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Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,589 Views) by tackpic_47
Jesus walks don't forget about kanye
chop his neck off
is something that you don't say
why?
cause you are not the MESSIAH
you a false prophet
prince of all LIE'ERS
the ground to holy thou...
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,589 Views) by tackpic_47
You killed that flow.....geeeeeeetttttttt hhhhhhiiiiimmmmmmm!!!!
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,589 Views) by tackpic_47
First, Smooth
that was a compliment...not a diss
But for you imma redirect
cause I don't take shxt lightly when you say
you gone ring my neck
And VENGEANCE!
I know you not trying to redeem...
Thread: Lucky Charms (9 Replies, 3,373 Views) by tackpic_47
Big Props Venom! Nice song..Nice Beat..Nice Story!
Kill that
and put that in the studio and fell that!
Thread: The Beat In my Head (2 Replies, 2,378 Views) by tackpic_47
WHO NEEDS TO BE BROKE
La La La
WHO-NEED-TO-BE-BROKE!
break off my chains
and unleash the notes
Dip me in the water
restore my soul
cause I used to broken
now I'm made whole
Thread: The Beat In my Head (2 Replies, 2,378 Views) by tackpic_47
I be having self-made beats in my head!
And then I rap at the same time...Crazy:music_fun:
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,589 Views) by tackpic_47
Why is you replying
as if you got a say so
rolly polly rapper
might as well stay low
but real talk
I like your dedication
you think your venoms lethal
but I have the medication
Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 299,589 Views) by tackpic_47
I know it's hard to anticipate
the ending of your fate
but why would you f with me
Alexander the great
Greek mythology
ruler of Macedonia
we coming by the number
you
you looking kinda...
Thread: LETS KICK THIS OFF: *Freestyle Cypher Thread* (diss the man above you) (69 Replies, 192,393 Views) by tackpic_47
(God laughing-naw vouve you can say its me
jesus pat me on the back when im spitting out this melody)
I aint been on in a minute
but all I need is two
I should get complicated
but imma stay...
Thread: Topic Rapping (10 Replies, 4,295 Views) by tackpic_47
Is it hard to elavate
Is it hard to grow
can you give me some advice
are you willing to show
cause I feel stomped on
haters stunting my growth
I guess they kicked my axx out
like they running...
Thread: Valentine! (2 Replies, 2,342 Views) by tackpic_47
Yesterday was I walk through
My Valentine was a girl I never talk to
Gave her a present
She was so astonished
my heart hit the floor
only being honest
She was like
Thread: Thought the new kid should write what hes got (2 Replies, 2,045 Views) by tackpic_47
It went hard....and it had meaning..something worth listening too....NICE!
Thread: Valentine! (2 Replies, 2,342 Views) by tackpic_47
Valentine is tommorow
attracted to the love spell
love got me blind
no way I can see the trail
Look into my eyes and she'll find my soul
she's the piece in my heart
that makes me whole
I...
Thread: 12 New Lines I'm Considering for a Recording - Thoughts? (6 Replies, 1,978 Views) by tackpic_47
It was good....me and my boi enjoyed reading it...hit me up if you wanna battle!
Thread: Bragging Right (3 Replies, 1,326 Views) by tackpic_47
the shxt was dope...i like the nurse line...but it doesn't flow / no main topic..sooo bxtch hit me up with the beef cause i'm ready !
Thread: Who's Writing? (4 Replies, 1,488 Views) by tackpic_47
Im at my friend house now and he let me do a demo on his computer...I like but the studio is always better...yeah imma try to finish..it
Thread: Opposites Attract (2 Replies, 1,573 Views) by tackpic_47
I like it...nice message...it gives a visual for the reader...i'm sure it'll do the same when you sing it...!
Thread: Who's Writing? (4 Replies, 1,488 Views) by tackpic_47
I have alot of Instrumentals...and I make a good chorus for each of them...I may lay down one verse for a song but it's rare that I finish the second...that's a habit I must break...There is plenty...
Thread: Who's Writing? (4 Replies, 1,488 Views) by tackpic_47
Who is coming up with some new songs....express your thoughts here...
Thread: (All Out) Battle* All welcome to join (62 Replies, 11,778 Views) by tackpic_47
This is a test run
call that shxt that crash dummy
run into a wall
then ask ! IS IT THAT FUNNY ?
Why the fxck you laughing ?
What the fxck you looking at ?
i'll fold yo axx up
then place...
Thread: sbu vs Deleterious (12 Replies, 2,665 Views) by tackpic_47
Thats a dope metaphor...Nice to have you back " SBU "!!!
Thread: (All Out) Battle* All welcome to join (62 Replies, 11,778 Views) by tackpic_47
I dislike the devil and demonted spirits
plus garbage music and decending lyrics
Why decending?
cause everything you make is a downfall
you a .01
you don't even deserve a roundoff
"...
Thread: no longer smoothtung (8 Replies, 1,642 Views) by tackpic_47
that sounds hostile.....wats going on!
Thread: Bully (0 Replies, 1,104 Views) by tackpic_47
The chorus is singing....
(Chorus)
I fell so strong
I won't let you bully me
(Sub-Chorus)
As a rapper i'm supposed to be a certain way
i'm my own man
never mind what the critics say
Thread: " bully " (1 Replies, 1,406 Views) by tackpic_47
this is a song slash rap...and i put this in the wrong forum! Imma paste it in the rap forum
Thread: " bully " (1 Replies, 1,406 Views) by tackpic_47
The chorus is singing....
(Chorus)
I fell so strong
I won't let you bully me
(Sub-Chorus)
As a rapper i'm supposed to be a certain way
i'm my own man
never mind what the critics say
Thread: Unfinished! (0 Replies, 1,010 Views) by tackpic_47
(verse)
Educated
smooth talking
black male
releases an album but won't sell
hoping to be the best but he leaves no trail
play by the book percise-detail
"detail"
most rappers won't do that
Thread: 5 min job, start of my new rap, take a read (2 Replies, 1,356 Views) by tackpic_47
mmm...
for some reason...i feel like you like you use this line often
"this verse is complete lets call it a rap"...
call me a jerk...but imma let people know how i feel...take it in any kinda...
Thread: Callin out Who (9 Replies, 1,730 Views) by tackpic_47
'Black and blue' I'm colder than the Grimm-reaper, Leave you thinking you a Jew
You say you got 'Claims' All i see is a 'lame' rapper who lost flame
I must admit I like this too...nice way to...
Thread: Callin out Who (9 Replies, 1,730 Views) by tackpic_47
Your conventions & grammar sucks more than a vacuum
You're job is to quit the game
Cuz I'm the boss when it comes to calls of business claims
Who brings the heat...what can Deleterious do...?
Thread: Get this off of my head (0 Replies, 1,463 Views) by tackpic_47
Pretty much you don't know what i'm facing
a black mans struggle with determination
"TO"
live right with a positive path
look in the face of danger with a positive laugh
Thread: jus a lil somethin off top (5 Replies, 1,575 Views) by tackpic_47
LOL...what the f u know about choctaw indians changing MISSISSPPI get your history right...hilarious. LOL MISSISSPPIans drove them out like many other southern states did....hilarious....LOL...at...
Thread: jus a lil somethin off top (5 Replies, 1,575 Views) by tackpic_47
Mississippi State
we both represent
cracker AND nigghas coming to our defense....lol
Thread: jus a lil somethin off top (5 Replies, 1,575 Views) by tackpic_47
maaaaannnnn
she in my bathroom
waiting for the three chants
Mary Mary Mary
got me stuck in a damxn trance
can i think straight
can i fxcking move
only candy man knows what im going through
Thread: Ignorant Fans (0 Replies, 921 Views) by tackpic_47
(My rap name is E-suede...the beat i used is 1:31 long!)
(verse)
Educated smooth
call me E-suede
you can grab me by the throat
but im never gonna break
my wind pipe strong
your vocals aint...
Thread: makin up rhymes (11 Replies, 2,470 Views) by tackpic_47
First let me get on MOLO
looking like a micheal jackson logo
to stab me in the back is a big axx no no
why?
cause i expect better
yo rhymes is dry puxxy
i expect wetter
yeah its maybe...
Thread: makin up rhymes (11 Replies, 2,470 Views) by tackpic_47
Just because i love words I looked up the definition of PRIMUS...and the way u used it has nothing to do with a elected bishop.
SO LET ME ROAST U!!
This guy use words
that he doesn't even knows...
Thread: makin up rhymes (11 Replies, 2,470 Views) by tackpic_47
bxtch im not 12
im only 17
stacking paper to the ceiling
call me Mr. Ever-Green
better step back
cause you can catch a disease
straight contagious
don't know any other way to persuade ya
Thread: this roast i made.rate it (1 Replies, 88,452 Views) by tackpic_47
lol....i scrolled down the page and saw that the rap was lond as hexll...i was about to exit but i thought it was too funny not to leave a post......lllllllooooooooool.
Thread: you kno who u are ;)(battle) (22 Replies, 6,033 Views) by tackpic_47
I got mad wordplay on paper - but my head is infested.
'Fake'? - correct it.
Im genuine..
even if my scripts aren't respected.
dooooooooooooopppe...
Thread: Working on new material (10 Replies, 2,661 Views) by tackpic_47
i finished it...
Thread: Working on new material (10 Replies, 2,661 Views) by tackpic_47
thats cold
molo
Thread: Working on new material (10 Replies, 2,661 Views) by tackpic_47
god ma said she wanna hear some music cause i've been listening to beats all day
lol
Thread: Working on new material (10 Replies, 2,661 Views) by tackpic_47
i forgot to mention that the beat is 1:06 long
Thread: Working on new material (10 Replies, 2,661 Views) by tackpic_47
if someone can add some lyrics...please do
in the meantime imma finish working on it
Thread: Working on new material (10 Replies, 2,661 Views) by tackpic_47
I hope to make a demo tonight...Its called Relaxing
chorus is singing verse is rapping
Chorus
forget about all my plans
all i wanna hear is my slow jam
its relaxing
throw my hands in the...
Thread: Working on new material (10 Replies, 2,661 Views) by tackpic_47
its my vocals..too..its like its holding me back..because i be have to much saliva in my mouth..or my stomach tigthen up when i rap..how can i correct this
Thread: Working on new material (10 Replies, 2,661 Views) by tackpic_47
im writing a song..and im stuck due to lack of structure..need advice..
Thread: Conscious... (2 Replies, 1,930 Views) by tackpic_47
I like what you talking about..BLAH...
but the Praise or Representation of the " THIRD EYE " is something I don't agree with!
Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 72,955 Views) by tackpic_47
Against /smoothtung/ 4 bars
This is not the time or the proper engagement
and this be in your head while im making my statement
step back
cause i be rushing like a bull ox
I be heated up...