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Thread: Already Gone (a World Gone Mad) (14 Replies, 2,631 Views) by Nanashi
It is absolutely perfect the way it is! You could write a second half to this, if you liked. I think it is amazingly well written and fantastic song~ What ever feeling you sought to catch, you caught...
Thread: Unerasing smile (2 Replies, 1,376 Views) by Nanashi
Another short and lovely~ How do you do it? Lol :)
Thread: The Dark Side of ATL - recognise anything?? :D (14 Replies, 2,178 Views) by Nanashi
That will have to be one of my favorite pieces from you yet~ Songs like that are always fun and never, ever disappoint~
Thread: Silent Scream (5 Replies, 1,821 Views) by Nanashi
It has been some time since we have had the pleasure of your lyrics. It was worth waiting for, of course
~
Thread: Trap (1 Replies, 1,643 Views) by Nanashi
Entangled in my illustrious web
Once you've been caught, forever to be a slave
To desires
Surfacing in your nervous disposition
It is lamentable your predicament
But madness will drive you to...
Thread: Well (5 Replies, 1,393 Views) by Nanashi
A very beautiful language in which I am sure in equally beautiful lyrics. I will have to translate it as I do not know French. Worth the effort, no?
-Nanashi-
Thread: Adrianna (2 Replies, 1,691 Views) by Nanashi
It is about a the speaker, a vampyre, who's companion's thirst for the night was too difficult to control. Though he loved his companion, it was best to pull himself away.
Thread: Neverending search (3 Replies, 1,535 Views) by Nanashi
That it is, lol~
Thread: Armor of Chains - Knight of Darkened Light (8 Replies, 2,681 Views) by Nanashi
Do not worry about that. It is no problem at all~ I rather like the idea of interest in other song writers opinions.
-Nanashi-
Thread: Nightmare Princess (12 Replies, 3,272 Views) by Nanashi
I was surprised when I learned you were an author. Do you do the cover art yourself? I am very glad you became a member here to share both talents~
There is a bit of unique connection with twins,...
Thread: Armor of Chains - Knight of Darkened Light (8 Replies, 2,681 Views) by Nanashi
Of course~
Thread: Numb Me (24 Replies, 6,256 Views) by Nanashi
You are improving very much so, Shadow. You were still wonderful in your form but now it just seems as if it is maturing to me. Perhaps it is just because I like this one so much? Lol! Either way,...
Thread: This place (is the right place to be the last) (4 Replies, 1,473 Views) by Nanashi
I have never traveled by train. How is the experience? You captured me at the white blue moonlight...such beautiful imagery, dear~ I hope you never do such a thing, you have a talent which would be...
Thread: Neverending search (3 Replies, 1,535 Views) by Nanashi
:) I am so glad I decided to read your work. I cannot believe you have not received any other comments or likes. Your songs and messages are lovely~
-Nanashi-
I like this one. Very good!
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Thread: No more fear (2 Replies, 1,839 Views) by Nanashi
Another wonderful piece. You are becoming one of my favourites, yes? The message in this is evident and clear, putting away the fear of dying and living without that shroud.
-Nanashi-
Thread: Another chapter (2 Replies, 1,496 Views) by Nanashi
Short but amazingly well written and perfect! I love it~
-Nanashi-
Thread: Armor of Chains - Knight of Darkened Light (8 Replies, 2,681 Views) by Nanashi
It reminds me of those old folk tales sung by a fire in the old Medieval times.
-Nanashi-
I still thinks its great how you write these to further interpret your stories in the characters...
Thread: Wispers in the dark. This is about my messed up child hood. (3 Replies, 1,577 Views) by Nanashi
I was sexually abused by a cousin at a young age, thus provoking my condition. It takes a lot of strength to come out with something like that, it really does. With respect and love for what you have...
Thread: (The trail of tears) A song I write about the natives (3 Replies, 2,265 Views) by Nanashi
Absolutely brilliant. Choosing such a topic is provoking, and moving to me. The Trail of Tears was a tragedy beyond words, much like what I felt when reading. Kudos~
-Nanashi-
Thread: Nightmare Princess (12 Replies, 3,272 Views) by Nanashi
Oh my! I love the fact that you have a story to go along with your songs. It makes it all the more amazing and meaningful~
-Nanashi-
I have an identical twin! Do you really think there is a...
Thread: A song I wrote for my wifeI call it Priceless (need feedback) (9 Replies, 4,065 Views) by Nanashi
The sheer fact that you wrote this for your wife is beautiful and lovely, dear. I commend you for showing your appreciation for her in this way~
You have so much to say, express the depths of your...
Thread: Lifeline (5 Replies, 1,635 Views) by Nanashi
Aww~ How sweet of you! Alright then, I will look for it then.
Thread: This place (is the right place to be the last) (4 Replies, 1,473 Views) by Nanashi
The imagery this gives me is of freedom and solitude from the "artificial" world built around us. That peace of going back to nature, for me, resonates~
-Nanashi-
What were you trying to convey...
Thread: Nightmare Princess (12 Replies, 3,272 Views) by Nanashi
Who are the characters that you mention at the end?
Other than that question, I love the desperate sadness evident in all the lines. There is indeed a great deal of story behind it. A bit of...
Thread: Fire with Fire - please comment (4 Replies, 2,317 Views) by Nanashi
Very motivational and true to itself. If you are not yet through with this piece, take your time and actualize what you want to happen with it, how you want it to sound to yourself and reader.
Thread: Lifeline (5 Replies, 1,635 Views) by Nanashi
Thank you~
Thread: wanted to say bye... (10 Replies, 2,637 Views) by Nanashi
I will miss your energetic words and memorable style. I did not want to come back to see you leave...
May everything be well with you and may you return to us.
Thread: Lifeline (5 Replies, 1,635 Views) by Nanashi
Happy to finally be back~
Thread: Lifeline (5 Replies, 1,635 Views) by Nanashi
The unexpended voice testifying my distinction
I regain my former identity
Detained by the knowledge of impending extinction
I am my humility
Traversing the stream of brief travail
Even so, ...
Thread: Empty Song (4 Replies, 2,515 Views) by Nanashi
I will say this much on it so I do not ruin anyone's perception in what they see in it...
The individual in the song has grown tired of the one they love. Not of any of their doing, yet because...
Thread: Lacrima Piu Triste (2 Replies, 1,609 Views) by Nanashi
Indeed, you have said all that is to be said. This was very personal to me and came in a moment. I just wrote every word that came to me. I have touched it up a bit yet the meaning remains the same....
Thread: Trapped! (V2) (9 Replies, 2,148 Views) by Nanashi
Indeed the generation will. I look forward to the fruits of your efforts, dear.
-Nanashi-
Thread: Trapped! (V2) (9 Replies, 2,148 Views) by Nanashi
Thirteen years old? Well then, you are quite mature then, are you not? Your writing skills are definitely of a High School level, if not better. I am surprised, very surprised. Wonderful work, dear....
Thread: The One You Let By (2 Replies, 2,101 Views) by Nanashi
My favourite verse!
This is a sad song yet, wonderfully written. At the end, a glimmer of hope emerges which made me smile. Thank you again and keep writing!
-Nanashi-
Thread: Trapped! (V2) (9 Replies, 2,148 Views) by Nanashi
Hmm. I would say...I believe you to be in your twenties. Late twenties, perhaps. Am I close?
And yes, it is evident how much thought and heart you place in your work~
Thread: Lacrima Piu Triste Italian Ver. (0 Replies, 1,588 Views) by Nanashi
Infuso di vostro potere di amare e la debolezza a piangere
Ho gander su vostra camera piangente, scintillante con tristezza
Ci si rimane, ancora una volta, io sono quello di venire a voi...
Thread: Lacrima Piu Triste (2 Replies, 1,609 Views) by Nanashi
Anata no aio dengen to naku ni jakuten o chuunyuu shi te I masu .
Boku ha kanashimi de kirari to hikaru , shidare heya to no gandā
anata no mama , mouichido , watashi ha kimi ni kite ishi tsu
ame...
Thread: Trapped! (V2) (9 Replies, 2,148 Views) by Nanashi
You become better and better each time you put thought into writing. I would want to call this my favourite of your works, yet I know there is more to come. How you began captured my attention and...
Thread: Emilio >:( (6 Replies, 1,800 Views) by Nanashi
Lol, I am glad you have inspiration now, dear. Cannot wait to see what you will write next. This song was good with the anger and formation. Fantastic job!
Thread: Empty Song (4 Replies, 2,515 Views) by Nanashi
Kono uta o utau shiyou to shi te i ta kotoba o ushinat ta
anata no kokoro ni burijj i o kouchiku suru koto ni nat te shi
dakara moushiwake ari mase n ga , nini no kudari ni ha dokidoki no chuushin...
Thread: Why Did It End Like This/How Did It Come To This -{???}- (24 Replies, 4,311 Views) by Nanashi
If you have those drinks, you will only come back to what you thought left behind. I hope writing drains out all those emotions. They certainly came through clearly and wonderfully. That is what is...
Thread: Tous les soirs Embrace (0 Replies, 1,490 Views) by Nanashi
What a delicate dear you have become
Moving on from the pensive child
To think now you aim toward an evening with me
Very well, let us see were this new love takes us
Do not be so tense, it all...
Thread: Hero (4 Replies, 3,100 Views) by Nanashi
There is a reason I made it two, hmhm...
Thread: Is This The End (Shadows Magic) (2 Replies, 2,185 Views) by Nanashi
Actually, I when one understands what is behind the song, it is hard to say it is bad writing, yes? Is that not the goal? I believe the message conveyed was captured by myself. I hope so! If you are...
Thread: Adrianna (2 Replies, 1,691 Views) by Nanashi
Corridors lined with roses and vermilion
Capturing the song and dance with brilliance
Delicate grace completing the balance
No fear of the night ending
Dipping into the well of mystery
Tragic...
Thread: Victory (11 Replies, 2,198 Views) by Nanashi
*Smile* Beautiful piece of lyricism, dear sir!
-Nanashi-
Thread: Sound (2 Replies, 1,804 Views) by Nanashi
Something about this caught me and just resonated with 'happy me'! Lol.
It just flows nicely to me.
-Joshua-
Wonderful work, Mon! I enjoyed reading it myself~
-Nanashi-
Thread: Hero (4 Replies, 3,100 Views) by Nanashi
Since you can save your self
Why do you keep looking up?
So deep in your hole, barely seeing the sun
Six feet from any dream believed real
I've seen too many slip away so easily
No one can...
Thread: Break Down (0 Replies, 1,337 Views) by Nanashi
My hands are shaking Body frozen cold
You just couldn't walk away without filling me with poison again
For everything there is nothing to show except this hate
Emotions ran amok in the heat of...
Thread: Psuedo Lies (2 Replies, 2,110 Views) by Nanashi
Thank you. We try our best. As of late, most have been personal so I hope the creativity flows back with the emotion.
-Joshua-