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Thread: My Release (3 Replies, 2,805 Views) by thehough1
I finally did get round to looking at your work (I don't use this site much).
Honestly...
Good. Looks like theres a lot of emotion there, though, obviosuly not having lived your life, I don't...
Thread: Plastic (0 Replies, 1,023 Views) by thehough1
This is using the beat of Kilo Da Beast's n Lil Wayne's Plastic.
Just general boasts and horrorcore style murdering an opponent.
Spot all the wordplay!
They say it’s plastic, I just know...
Thread: Relationship lyrics (3 Replies, 2,149 Views) by thehough1
Thanks, that means a lot :)
I hope I mixed meaning with technical skills too.
anything you've done I'll look at if you want?
Be a friend?
Thread: Relationship lyrics (3 Replies, 2,149 Views) by thehough1
About 2 different girls- 1 old and 1 new girlfriend.
First verse: trouble with old girl
2nd: moving on
3rd: new gf
the lyrics are to a sample of the trance song Stereo Love but ive got rap...
Thread: All Fear, Lust, and Need... plz give some feedback :D (11 Replies, 3,542 Views) by thehough1
grunge n metal arent my favorite styles, but these lyrics fit. i dunno what youre talking about, what is the mother of all creation, but it sounds 'metal-y'.
sounds right anyway.
Thread: Song i just randomly wrtoe in 5 minutes, please rate (2 Replies, 2,074 Views) by thehough1
this 5 mins is better than some lyrics ppl take hours over.
the first 4 lines anyway.
after that it lost rhythm n meaning
talent tho
Thread: sick lyrics? (5 Replies, 3,019 Views) by thehough1
Thanks, thanks for another positive comment :)
yeah, its to the tune of Airplanes by B.O.B n Hayley Williams (from paramore) and its not the eminem version.
if you havent heard it u really...
Thread: First Lyrics (12 Replies, 16,852 Views) by thehough1
not what id normally write/listen to but i respect ur skills. its fits ur theme well. to be constructive, id complicate the rhymes to add more of a natural rhythm, but overall :)
Thread: sick lyrics? (5 Replies, 3,019 Views) by thehough1
wow thanks
i think i love you :)
i think ive got some other verses n some hooks i wrote if u want
Thread: sick lyrics? (5 Replies, 3,019 Views) by thehough1
My 2 verses to Airplanes Part 1 by B.O.B n Hailey. About my tough times now n my abusive father.
some parts i speed up the flow, so this explains areas where it looks like the line doesnt fit. I...
Thread: My Lyrics...please tell me what you think!!! :) (2 Replies, 1,474 Views) by thehough1
Generally good and emotionally charged, even if it's not true ;) but some things seemed slightly clumsy, like 'swore up and down'- is that a play on 'i swear down'?
also 'stung like a knife'- that...