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• "Dysutopia" Please Comment!

  Thread: "Dysutopia" Please Comment! (0 Replies, 1,419 Views) by Essen

  
  

  I've written these lyrics for my band. This will be put in a sort of dark, Katatonia-ish setting.
  Please tell me what you think! This forum is way too quiet!
  
  
  Cracks within
  the deep scaring
  A...

• The Snag (Prog Metal) Please comment!

  Thread: The Snag (Prog Metal) Please comment! (0 Replies, 1,521 Views) by Essen

  
  

  These lyrics are written for 3/4, some parts are in 7/8 etc., so it does not follow the usual patterns.
  I note that the song would also work as an instrumental, so the lyrics are less important.
  ...

• This reminds me of The Sound of Muzak by...

  Thread: Happily Infected (Progressive rock) (1 Replies, 830 Views) by Essen

  
  

  This reminds me of The Sound of Muzak by Porcupine Tree! You've got a lot of good material, however, I feel like the "point" is a bit absent. Maybe you should focus a bit more on what you really...

• Very well written, however, I feel it needs some...

  Thread: please tell me wat u think of my lyrics (5 Replies, 1,985 Views) by Essen

  
  

  Very well written, however, I feel it needs some sort of "conclusion" or something, like a part where you perhaps use irony, and critize the core of the matter. I'm not completely sure how to explain...

• I like it, and I don't think it's short, I have...

  Thread: What do you all think, honestly? (1 Replies, 1,191 Views) by Essen

  
  

  I like it, and I don't think it's short, I have the opposite problem! The message get across fine too.

• World of Fire

  Thread: World of Fire (1 Replies, 1,658 Views) by Essen

  
  

  Been working on this for some time now, and I feel it's pretty mutch finished. Any feedback would be great!
  
  Take from another
  leach of eachother
  in this endless paradise
  the garden of eden
  is...

• I play bass in a prog-rock/metal band, I also...

  Thread: What musical instruments do you play? (73 Replies, 74,307 Views) by Essen

  
  

  I play bass in a prog-rock/metal band, I also know some guitar and ukulele though.

• My favorites are Danny Carey (Tool) Tim "Herb"...

  Thread: World's best drummer! (44 Replies, 70,516 Views) by Essen

  
  

  My favorites are
  Danny Carey (Tool)
  Tim "Herb" Alexander (Primus)
  and Gavin Harrison (Porcupine Tree)

• Omission

  Thread: Omission (0 Replies, 1,092 Views) by Essen

  
  

  Very Tool style metal song, I've used a lot of metaphores, but still, some parts are a lot more clear.
  
  Please tell me what you think!
  
  
  
  Verse:
  monolouge in session
  pray tonight, time goes...

• White Noice

  Thread: White Noice (0 Replies, 1,031 Views) by Essen

  
  

  Wrote this in half an hour, so it's not really finished. The lyrics are open for interpretation.
  Please comment!
  
  Verse:
  take me by the hand
  prove faithful to me
  eat your way through
  and I'll...

• Snowscape

  Thread: Snowscape (0 Replies, 1,077 Views) by Essen

  
  

  I've decided to sort of get my most depressive lyrics out of my head, and on paper, so that maybe I can start making a bit more cheerful lyrics. Here's of them, called Snowscape. Progressive rock/...

• New song: The Sea of Distant Memories

  Thread: New song: The Sea of Distant Memories (0 Replies, 1,119 Views) by Essen

  
  

  My piano player just handed me the title, and asked me to write the lyrics for it. It's supposed to be a Muse-ish pianbased song, that changes rythm and melodi several times thoughout, somewhat like...