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I agree. There are some nice phrases, but the...
Thread: Hear My Call (6 Replies, 4,066 Views) by leafar
I agree. There are some nice phrases, but the meaning or message is vague, so it simply wouldnt work on that basis. You should do what i did and read some books on songwriting, so that you get an...
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More feedback
Thread: More feedback (1 Replies, 2,482 Views) by leafar
Come on people, songs are being submitted but not many people are leaving helpful comments. We want to know why our songs work or dont work.
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I like the fact that confided doesnt precisely...
Thread: Cold Hearts (2 Replies, 3,188 Views) by leafar
I like the fact that confided doesnt precisely rhyme with the other word (which ive forgotten because i had to log in to be able to reply, sorry) but it works very well. And the blind thing, yes,...
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Fear
Thread: Fear (2 Replies, 3,177 Views) by leafar
Today I beat you
Just for today your *** was mine
I knew I'd defeat you
These days I seem to do it all the time
The way I'm going
I wonder how you'll survive tomorrow
As I keep on growing
I'll... -
Soul Food
Thread: Soul Food (1 Replies, 3,122 Views) by leafar
Soul Food :
Hey good lookin'
How'd ya like to taste some of my mama's cookin'
'Stead o' that fast food junk
Come and get some old skool funk
Soul food
Come and get it while it's hot
Soul... -
I'm Written In The Stars
Thread: I'm Written In The Stars (4 Replies, 3,591 Views) by leafar
I'm Written In The Stars :
The sun beats down on the sand
As i see you walking by
There's rhythm in my feet
And i know I'm looking fine
Something about your indifferent look
Tells me that you...