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Thread: CRAZY LYFE(rap/hip hop) new!! best song i did (2 Replies, 1,809 Views) by miketheman4
its good, stay up, put some more stuff out, id like to read it, good job!
Thread: Breaking Point.....Plz comment (1 Replies, 1,142 Views) by miketheman4
this is deep. its got zest. i give it a thumbs up, good job
Thread: My Rap, please read! (20 Replies, 102,257 Views) by miketheman4
dude, i liked it, it was real. it kind of sounded like nas
Thread: First Song Ever - constructive criticism please :) (20 Replies, 3,256 Views) by miketheman4
nice, its all real stuff. i can picture everything your saying. good job!
Thread: Hope- dedicated to places going through tough times. Please comment. (0 Replies, 971 Views) by miketheman4
We all have got to make a change
because right now we dont have money to make change
look around, the whole world is strange
and as I take a walk, and look around
im surrounded by the bad
I try...
Thread: Bright (0 Replies, 856 Views) by miketheman4
Well to start I dont really know whats going on
one thing that I do know is that the whole world is going wrong
it seems like theyre all out to get me
but just so you know, all this bullshit, it...
Thread: The Great Depression...feedback please (0 Replies, 758 Views) by miketheman4
Why does everything have to happen
why cant people just move past the acting
whats wrong with me
I know that all the odds are against me
this is the saddest I have ever been
I want to see the...
Thread: The Great Depression...feedback please (0 Replies, 807 Views) by miketheman4
Why does everything have to happen
why cant people just move past the acting
whats wrong with me
I know that all the odds are against me
this is the saddest I have ever been
I want to see the...
Thread: The Great Depression (0 Replies, 894 Views) by miketheman4
Why does everything have to happen
why cant people just move past the acting
whats wrong with me
I know that all the odds are against me
this is the saddest I have ever been
I want to see the...
Thread: One Life-comment (2 Replies, 1,016 Views) by miketheman4
ha yeah, i accidently worded that wrong, thats my bad, i missed it when i was editing it
Thread: One Life-comment (2 Replies, 1,016 Views) by miketheman4
So now is the time
Where do I go
There are no more options
But times running slow
So just before I go I just wanted to say
That there is nothing more to say
I'm gone like the wind, but this...
Thread: another rap, feedback please (2 Replies, 1,171 Views) by miketheman4
this is really good, i like how it flows, its got rythm...also i really like some of your metaphores, overall its pretty tight
Thread: New rap/poem-please comment (1 Replies, 2,339 Views) by miketheman4
guess I lost you to some guy
but really it feels like I lost you to the sky
so if your up there let me know what it feels like to let go
but baby I got no control
and eventually I thought id let...
Thread: Read my Rap/Poem (0 Replies, 1,236 Views) by miketheman4
Hearts break
My body shakes as the whole entire world quakes
Iv’e come down to it all
Either I brake or I stand tall
And in the mist I see a light that shines way too bright
The sight alone...