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Thread: Wolf + Hollow (Comments are appreciated) (0 Replies, 1,115 Views) by Klukoklai
Wolf + Hollow
No
I leave
You sleep
You're awake
You drink
You feed
You go to bed
and rest your head upon your legs
Thread: First Song Ever - constructive criticism please :) (20 Replies, 3,256 Views) by Klukoklai
noone does it.. dont worry much about that
Thread: You and Me, Stuck (5 Replies, 1,285 Views) by Klukoklai
turn
burn
earn
discern
return
learn... i hope you understand what I'm getting at ;)
what is it about? i dont get it :P
Thread: review my song (5 Replies, 3,242 Views) by Klukoklai
amazing.. i think you are very very talented... cant seem to find a favorite line :P
I know it does not matter or anything, but i think you could try and improve your grammar skills
Thread: New Writer Here, Feedback please! (11 Replies, 3,554 Views) by Klukoklai
Dreams
On the edge of yourself and you can’t step over
With a pinch and a slap its back to being sober
Ohhh, high up in the clouds
Over the ocean, at night
i liked that.... is this a happy...
Thread: Waiting for good things to come (2 Replies, 1,809 Views) by Klukoklai
Hello, its been a while since i posted something here.. Hope you will enjoy this:
slowly
slowly
Im waiting for
good things
Thread: Making lyrics (14 Replies, 5,081 Views) by Klukoklai
it is just a thought,
Thread: Making lyrics (14 Replies, 5,081 Views) by Klukoklai
where is the personality when someone write the lyrics for a completely unknown band? just a thought
Thread: Through which jagged teeth show (4 Replies, 1,510 Views) by Klukoklai
nothing negative about my reply, I liked it.. keep it comming
Thread: Hating You Completes Me (5 Replies, 2,502 Views) by Klukoklai
is this song about some bully? in that case, be a man and let it go :P
Thread: Through which jagged teeth show (4 Replies, 1,510 Views) by Klukoklai
wow, you used the word pastel
Thread: Starting A Band (79 Replies, 11,500 Views) by Klukoklai
aren't you the guy who started the topic?
Thread: I want to rape your babies (14 Replies, 4,854 Views) by Klukoklai
Hm, congratulations! in my eyes this is absolutely one of your better songs! rock on!
Thread: Corinthian (I beg you to comment) (35 Replies, 5,138 Views) by Klukoklai
thank you guys!
Thread: MOST DAY"S tell me what u think (39 Replies, 4,108 Views) by Klukoklai
I like your lyric but I think you could shorten down some of the lines (some are telling little with many words)
e.g.
"i still keep the pictures of you and me on the wall"
I still keep our picture...
Thread: Dark Night Poem (4 Replies, 4,484 Views) by Klukoklai
whats that supposed to mean?
Thread: Starting A Band (79 Replies, 11,500 Views) by Klukoklai
hmmm.. I'm not sure if I have time for this...
however ;) ....
-Have played guitar for three years, I can improvise on the whole guitar neck..
I know all the different modes.. Dorian, Lydian......
Thread: Dark Night Poem (4 Replies, 4,484 Views) by Klukoklai
The point of this poem is not to describe mutilation or some stuff like that, but disrespect, hate and scorn.. hehe my English vocabulary when talking about emotions are quite limited...
btw.....
Thread: Starting A Band (79 Replies, 11,500 Views) by Klukoklai
what you mean?? we record a demo and you get to listen to it to decide who is the best? this start to sound more like competition than a band...
Thread: Εphialtes (6 Replies, 2,266 Views) by Klukoklai
luckily spelling mistakes woun't do much difference when performing a song.
Thread: Jesus Lives (6 Replies, 3,252 Views) by Klukoklai
same here
Thread: Sever It At The Neck (2 Replies, 1,249 Views) by Klukoklai
good work.. semi-good metaphors.. thumbs up!
Thread: Εphialtes (6 Replies, 2,266 Views) by Klukoklai
Hmmmm.. this is the same as all your other songs (no offense). You said you wanted to write scary music?
Check out these lyrics:
knives out
street spirit
we suck young blood
myxomatosis...
Thread: Day (2 Replies, 1,186 Views) by Klukoklai
awh! thanks so much! This is my acoustic song.. gonne sound something like Lou Reeds "walk on the wild side"..
Thread: Jesus Lives (6 Replies, 3,252 Views) by Klukoklai
not that it got to do with anything... but are you a christian? From reading the lyric I didn't think so, but now I'm not sure.
Thread: Starting A Band (79 Replies, 11,500 Views) by Klukoklai
hahaha good grief.. is this the x factors or something? ;)
Thread: Jesus Lives (6 Replies, 3,252 Views) by Klukoklai
I like the idea of your song... if i were you i would have given it a bit of edit
Thread: Amoniac/Cars (10 Replies, 1,723 Views) by Klukoklai
Hello.. edit is just finished..
I'm glad I left
With the broken lights
I was short on lines
I left my words behind
The strings are tied
Still the sand has all ran out
no, "everythings...
Thread: Day (2 Replies, 1,186 Views) by Klukoklai
song named Day
crumpled up in, moisture gras.
eyelids pierced, by yellow stares.
rusty fence and, seasons past
listning in, to summergreen
Thread: Dark Night Poem (4 Replies, 4,484 Views) by Klukoklai
Hello. This is called "Dark Night Poem" its a poem (well daaa-a!) and I am not expecting anyone to like it..
Out in the dark.
From outside the cars.
Stiff, gray bodies
In dark cars.
Broken...
Thread: December (17 Replies, 3,402 Views) by Klukoklai
yes sure.. you are the man in charge, its good that you dont just blindly let someone else tell you what to do ;).. thanks for telling me you like me.. haha, please comment to my other song...
Thread: Better off that way (1 Replies, 1,396 Views) by Klukoklai
hi there.. its a OK lyric.. what I think you need to remind yourself of is that a song do not always need to rhyme all the time.. that's the only thing i have to rip on ;)
Thread: Corinthian (I beg you to comment) (35 Replies, 5,138 Views) by Klukoklai
Corinthian is also a character from the sandman (dream) series.. its the character I took a lot of inspiration from... this is sort of his story... the song might actually have something to do about...
Thread: Starting A Band (79 Replies, 11,500 Views) by Klukoklai
who is deciding who is able to join the band?
Thread: Corinthian (I beg you to comment) (35 Replies, 5,138 Views) by Klukoklai
thank you
Thread: December (17 Replies, 3,402 Views) by Klukoklai
hmm.. I didnt get all giddy if you want to know, dont worry... sorry for being picky, but this is a topic, not a private conversation... you do actually confuse people. well at least me.
Thread: Starting A Band (79 Replies, 11,500 Views) by Klukoklai
1. klukoklai
2. (gonna pm name)
3. Cardiff wales (and adress if thats important)
4. 17
5. guitar, lyrics, vocal, recording, synth.
I also do tabbing and that stuff.. what I mean by that, is...
Thread: Starting A Band (79 Replies, 11,500 Views) by Klukoklai
hahaha.. how are you going to get this to work? you come from all corners of the world..
Thread: December (17 Replies, 3,402 Views) by Klukoklai
thats a stupid thing to say.. make your own ideas.. be creative.. making a text takes time
Thread: December (17 Replies, 3,402 Views) by Klukoklai
Hmm, I enjoyed reading the first half page, then it started to bore me... Maybe you should shorten it down... up to you.. to me it looks like the first half page is the actual song and the other half...
Thread: one shot: please read and comment (11 Replies, 3,118 Views) by Klukoklai
hmm ok.. are you sure that that's what you call it? thanks for explain
Thread: Corinthian (I beg you to comment) (35 Replies, 5,138 Views) by Klukoklai
hmmm thank you very much for this, that really helps
Thread: Corinthian (I beg you to comment) (35 Replies, 5,138 Views) by Klukoklai
you should never expect everyone to like your text,
btw.. could someone help me by giving thoughts about the line "the rats all left my head/the rehab left me dead"?
thank you
Thread: Porno Baby (7 Replies, 12,398 Views) by Klukoklai
haha.. Im sure you did :P
Thread: Julianne, I really need opinions on this song before I preform it! (6 Replies, 1,137 Views) by Klukoklai
well have not heard of the group but thats a fitting genre.. well done once again
Thread: Fading To Black(FINALLY FINISHED) (23 Replies, 3,042 Views) by Klukoklai
haha.. you faggot :P
Thread: Corinthian (I beg you to comment) (35 Replies, 5,138 Views) by Klukoklai
Thank you raskolnikov, I really appreciate that
Thread: Dead Man Walking (8 Replies, 3,098 Views) by Klukoklai
me to.. its good over all, dont know what to rip on really ;)
Thread: Porno Baby (7 Replies, 12,398 Views) by Klukoklai
thats not cool
Thread: one shot: please read and comment (11 Replies, 3,118 Views) by Klukoklai
your hate a loaded chamber ready to end it all
to me this line is just ridicules, please explain