3,553 Views) by MissMay3
I'd appriciate all feedbacks...both good and bad,so please help me get better!!
Thread: Looking for a companion/partner (0 Replies, 12,482 Views) by MissMay3
Hi, Im a lyrecist. Some of my lyrics you can find here under the "review" thread.
Mostley I write countrey og pop ballads. My lyrics are not the young "justin bieber" pop kinda stuff.
I'm looking...
Thread: "You live with the world" (3 Replies, 3,553 Views) by MissMay3
Hi you guys! I've been working on this one for a while,but need some feedback.
Hope you'll find the time to give me some...
Thanks!!!
INTRO/CHORUS
When I'm gone
you'll see tomorrow ...
Thread: Nashville Love Song (3 Replies, 2,550 Views) by MissMay3
Great song!!!!
Thread: Sister (2/9/14) (13 Replies, 3,881 Views) by MissMay3
I like it. Sounds country-ish to me?!? Very sad story wich you tell with good writing. It touched me and made me wanna hear the whole story!!!
Thread: Taking All The Blame (2 Replies, 1,504 Views) by MissMay3
Good lyrics! Good story! You tell it well...
Thread: This Song (4 Replies, 2,752 Views) by MissMay3
Great song. I like how you write and get your message through.
Thread: Missin' life (4 Replies, 1,232 Views) by MissMay3
Wow...thank you guys! I'm overwhelmed... Thank you for taking the time to give me the feedback...much appriciated!
Thread: Missin' life (4 Replies, 1,232 Views) by MissMay3
Hi,this is a draft. It needs a whole lot more work,and I hope you guys will help me with your advice!
MISSIN' LIFE
To often we rush trough the day
Can't get to tomorrow soon enough
To...
Thread: Musical song...I think?!?! (2 Replies, 1,080 Views) by MissMay3
I've heard it a lot of times,mostley song by tenors...last time was in a concert where there was a lot of music from Les Miserable,but also a few other songs sung by a tenor.
Thread: Live my dream (9 Replies, 2,364 Views) by MissMay3
Thank you guys! I kinda feel that the old one is closer to my heart and the new one is much more technical correct.
Well I'll keep them both, and see what happens!
Thanks again for taking the...
Thread: Starstruck (1 Replies, 839 Views) by MissMay3
Yeay! This song somehow made me smile! A story told by a man that knows who he is andnot afraid of admitting it...even though everyone ales might think he's crazy:) Good story! When it comes to...
Thread: Live my dream (9 Replies, 2,364 Views) by MissMay3
Thanks Aristotle Graham...well,I was not aiming for Pointer Sisters/Slowhand, but actually more country. I really appreciate your review and hope you'll want to continue reviewing my stuff :) Thanks!
Thread: Musical song...I think?!?! (2 Replies, 1,080 Views) by MissMay3
Hi, I'm going crazy here trying to find out wich song this is...I thought it was Les Miserable,but I can't find it i connection to that musical. I am not at all sure this is a musical song,but it...
Thread: Every Woman Needs a Few Good Men (5 Replies, 1,937 Views) by MissMay3
WOW! But first WELCOME to the group. I hope you'll like it here and that you'll find it helpfull. The first verse and the chorus. Loved it! I fell right in to the story. Could vividly see the story...
Thread: Live my dream (9 Replies, 2,364 Views) by MissMay3
Hey guys! I picked up the first song I posted here and reviewed it...what's best the old or the new version?
OLD:
Sitting here thinking about it...again
been six months since I decided
to give...
Thread: Shake Hands With The Devil (7 Replies, 2,800 Views) by MissMay3
You've found the words you need to express something with few words! Great!
Thread: Lord stay out of my way (part 2) (6 Replies, 2,526 Views) by MissMay3
As always! Love it! Maybe a bit "sad" topic,but it toutched me. And this is so true...who really wins a fight?
Thread: Hi guys...its been almost a year since I last posted a song... (1 Replies, 777 Views) by MissMay3
Hi! Because of personal problems I hav'nt been writing or posting any songs...I'm just now starting to get the inspiration back!
Im now struggeling a song...I'll post what I've got,and you guys tell...
Thread: Don't Forget To Laugh (3 Replies, 1,748 Views) by MissMay3
"Verse 1
Remember when we first met?
You tripped on the sprinklers
I caught you before you fell
For my reward you got me soaking wet
Remember that"
I love it!!! Great start. I want to hear...
Thread: Need help... (4 Replies, 1,185 Views) by MissMay3
What this person meant is that We live with the world and when we die,the world goes on,so that's why its not the world living with us. Like We go on and the world dies.
Did I explain that in a bad...
Thread: Need help... (4 Replies, 1,185 Views) by MissMay3
Hey you guys!
Someone close to me,who is in there last days of life told me something in Norwegian,that I really thin would make a good song,but I'm struggling to translate it to good English....
Thread: Mysteries girl (4 Replies, 1,116 Views) by MissMay3
Hi guys! Doug...yes its MissMay from Norway and thank you!
Peter,I'm so glad you picked up on that,cause thats what I imagened it to be too....Thanks!!!
And Amary...I really dont know what you are...
Thread: Mysteries girl (4 Replies, 1,116 Views) by MissMay3
Hello...again. Its been a long time since the last time I posted a song here. But now I'm back in writing mode :) ,and would love it if you would give me advice,tips,reviews on my second "public"...
Thread: I just wrote this, it's not really a song yet but it's a start. (4 Replies, 1,166 Views) by MissMay3
Hi. I like the story. If you wanna make it a song,you light wanna split into verses and choures... Looking forward to the next steps! By the way Welcome here,I'm farley new myself...it's a great...
Thread: Better When We Share (7 Replies, 3,082 Views) by MissMay3
Amazing writing! This song is really good!! Needs no more work, hit potensial!!! Thanx for sharing
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
Hi Doug! Yah,I am VERY aware of that,and thinking about posting another song is even more nerve wreaking than the first... I know that not every song can be "a hit",but I hope that the feedback in...
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
Okey...do you think something like this would work??
Gloriana - Turn my world around
Sara Evans - need to be next to you
Kenny Chesney - dreams
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
OMG that would be great! In my head its kinda country meets pop.
Thread: All I Need (4 Replies, 1,497 Views) by MissMay3
Wow!!! That song can T A L K!!! It hit me straight in the heart. First verse and choures is damn right perfect...needs no more worke. The second verse is also good,maybe some adjustments to the last...
Thread: Escape the Truth (7 Replies, 3,040 Views) by MissMay3
Love the chorus. For me this is not usually the kind of lyricks that get stuck in my head...but that does not meen its no good...thats just me
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
Well, you guys, now I feel like I'm getting closer and closer to "finishing" this song...
There is still a few words/lines I feel like I'm stumbling over...but I'm not telling you...I'll put you...
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
Thanx! I'm really looking for a text that hit people in their hearts and minds. Something that they can make their own...
Yes,I came up with that line,but if it has been used before I really don't...
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
Thank you so much! If you read what I have written to amaryn that also goes for you. Thank you soooo much for taking the time not to just read my song,but also to taking time to give me feedback......
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
Thank you,amaryn! Know its my song,but as its my first one and I feel like I'm doing things I don't know how to do...if you know what I mean??!! Its VERY MUCH appreciated all the feed back I can get....
Thread: New lyricist looking for a companion (1 Replies, 6,219 Views) by MissMay3
Hi, I have always been writing poems and stuff but never done more than "that". Now I want to see how far I can take it but as I feel this can be a "lonely" business, it would be great to have a...
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
Well I've been working on the chores. Done some changes...what do you think? Better/worse/no progress???
Myself,I'm not completly satesfyed with the 3rd line...it may work with the right music,but I...
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
Thank you,guys! Means a whole lot to me...
I like the suggestion on the Ch, trueperfectionisimperfect. Thanx! The spelling I'm not focusing on before the final draft...so bare with me on that on ;)...
Thread: Hi, I'm new here! MissMay3 (3 Replies, 2,333 Views) by MissMay3
I'm a 35 year old women from Norway. I have always written poems and songs. I have always kept this dream of being a songwriter a well kept secret from everyone. But I'm now in a place in my life...
Thread: Erik Bye / Marit Larsen - Vår Beste Dag (Norwegian) (1 Replies, 33,189 Views) by MissMay3
Hi, I've tried me best to translate the song for you. I have not adjusted the translation so it fits with the melody. This is just an translation for you to understand what they are singing about....
Thread: Talk to me baby (9 Replies, 1,850 Views) by MissMay3
Good lyricks. I think you get the power in the words out. I would split it into vers and ch. But not all songs are in that frame. Good on😊
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
First of all; Thank you guys for those amazingly kind and inspiring words. I don't think you'll ever know how much it means to me. I've experienced that its nerve wreaking putting "it" out there for...
Thread: First draft of my very first song, need review please (24 Replies, 4,859 Views) by MissMay3
Hi, first of all...be gentle. This is my very first time letting anyone ales read what I write. I have been writing all my life,but never before texts intended to become a song. This is a well hidden...