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Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 358,191 Views) by smileygal
herrrooo :D how are you??
Thread: Song I wrote just last night (16thJune) - Please comment :P (3 Replies, 11,990 Views) by smileygal
wow.. thats really good!! :) please write more!!
smiley exohexoh
Thread: That Girl <3 (6 Replies, 1,380 Views) by smileygal
thank you so muccchhh!!! it does help and i promise i will try to apply that to my writing :) thank you again :)
smiley xxx
Thread: First song in a while. Untitled so far. (7 Replies, 1,612 Views) by smileygal
hahah glad to help :)
smiley xxx
Thread: Two Faced (5 Replies, 1,322 Views) by smileygal
"You’re the demon that’s inside me only I can feel.
How can I make you go away?!
If I die, you die too.
It’s the only way that I’ll be rid of you."
Thats my favourite part
Bit short though haha...
Thread: First song in a while. Untitled so far. (7 Replies, 1,612 Views) by smileygal
oh my god is all i can say! this is amazing. every rhyme every verse it just leaves you speechless. and wow the story going with this is a sad one but it makes for a great song.. i've read your stuff...
Thread: That Girl <3 (6 Replies, 1,380 Views) by smileygal
thanx :)
smiley xxx
Thread: The Contridiction (6 Replies, 1,527 Views) by smileygal
okay cool.. but that verse is way to long.. break it up into pieces to make smaller verses :)
smiley xxx
Thread: That Girl <3 (6 Replies, 1,380 Views) by smileygal
any other thoughts?? i can take critics. i would love some more feedback..
Thread: The Contridiction (6 Replies, 1,527 Views) by smileygal
this is good :) but do you want it to be a song or a rap or a poem?? because at this stage it looks like a poem. dont get me wrong its really good :) just want to know what do you want it to be???...
Thread: Betray (3 Replies, 961 Views) by smileygal
its a pre good song, continue it pls!! id like to see the finished piece.
Thread: Just Another Suicide (5 Replies, 4,960 Views) by smileygal
oh-my-god!
"Shewill never cry, she’s an angel now
Not just another suicide, she’s just the kind God would’ve missed
Not just another suicide, ignore her, but she still exists."
such beatiful...
Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 358,191 Views) by smileygal
Totally true!!
Thread: Maybe I Should Give Up (10 Replies, 3,153 Views) by smileygal
this is a good poem :) and sorry to hear bout that girl.. but in the end girls usually go for nice guys :) so ur gunna have luck :)
smiley xxx
Thread: That Girl <3 (6 Replies, 1,380 Views) by smileygal
awwww thanxx moonride42 :)
smiley xx
Thread: The Silence that echoes. (1 Replies, 2,167 Views) by smileygal
This is really good :) hope you write more cause you are good :)
xx smileygal
Thread: That Girl <3 (6 Replies, 1,380 Views) by smileygal
There's a girl
And she's sad
She's sittin' by the window
Everyday waiting to feel happy
But she'll keep on waiting for a while
(Chorus)
Thar girl sits by the window
And she's still waiting...
Thread: LINK TO mp3 ... Pray Along The Way .... LINK TO mp3 (2 Replies, 1,349 Views) by smileygal
AWESOMEE!! I lovee it!! makes me wanna cry!! <3 <3 your lyrics are really awesome and sweet!!
Thread: All of Me is You. (2 Replies, 1,068 Views) by smileygal
it gooddd :D i liked it!! :D
xoxo smiley <3
Thread: Secretly in love (2 Replies, 1,050 Views) by smileygal
oomggg!! thiss is really good!!! touches the soul!! but mayb u shul add a chorus?? but otherwise really awesome!! <3
xoxo smiley :D
Thread: i wish you'd care... (4 Replies, 3,560 Views) by smileygal
thanks tracy. good point!! thanks for the tip (:
Thread: Don't know what to call this, any suggestions? (6 Replies, 1,267 Views) by smileygal
good songg!! for the title mayb change or fighting back... ?? just some ideas... keep writing! ur good!!
xoxo smiley
Thread: i wish you'd care... (4 Replies, 3,560 Views) by smileygal
i wrote it like 5 mnths ago about a guy that i really liked and to him i was a gd friend and my friends didnt care about me but lucky for me that guy is my boy friend now (: but yeahh those times r...
Thread: I'm Sorry (5 Replies, 1,160 Views) by smileygal
i loveeee the pre-chorus and bridge!!! its a good song!! gd job!!! (:
xoxoxo smileyy <3 <3
Thread: i wish you'd care... (4 Replies, 3,560 Views) by smileygal
i haven't written in a while and comments and feedback will be greatly appreciated!! :) :)
(verse 1)
Everything i do is by myself
Every movie i see
i see it alone
Every game i play
I play it...
Thread: Carved On My Wrist (1 Replies, 1,864 Views) by smileygal
its good!! tho i think u need another verse... its good tho!! keep going!!
Thread: Not Fighting Anymore (3 Replies, 2,313 Views) by smileygal
omggg i loveee theee bridge!!! its a good song!! keep going!!
Thread: Wingless Angel (6 Replies, 2,986 Views) by smileygal
thankk you very much!!! i dont actually think im that good but re-assurance is just wat i need!! again,thank you very much
Thread: Give It A Few More Years (Parker, Reuter) (5 Replies, 2,425 Views) by smileygal
greatt song!! really cutee andd sweet!! the story is just beautiful!! congrats!!!
Thread: Wingless Angel (6 Replies, 2,986 Views) by smileygal
thankk youu veryy muchh!!! i appreciate it.
Thread: I didnt think so...my new song! (5 Replies, 1,902 Views) by smileygal
it needs to b at least a verse longer... great start tho!! keep going
Thread: Wingless Angel (6 Replies, 2,986 Views) by smileygal
thank you i will try with my new song im writing "i know you love me". thank you for ur reply it means the world to me.
Thread: Wingless Angel (6 Replies, 2,986 Views) by smileygal
This is my latest song. Plsssssssssssss comment!!!
Wingless Angel
(verse one)
I saw you standing there
All sweet and innocent
The cutest around
I want you to be mine
In my heart forever
Thread: Rewind (13 Replies, 2,786 Views) by smileygal
minutes turn into hours
hours turn into days
days turn into memories
wasted away...
thats my favourite bit!!
anyway develop those few emotions into tiny sentences tht can b instead of just...
Thread: A Good Idea (2 Replies, 1,787 Views) by smileygal
its sounding rlyy cool!! its rlyy good!! i like it!! (:
Thread: Pure love (My heart will wait) (3 Replies, 1,909 Views) by smileygal
greattt!!! its moving!!! i gots a tear in my eye!! just beautiful!! keep writing!!
Thread: My heart skips a beat (2 Replies, 2,471 Views) by smileygal
i like ittt!!! its cutee andd sweett (: good work
Thread: Off-topic discussions in English related to Romania, Romanian language and culture... (297 Replies, 97,272 Views) by smileygal
wassuuppp peeeps?!?! wats been doin?? im like tired and bored :p lol. well cyaaass
peaceee (: <3
Thread: Girl of my dreams ( re-written) please comment (7 Replies, 1,609 Views) by smileygal
i like this one more than the other! great work!! (: keep going!! wanna hear more!! (:
peacee
Thread: Good-bye, Forever (6 Replies, 5,351 Views) by smileygal
wow this is beautiful poetry!!! it touches the soul deeply!! i would like to see more!
Thread: my first love related song(i usually hate love songs) (3 Replies, 3,170 Views) by smileygal
i like it. good job. is it based on a tru story?? keep goin!!
xxx smiley
Thread: Finally Home (5 Replies, 2,190 Views) by smileygal
wow this is good. i really like it coz this is wat usually happens in real life
Thread: Big Hands (2 Replies, 1,848 Views) by smileygal
lol haha i agree wif 2012. loool. is this based on reality??
Thread: best friend (5 Replies, 1,577 Views) by smileygal
i like it!! good job!!
Thread: Would it help? (1 Replies, 1,341 Views) by smileygal
awww thats sad!! but good lyrics i like them!!
Thread: Poisoned life [draft] (3 Replies, 2,046 Views) by smileygal
nice lyrics!!! i agree with simos they r sweet in their own way.
Thread: ' Im Melt In Your Love ' (4 Replies, 1,718 Views) by smileygal
nawww this is really cutee!!! gd lyrics!!
Thread: my song......please read it and see how it sounds...advise required. (10 Replies, 2,090 Views) by smileygal
awesome song!! i love it!! do you write music with the songs?? and this mite b weird but ur name is exactly that of a girl in yr 10 at my skool. lol i kno its weird. sorry. but yea wen are you...
Thread: Dear Dark Blue (2 Replies, 1,421 Views) by smileygal
i love the last verse!
Thread: Justin Bieber (9 Replies, 4,489 Views) by smileygal
ummm in the fifth paragraph last line in english i think its supposed to be wouldn't instead of would. other than that great job translatin with the exception of little mistakes. i have just realised...