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Quicksand
Thread: Quicksand (1 Replies, 1,211 Views) by We, The Seduced
Quicksand
Lying in the shallow light
Waiting for the dark
To smother me in withered dreams
To crush my crippled heart
In the aftermath of all your rain
I got caught up in the flood
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There are deifinitely a number of parts of the...
Thread: Lyrics I wrote (5 Replies, 2,146 Views) by We, The Seduced
There are deifinitely a number of parts of the first song which are directly lifted from nirvana.
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You are a disgrace.
Thread: Lyrics I wrote (5 Replies, 2,146 Views) by We, The Seduced
Why would you come on here and post lyrics by one of the biggest bands of the last 20 years and claim them as your own.
That is just sad.
Very sad.
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Greatest Verse Ever?
Thread: Greatest Verse Ever? (3 Replies, 3,689 Views) by We, The Seduced
I have recently stumbled across a poem by Leonard Cohen, who I regard as probably the finest lyricist of modern times, certainly in music. However, this one is new to me.
Mainly because this poem... -
I slightly modified the end of the 3rd verse.
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Thread: me versus you (2 Replies, 1,282 Views) by We, The Seduced
I slightly modified the end of the 3rd verse.
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That really is a quite irrelevant reply to be...
Thread: A Simple Mistake (6 Replies, 2,058 Views) by We, The Seduced
That really is a quite irrelevant reply to be honest.
Of course songs/poems don't need to rhyme. However, that doesn't mean that they never should.
I quite frankly don't understand the point... -
I understand what you mean about rewriting things...
Thread: A Simple Mistake (6 Replies, 2,058 Views) by We, The Seduced
I understand what you mean about rewriting things until they are perfect, but that can end up taking months or even years. This is just a first draft i guess, but I feel that every version of...
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A Simple Mistake
Thread: A Simple Mistake (6 Replies, 2,058 Views) by We, The Seduced
We danced 'til the evening dispersed into night,
Then lay in the darkness, cursing the light.
The sands of time scattered by the breath of sin,
With one story ending, another begins.
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Sorry, but these are quite bad.
A lot of it...
Thread: Strong relationship (2 Replies, 2,026 Views) by We, The Seduced
Sorry, but these are quite bad.
A lot of it has no direction or meaning. It just seems to be meaningless cliches that offer no insight whatsoever.
It reminds of something a really bad boyband... -
me versus you
Thread: me versus you (2 Replies, 1,282 Views) by We, The Seduced
I can hide all your fears, in sinew and bone.
I can dry every tear that you cry, all alone.
I can suffer these fools, for a week, maybe two.
Until all that is left, is just me versus you.
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