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Thread: Great Blue (1 Replies, 8,196 Views) by Deadrise
Great Blue
An ancient creature hunts a stagnant slough,
His eyes of onyx peer into the pool
in search of scattered quarry veiled from view.
Aloft on boney stilts he slinks along,
In...
Thread: Last Watch (1 Replies, 5,042 Views) by Deadrise
Is it time to say goodbye
Flags are flying, seas are rising,
shorten sail, turn from home.
Dirty weather ahead, feeling of dread,
secure the decks and look lively.
Surfing through foam,...
Thread: Birth of the Liberdade (1 Replies, 2,839 Views) by Deadrise
Some background if anyone is curious
The Aquidneck
The Slocum family continued on their next ship, the 326-ton Aquidneck.
In 1886 Aquidneck sailed through a hurricane. Near the end of 1887, the...
Thread: Birth of the Liberdade (1 Replies, 2,839 Views) by Deadrise
Birth of the Liberdade
Flags are flying
Seas are rising
Making way towards home
Weather ahead
Secure the decks
All hands look lively
Thread: Last Watch (1 Replies, 5,042 Views) by Deadrise
First Watch
Flags are flying, seas are rising
Secure the decks all hands look lively
Middle Watch
Surfing through the foam, force 12 the rig moans
One eye on the glass, it’s still building
...
Thread: Looking forward to tonight (0 Replies, 981 Views) by Deadrise
Its 2AM, days got to end
Gonna take some time to mend
Rest your head and your sorrow
You can deal with them tomorrow
Open your eyes, there still here
All your worries and your fears
Step out...
Thread: Breath (5 Replies, 3,043 Views) by Deadrise
No worries, I understand. Seems every time I go out for a smoke something new comes to my head.
Just adding my 2 cents.
Thread: Breath (5 Replies, 3,043 Views) by Deadrise
Matt
I like it all except for the "The light in your eyes is fading in" line. I'm not qualified to critique just wanted to offer my opinion.
Keep, em coming.
Thread: Wish I never met you (0 Replies, 1,045 Views) by Deadrise
Your smile, your grace
I can’t forget the day I met you
Brown eyes, tanned face
You took my breath away
We were young, just having fun, days with no end
Then life took you away
For a time it...
Thread: Give a shi# Song (light hearted country I guess) (0 Replies, 935 Views) by Deadrise
I once liked to fish and ride my motorcycle
Guns were fun, would even sometimes run
I once liked to draw and play my old guitar
Sailing was fun, just lazing in the sun
Now all I do is sit...
Thread: Its Time For You To Go ( Bad, bad place revisited - Lighter) (0 Replies, 695 Views) by Deadrise
It’s time for you to go
You’ve taken more than my heart can hold
Should have listened when I was told
Learned my lesson now I’m old
Really believed your heart was gold
I thought you gave...
Thread: Wish I had another cigarette (3 Replies, 2,682 Views) by Deadrise
Revised the words, like it much more now.
I am drunk and that’s no joke
I’ll be honest can’t lie
When I drink it gets me
I just want one more try
My friends say it’s in my head
These nails...
Thread: Wish I had another cigarette (3 Replies, 2,682 Views) by Deadrise
Thank you for the feedback bear,
Keep submitting you stuff I enjoy how you express your thoughts.
Thread: I’m gonna fly (0 Replies, 1,066 Views) by Deadrise
I’m gonna fly
Feeling overwhelmed
Lost my wife I got no friends
Life aint got to much to offer
I wonder every day how it will end
Need to end this downward trend
My life is in a spin
I...
Thread: I'm in a bad bad place (0 Replies, 891 Views) by Deadrise
I’m on a bad bad road
You've taken more that my heart can hold
I should have listened when I was told
But I thought your heart was gold
You said you gave yourself to me
It’s now plain to...
Thread: Wish I had another cigarette (3 Replies, 2,682 Views) by Deadrise
Wish I had another cigarette
I am drunk and that’s no joke
But I want just want one more smoke
Wish I had another cigarette
Hope the whisky it gets me
Before I go flat broke
Wish I had...