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Thread: Terror Inside (2 Replies, 2,441 Views) by theUsed13
yeah i just posted some new sets recently too. i liked it, it wasnt too complicated and the point was easily understood. chorus was my fav. part
Thread: Jess (0 Replies, 1,177 Views) by theUsed13
song i wrote about a friend of mine.
someday we'll change the world
re shape the face of the earth
its people like you that change lives
people like you, that could save lives
you make it...
Thread: Caged (0 Replies, 1,059 Views) by theUsed13
well i took a break from writing for a while.. so i just picked it back up. what do you think?
locked inside my cage everyday
theres no doors, no windows i guess ill stay
when your locked inside...
Thread: Listen Up (1 Replies, 1,987 Views) by theUsed13
i think im almost done
my tanks on empty everyone
thats what you heard from me
is it what, your gonna believe
[chorus]
well what he says its gotta be true
same old stuff, nothing new
thats...
Thread: In Me (0 Replies, 1,877 Views) by theUsed13
i took a break from writing for a lil while working more on righting bass lines. but the other night i wrote four songs so im posting them all.
In Me
i dont see the things you do
i dont here...
Thread: Song Lyrics (6 Replies, 5,569 Views) by theUsed13
yeah.. i agree ^
Thread: Breakdown (1 Replies, 2,170 Views) by theUsed13
what did i do to deserve you
when i didnt do anything wrong
where were you, then?
why is it i cant do,
anything unless you tell me to
its getting on my nerves, now
[chorus]
i think im...
Thread: Alright (2 Replies, 2,387 Views) by theUsed13
pretty much a rough draft that i just thought of.
i dont know if i wanna be with you
im not sure if i get what to do
guess im nervous at the thought of,
doing it all, alright
are you...
Thread: Lone Star (4 Replies, 3,089 Views) by theUsed13
it was good but i was thinkin it was a little short. maybe repeat the chorus again, or write another verse. over all i liked it tho.
Thread: Living (2 Replies, 2,523 Views) by theUsed13
short one, but it gets the point across. just wrote it in about 5 minutes so its a rough draft
i cant believe you had to leave like that
i asked if, you could stay and chat
you told me you, were...
Thread: Phat Lyrics (7 Replies, 8,807 Views) by theUsed13
yeah i dont like chris brown at all, i hate rap entirely so i can diss him all i want. and we dont want ur damn chris brown lyrics up here, those are for different forums and different sites these...
Thread: Scream & Burn (3 Replies, 2,198 Views) by theUsed13
good song, i liked it. dont worry about stuff being too, "dark." it just shows more aggression and emotion and it comes out better.
Thread: Heres Some a My Rhymes (6 Replies, 2,053 Views) by theUsed13
it was OK, some suggestions; finish thoughts dont just end them, also crew...
'by ya stupid crew,
i yell "dont come back or i beat yo crew to!" '
u dont have to say crew again there, you can...
Thread: Phat Lyrics (7 Replies, 8,807 Views) by theUsed13
i completely agree with Sewn Up, you just had to say all that right... especially when you didn't have your own stuff to back it up... just leave the site if your gonna be like that, we dont wanna...
Thread: Clear Up (2 Replies, 2,340 Views) by theUsed13
jumps around a LOT, first verse and chorus are relli fast, then everything slows down but the chorus is still fast. if you read it the way its suppose to be read it sounds kool.. otherwise just look...
Thread: Point Blank (2 Replies, 3,046 Views) by theUsed13
oh nothing new... just a song about some chick, tell me wut you think.
at point blank, im staring down
down the barrel of,
none of the above
after considering
things i thought you would say...
Thread: Out Cold (1 Replies, 2,397 Views) by theUsed13
more recent song. kind of deep, lots of profanity but i edited it, (yes i slipped an F bomb in there :-o) not a life story... so dont go feeling sorry for me lol.
sit back, wait to fall...
Thread: Sight (2 Replies, 2,567 Views) by theUsed13
haha yep, not wut u might think tho... its more towards the left than bush.
Thread: Sight (2 Replies, 2,567 Views) by theUsed13
one of my older songs, pretty short as well. it does start off with the chorus, just so no one gets confused.
[chorus]
hold me back this is not a dream
what happend to our world so free
are...
Thread: Paranoia (2 Replies, 2,248 Views) by theUsed13
wow i liked it a lot. the first verse relli grabbbed me right away. also, thanks for the comments u left on mine. im into a lot of music.. lots of emo stuff like the starting line, thursday, and the...
Thread: Dark and Gray (1 Replies, 2,502 Views) by theUsed13
days are dark, and gray
but i dont care what they say
i dont know why its over, so fast
but will you remember this time
im angry but im fine
i never fixed your problems
im sorry in the end
...
Thread: Painkillers (1 Replies, 2,260 Views) by theUsed13
second song ive ever written. pretty slow, reads how its written with the pauses in between line breaks
I ask,
nothing more from you when you're gone
you have shown me all i need to know
one...
Thread: Worthless (1 Replies, 2,172 Views) by theUsed13
here are some lyrics i just wrote recently, rate on a scale 1-10, 10 being highest. thanks
I don't know where I seem to be
I fit in, but that isnt me
i want to be different, and i want to be...