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Thread: Size Twelves (1 Replies, 1,591 Views) by DonFortunato
Three steps out the front door
Nine more down the corridor
Wait for ele-vator
That much closer to you
Six steps to the sidewalk
Sprint north for a few blocks
Wait for the subway
And I'm...
Thread: Charge Of The Light Brigade (3 Replies, 1,683 Views) by DonFortunato
Thanks for the comment, but what do you mean about the yugioh card?
Thread: Charge Of The Light Brigade (3 Replies, 1,683 Views) by DonFortunato
Jack just entered Harvard
When he heard his countries call
Pushing brave boys onward
To fight foes big and small
Oh, where's the boy who used to play here?
Where's the boy who used to laugh
Hes...
Thread: Dave (0 Replies, 1,126 Views) by DonFortunato
I always disregarded
and dismissed
those cliche optomists
and all beliefs in life after death
but my pessimism was never harder
than after your departure
when i felt that cliche hole in my...
Thread: Julianne(new chorus?) (5 Replies, 1,511 Views) by DonFortunato
lol, all i can say is that it works in my mind
Thread: My First Reggae Song... (0 Replies, 2,159 Views) by DonFortunato
My first reggae song...
Me mammy said son you got to get a job
Your poppy can't work hes got the black lung
Boy you head down to the mine and ask the boss man
Is there anywhere sir where I can...
Thread: Julianne(new chorus?) (5 Replies, 1,511 Views) by DonFortunato
I posted the original version of this song earlier, then i thought of a new chorus that I really like. I think the old chorus tells the story a lot better, but the knew one is a lot more catchy.
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Thread: Julianne, I really need opinions on this song before I preform it! (6 Replies, 1,137 Views) by DonFortunato
Thanks a bunch man! It means even more coming from you, as I'm a fan of almost everything you post!
Thread: I Need Help With The Title!! (2 Replies, 950 Views) by DonFortunato
Ya looking back I really should have proof read it, thanks though
Thread: I Need Help With The Title!! (2 Replies, 950 Views) by DonFortunato
This is a song about bands that freak out about downloading music, and yes I have a specific band in mind, and yes all of it is true, I got busted for downloading music.
?Title?
Don't say I'm...
Thread: Fading To Black(FINALLY FINISHED) (23 Replies, 3,042 Views) by DonFortunato
Just seemed like you forced it too much to me, but its certainly not bad.
Thread: Corinthian (I beg you to comment) (35 Replies, 5,138 Views) by DonFortunato
You should have tried experimenting with a paper shredder after you wrote this.
Thread: Dead Man Walking (8 Replies, 3,098 Views) by DonFortunato
Well then I guess theres no need to rip is there? Just kidding, I really liked it as well and the story behind it makes it even better.
Thread: Porno Baby (7 Replies, 12,400 Views) by DonFortunato
Extremely tasteless. I liked it though.
Thread: Julianne, I really need opinions on this song before I preform it! (6 Replies, 1,137 Views) by DonFortunato
I think it has to be some kind of acoustic soft rock, I don't know if you've ever heard of Dispatch? But something like that.
Thread: Dial 6 For Love (7 Replies, 2,255 Views) by DonFortunato
Its got good rhymes and a decent hook, but theres nothing about it that really makes me want to hear it played, I feel like I've heard this song 1000 times before, but its your call.
Luck
Thread: A Lie (1 Replies, 870 Views) by DonFortunato
Im a big fan of finger-picking, it can bring out a lot of emotion. I think you've got some good rhymes and a decent idea. Personally I think it would be a great improvement if you made it a little...
Thread: Julianne, I really need opinions on this song before I preform it! (6 Replies, 1,137 Views) by DonFortunato
Julianne
Down by the riverside,
a lonely girl sat and cried her eyes out
oh Julianne why do you pout
on a day when no clouds are out
Up by the brewery,
Julianne talked with me about the...