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Thread: A song/poem written by me (1 Replies, 1,291 Views) by Jaote
I like it as a whole.But this is my fav. part.
"And i’m kidding myself,
When i say i dont love you.
And i’m kidding myself,
When i say i’ll move on.
I convince myself i’m right,
But i know...
Thread: Ocean Floor (5 Replies, 1,933 Views) by Jaote
I have to say...This is awesome.
Since a few have did the out of 10 thing.I would give a 8 1/2..
Thread: A Spirit's Cry (comment please) (9 Replies, 2,156 Views) by Jaote
You sorta grab the listener,in this case me,and bring them into your life,and what you are feeling.Great read.
Thread: To cold numb and gray (0 Replies, 1,019 Views) by Jaote
So how long did it take to push away the guilt?Of all you ever could have done,and when you didn't do enough.Through my hands I squeeze away this life I,should have led,but didn't lead me through.And...
Thread: My Rap, please read! (20 Replies, 102,297 Views) by Jaote
I will have to say,Illest is ill.That was good.Even more so because it's not like most "Rap" songs,I got ma money cars and cloths drugs and guns throwin elbows and sh**,(Just comparing)It's something...
Thread: Kill the Silence.(Opinions wanted) (3 Replies, 1,328 Views) by Jaote
Thank you very much.I am working on a bridge right now.I just have so many different thoughts that it's making it harder.
Thread: Kill the Silence.(Opinions wanted) (3 Replies, 1,328 Views) by Jaote
I'm not the best at English,hope its not to bad though.
It would mean the world if someone would give their opinion on this,and how i write.like i said,not to great at structure,not asking for like...
Thread: Corinthian (I beg you to comment) (35 Replies, 5,152 Views) by Jaote
It's great.
Thread: The music stops. (0 Replies, 1,927 Views) by Jaote
It's very long.I zoned out for a few days after my mom passed away and wrote a semi rap/hip-hop song.Not anything hardcore.
A music note it plays
takes my breath away
till i stay awake for...
Thread: She watches me all through the night. (0 Replies, 847 Views) by Jaote
This is my first post on this site/forum.
I write all the time and,now,I finally have that feeling of wanting to know what other people think.I wrote this about a week ago.I still keep adding,and...