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Thread: What should I call this? (7 Replies, 3,252 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Thanks for the suggestions! I think i'm going to call this The Borderline because the song started with the idea of always being on the borderline in between two things.
Thread: What should I call this? (7 Replies, 3,252 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Spend our life, on the border line
With love on one side
I’ve pulled you before over to the right
But never far enough
It’s never far enough
So take one good look at what's in front of you...
Thread: Let Me Call You Home (0 Replies, 1,926 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I am looking down at the ground
But I’m feeling upside down
I hear something familiar, a shout from the sky
The soundtrack to the happiest moments of my life
It’s beautiful as the moon, untamed,...
Thread: Edge Of Desire (0 Replies, 1,792 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Forever young and always running
tell me where has this taken me?
just a great figure eight or a tiny infinity
love is really nothing
but a drug that keeps taking me
for all of my crying
I...
Thread: Joker and a king (0 Replies, 1,557 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
You said “what do you see down the road?
You see that jewellery store
Let’s call that a year
Do you picture me stood there?” you
waited and kissed me on the head
I didn’t answer cuz I just...
Thread: Some kind of nursery rhyme lol... Review it (4 Replies, 1,663 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I really like it! Reminds me of Owl City's lyrics.
Thread: My true colours - let me know what you think (10 Replies, 2,180 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Is english not your first language? Some bits don't make a lot of sense, like "Everyone has got heart that longs for love, even soiled dove, Having my heart broken many times in manner curt"
Thread: Edge Of Desire - anyone have any ideas for the bridge? (0 Replies, 1,123 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Forever young and always running
tell me where has this taken me?
just a great figure eight or a tiny infinity
love is really nothing
but a drug that keeps taking me
for all of my crying
I...
Thread: The One That Got Away (1 Replies, 1,370 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I still remember the look on your face
Stood in the darkness at 5:58
The words that you whispered for just us to know
You told me you loved me so why did you go away, go away
I do recall now...
Thread: No title - title needed (8 Replies, 3,138 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
like the last verse:
"So if the world is goin' somewhere
I guess people are startin' to sound
I still don't think the world's fair
But at least it's goin' round"
It turns the songs around from...
Thread: Made of Matches (2 Replies, 1,490 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Anyone?
Thread: New lyrics. Title needed (6 Replies, 1,652 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
You inspired me to write this chorus! "Human cries, broken lives, stress, control and love that lies, a disease, a plague, a familiar look on your face, my same old silly ways, yesterday is back...
Thread: New lyrics. Title needed (6 Replies, 1,652 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I love the lyrics "Human eyes, busy lives, stress control and cheating wives" and " A disease, a plague, an unfamiliar look on your face
Repeating days, a sign of it infiltrating your ways"
Thread: Made of Matches (2 Replies, 1,490 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
High heels, red dress
She leaves you cleaning up her mess
Spends money she doesn't earn
She starts fires just to watch them burn
That girl's made of matches, and she wants to light her name...
Thread: Love High (4 Replies, 1,775 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I changed "When your eyes met mine that crowded bar, I Fell in love, and I fell so hard" to "you're the kind of reckless that should send me running but I kinda knwo that I won't get far"
Thread: The Losing Track (0 Replies, 1,514 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
They tell me to follow my heart
but you’ve stolen my heart
So I’ll follow you wherever you are
But didn’t they tell me to make my own path
And go my own way
So I’ll not go your way
They tell...
Thread: Love High (4 Replies, 1,775 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
The way you move is like a full on rain storm
And I’m a house of cards
When your eyes met mine that crowded bar, I
Fell in love, and I fell so hard
You stood there in front of me just
Close...
Thread: That means goodbye (0 Replies, 1,445 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Well I believe in love, but not the kinda screws you up, no
I believe in time and chance, cuz
I’m not one for making plans
well you’ll go down in history and history’s what you are to me
I...
Thread: Help, i'm writing this for an assignment I wanna know if it's good so far (5 Replies, 1,159 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Is this better?
Passengers
On an endangered day
When what lives inside our heads
When the living all play dead
Becomes reality instead
Turquoise skies overhead
As a warning, fade away
Thread: Help, i'm writing this for an assignment I wanna know if it's good so far (5 Replies, 1,159 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
oh. well it was supposed to be saying how people are relly just passengers in life. We don't have controll over our lives really, most things that happen are out of our controll. Someone or somthing...
Thread: Fairy Tales (2 Replies, 1,595 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
It's good, but if you wish he hadn't gone, then why does it say 'at least now you're not beside me'?
Thread: Help, i'm writing this for an assignment I wanna know if it's good so far (5 Replies, 1,159 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I'd really appreciate it if you could tell me what meaning you get from it, so I know if what i'm trying to say comes across. Criticise the poem, and ask what I mean by things. I don't take it...
Thread: Help, i'm writing this for an assignment I wanna know if it's good so far (5 Replies, 1,159 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
It's actually a poem, but sssshhh! I'm in the middle of writing the thrid and final verse and I wanna know if it's alright before I have to read it out to the class.
Passengers
The driver puts...
Thread: War with time - written just now in moment of inspriation (or madness) (5 Replies, 1,357 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Good, cuz i've got an assignment to write a poem about being a passenger, so I think i'm gonna use bits of this, becuase it's about being a passenger of time.
Thread: Two Hearts (4 Replies, 1,252 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Do you get what i'm trying to say in the song? I want to know what meaning you get from it so I can see if you get what I was trying to say or if you interpret it differently
Thread: another unfinished rap. (21 Replies, 12,192 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Never written a rap before, but here goes:
ya'll rappin bout guns
like shooting's the sh*t
carrying guns, it ain't fun
Weezy's locked up for it
forget the gangs and the fights
that ain't what...
Thread: New song to review (1 Replies, 1,185 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
you shoulda ended that with 'excuse the pun'.
Thread: Beneath The Stars (4 Replies, 1,872 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Love this song! There are so many great writers on this site now! I'm probably being stupid, but I don't get this part:
If the world, came,
Crashing over my head,
Like the words that you said....
Thread: Summer in My Own Shadow(acoustic song, comments welcome) (2 Replies, 987 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I actually love this line!
"Trying to think of clever ways
To spill my guts into ****ing napkins"
It just sums up all that lyric writing is.
Thread: A Funeral on friday (3 Replies, 1,400 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Rad song, everyone can related to it.
Love this part:
We asked that they take good care of you
This is where it gets real hard
I swear I can still hear your heart
beating is it saying I'll be...
Thread: To Mr Insane (5 Replies, 1,409 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
thanks! me too. that's why I decided to put it twice
Thread: To Mr Insane (5 Replies, 1,409 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
who's is better?
Thread: To Mr Insane (5 Replies, 1,409 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I was writing some extra verses for another song someone posted, and I got carried away and wrote a whole song. Here it is:
To Mr Insane,
I fell for you blindly, deeply, so carefree
I wanted you...
Thread: Goodbye (2 Replies, 1,075 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Here it is: I think i'm calling it 'To Mr Insane' and I ended up writing a totally original song.
To Mr Insane,
I fell for you blindly, deeply, so carefree
I wanted you to catch me but you held...
Thread: Goodbye (2 Replies, 1,075 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I started writing a couple of verses, but then I got some other ideas, and i'm know gonna write a whole song inspired by this one, using some of what you wrote. I'll post it when i'm done.
Thread: Drive (0 Replies, 1,050 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
I don't claim to know it all
I've had some wins I've had some falls
The road is long and time is short
I don't wanna spend too much time in thought
I don't intend to play it safe
I've gotta...
Thread: take me away - need help (7 Replies, 2,738 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
It's really good!
You could add this somewhere:
take me away
to a brighter day
I want to fly away
to where it's all okay
Take me away
Thread: Drop the world (2 Replies, 1,115 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
It's a rad song! Keep it up!
Thread: The Death Of Me (5 Replies, 2,427 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Love the chorus!
Try my patience now,
See what I’m about
Then lay my fear in
Graves I hollowed out. - This is so rad!
Thread: War with time - written just now in moment of inspriation (or madness) (5 Replies, 1,357 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Thanks! I'll check that out Sewn Up
Thread: Umbra (3 Replies, 994 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
rad song!
Thread: My Lyrics...please tell me what you think!!! :) (2 Replies, 1,462 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
lyrics you've written yourself should be posted in the lyrics review forum. by the way rad song! Especially for a thirteen year old!
Thread: War with time - written just now in moment of inspriation (or madness) (5 Replies, 1,357 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Usually in these moments when I suddenly get an idea, I write a verse or a chorus and no more. I came up with a whole song this time in 40 minutes. A first for me, and hope you like the song.
...
Thread: Have a title for this song? (13 Replies, 1,871 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Rad song, reminds me of Miley Cyrus' song Full Circles
Thread: Break Me (7 Replies, 2,263 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Rad song, especially for your first attempt!
Thread: A chorus I just wrote, can anyone help me with the verses? (3 Replies, 1,277 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
If you can tell us some more about what the situation your writing about is, I'll write some verses.
Thread: Hollywood Hills and Spotlights - just finished this song, hope ya'll like it (3 Replies, 1,908 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Thankyou so much!
Thread: Hollywood Hills and Spotlights - just finished this song, hope ya'll like it (3 Replies, 1,908 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Hollywood Hills and Spotlights - just finished this song, hope ya'll like it.
I like to take the back roads
Though I’ve got somewhere to go
Think I’ll turn off the radio
And listen to my soul...
Thread: Within The Mirror (8 Replies, 1,940 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
This song does what a good song should, it makes you think and it makes you feel.
Thread: a parody of 'The man who can't be moved' by The Script, just for a laugh (4 Replies, 1,534 Views) by Tracy-Turnblad
Well then i'm not funny, i'm just random. I meant being random is the easiest way to make someone laugh at you, but the best comedy isn't about being random.