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Thread: n00benstein (2 Replies, 1,783 Views) by sparks
yep, I'm new. this is the first forum I've joined in over a year.
R.I.P tabo :(
Thread: What's the best guitar (12 Replies, 38,853 Views) by sparks
the best guitar companies are jackson and esp IF you play metal. gibson makes great guitars, prs makes great guitars. It all depends on the style of music you're going for.
Thread: My work (2 Replies, 2,206 Views) by sparks
I liked it quite a lot.
good effin work my friend.
Thread: White (0 Replies, 1,686 Views) by sparks
hanging from snowflakes by their neckties
like the ebb of blood flourescing in their lungs
the twilight jaded by auras dawning on ink
the pale light wandering from your character.
acrylic, like...
Thread: Self Assessment (3 Replies, 2,061 Views) by sparks
the point was glaringly obvious, and for the most part it flowed.
I just couldn't dig into it :(
Thread: A Thousand Roses (2 Replies, 3,767 Views) by sparks
meh... I couldn't really get into this one. I can see where you're coming from and they're were a couple of good lines, but I didn't really like it overall.
Thread: Summer (4 Replies, 2,788 Views) by sparks
the opening stanza is just plain good, the imagery was perfect.
the chorus wasn't so hot, but it wasn't awful either.
Why did you have to..
Be like that?
Pull me back up
Then just go ahead...
Thread: #62: Apocalypse (5 Replies, 2,517 Views) by sparks
With the slip of tongue and a throat that has slit, the dead tells no lies
^^^^^
that line is really great.
the whole thing flowed really well, but I didn't like the two opening lines all that...