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Thread: Need title~ please read!!! (6 Replies, 2,255 Views) by Acheramee
Yeah, it was kinda a parent and teenager relationship song. What can I say, Mom's can be great inspirations sometimes....just maybe for the wrong reasons every once in a while. Anyway, thanks for the...
Thread: Need title~ please read!!! (6 Replies, 2,255 Views) by Acheramee
I need a good title, something interesting.
Complements appreciated. Criticism wanted.
here goes:
You take our plans and pull them from our heads
But we take our secrets into our beds
...
Thread: First song in a while. Untitled so far. (7 Replies, 1,612 Views) by Acheramee
"they failed to mention that eventually everything ends
and within her cold heart lies mine, frozen once again" ~favorite part! :-)
Very emotional with a little hint of dramatic flair. Very nice....
Thread: "My Christmas Eve" (0 Replies, 968 Views) by Acheramee
“My Christmas Eve”
I know it’s a cliché
But it seems like only yesterday
I heard you were gone
And at the happiest time of the year
I could have asked for something better
But now it’s that...
Thread: take me away - need help (7 Replies, 2,738 Views) by Acheramee
The rhythm's really cool which is a bonus nowadays. The verses are my favorite parts. Good for your first song.
Thread: When That Mill Whistle Used To Blow (2 Replies, 1,013 Views) by Acheramee
I hate Country and anything that even remotely sounds like country, but I like the rhythm and rhyming scheme.
Thread: Truth or Dare (3 Replies, 1,412 Views) by Acheramee
Cool idea. It's original and that's refreshing. Keep it up. Nice work.
Thread: "You'll Find A Way" (1 Replies, 945 Views) by Acheramee
I wrote this song for my best friend who just found out that her only sister has cancer and it's a rare type, so it's hard to treat. She was gone for a while, and then when I saw her again, she was...
Thread: How do you write your lyrics? (28 Replies, 6,743 Views) by Acheramee
"Personally, I only write when something pops into my head."
Same here. I can be anywhere and the suddenly a line will float around in my head and then once I write it down, the rest comes along...
Thread: Hey little girl...My new song (3 Replies, 1,902 Views) by Acheramee
I love the song.It's so full of feeling. I can really relate to it. I love this part:
"Hey little girl,
Ive been you once"
Thread: "Rap" Lyrics That I Wrote Bored (6 Replies, 8,435 Views) by Acheramee
Wow, you guys are crazy. Not into rap though, just my personal oppinion, but the original song was pretty good for rap, have fun!
Thread: Paper Planes Remix (5 Replies, 1,801 Views) by Acheramee
I love the idea of a remix. Like the lyrics too. I kinda still like the original better, but this one's really cool. Good Job!
Thread: Give It A Few More Years (Parker, Reuter) (5 Replies, 2,417 Views) by Acheramee
Awesome!I love songs that tell a story. This one's pretty cool.I Like it.
Thread: I didnt think so...my new song! (5 Replies, 1,900 Views) by Acheramee
Yes!I found it. I was waiting for your song, and I wasn't disappointed. You have a natural talent for writing songs that people can relate to, that you feel yourself. That's really awesome, good job!
Thread: "This way" (2 Replies, 1,968 Views) by Acheramee
Gee, thanks, Angel.
Thread: Are You Afraid? (3 Replies, 2,112 Views) by Acheramee
LOL, very demonic but in a very strange way I kinda like it. Can't wait for another one of your late night brain storms!
Thread: Danger (2 Replies, 1,934 Views) by Acheramee
Verse 1 and the 1st part of the chorus are sooo good. I love it. Good Job!
Thread: All Fear, Lust, and Need... plz give some feedback :D (11 Replies, 3,522 Views) by Acheramee
LOL, the genre really matches the song. I can't wait to hear the rest. It sounds like it's going to be really good.
Thread: sick lyrics? (5 Replies, 2,987 Views) by Acheramee
The first verse really got my attention. That is really good for your first time. Mine were like blah for my first. That's really cool and original. Do you have a tune to it? Just wondering. :-)
Thread: First Lyrics (12 Replies, 16,694 Views) by Acheramee
I really like this part:
"Flashing through the trees, in golden green
With a machine, the end of things"
And this part:
"Red and white collide to sink the sun
I want it now but now it’s done"...
Thread: "This way" (2 Replies, 1,968 Views) by Acheramee
“This Way”
Towards the end
I held my breath
Let the tears begin
They’re the only thing I have left
To give
Chorus: I stood my ground
As I felt it shake
Thread: i have a mystery song (0 Replies, 951 Views) by Acheramee
I heard this song in Taco Belll. I know a guy sings it and that the first part sounds like Jars of Clay's "closer".Some of the words are " i love you too" and either "i need you" or "I see you"....
Thread: mYSTERY SONG (0 Replies, 1,100 Views) by Acheramee
Ok, i have a mystery song. the beginning sounds sort of like the beginning of Jars of Clay "closer".The only words i know are "i see you", and i think "I love you so" or "I love you too" but im not...
Thread: First Song Ever - constructive criticism please :) (20 Replies, 3,256 Views) by Acheramee
Do you write the music for your songs?
Thread: im only 12 years old and i wrote this rap in 15 minutes (21 Replies, 3,492 Views) by Acheramee
yo, Phil, you just got told, man
Thread: First Song Ever - constructive criticism please :) (20 Replies, 3,256 Views) by Acheramee
Oh my goodness, I LOVE this song!!!!And it's your first one??????That's awesome!!Are you going to post anymore?
Thread: "Just A Joke" (0 Replies, 1,159 Views) by Acheramee
“Just a Joke”
Strangled with the thoughts of losing again
Another example of an absent friend
Eyes full of longing, a face so thin
Look in the mirror, say it’s the end
Now it’s getting even...
Thread: A Spirit's Cry (comment please) (9 Replies, 2,129 Views) by Acheramee
Ok, really dramatic, but really cool.That's awesome.Keep it up!
Thread: "Can't Leave it Alone" a random song (0 Replies, 1,319 Views) by Acheramee
“Can’t Leave It Alone”
Strangled with the thoughts of losing again
Another example of an absent friend
Eyes full of longing, a face so thin
Look in the mirror, say it’s the end
Now it’s...
Thread: 2 songs(please comment) (3 Replies, 1,942 Views) by Acheramee
Very very sad.I like the second. It's so sad. But that's ok, I love sad songs.Good job!
Thread: Eliminate (7 Replies, 2,048 Views) by Acheramee
Very original, un fortunately it doesn't really rhyme. Yet in a funny way i like it like that. Cool!
Thread: "Who You Are">PLEASE COMMENT (2 Replies, 1,268 Views) by Acheramee
Didn't know where else to put it, so breathe in breathe out, here's my song.
Who You Are
Ever wonder why your shadow is so small
Because we throw away what’s worth and count the rest as all...
Thread: Song Lyrics Competition (14 Replies, 6,738 Views) by Acheramee
so, it has to be about either of those two topics? wow.
Thread: Better Song Lyrics Competition :P (16 Replies, 4,706 Views) by Acheramee
Hopefully people get to comment?
Thread: Tomorrow's Sorrow - Opinions (7 Replies, 3,678 Views) by Acheramee
Oh, what’s inside
Is not what’s seen
Trying to hide
What’s underneath
We put that twinkle in our eyes
We face the life that we despise
Trying hard not to cry
But sometimes we wonder why
Thread: My song :"Falling Apart" (22 Replies, 10,075 Views) by Acheramee
What was slang?
Thread: All for What [Comments Appreciated!] (12 Replies, 2,045 Views) by Acheramee
I know what you mean, some songs flow and you get into the groove, others fail miserably and they look and sound bad. And then you feel discouraged.
Thread: My song :"Falling Apart" (22 Replies, 10,075 Views) by Acheramee
Thanks. that was one of my favorite parts too. So, again, thanks.
Thread: Let Me Rest In Peace (comment please :P) (7 Replies, 1,733 Views) by Acheramee
No, no, no, except for that one phrase, you did extremely well. It has a lot of good qualities. You did a great job. Why did you write it? Did it just sound like a good idea? or was it some how...
Thread: All for What [Comments Appreciated!] (12 Replies, 2,045 Views) by Acheramee
he he, man! You're good. It usually takes me forever., but other times, on good days, it will only take a few, well maybe not, about ten or fifteen to twenty minutes, depending on what type of song...
Thread: Working on a song... need comments (4 Replies, 2,070 Views) by Acheramee
Personally, notsonice language doesn't work well in songs. Especially the type you're using. But, um very um interesting. Maybe try a love song or depressing songs. You might do better on that. just...
Thread: If I could (4 Replies, 1,202 Views) by Acheramee
Yeah, I agree 100% on rabbitdrive's comment. The "If I could part" was a good title and get's some one's attention, the chorus is vivid and nice, but the only thing that really worried me was that...
Thread: "When she leaves this time" (2 versions) (2 Replies, 1,135 Views) by Acheramee
The first is better, in my opinion.Both are really nice.
Thread: My song :"Falling Apart" (22 Replies, 10,075 Views) by Acheramee
Thanks :)
Thread: Tears Gone cold (comments appreciated) (0 Replies, 1,779 Views) by Acheramee
I wrote this one in a hurry,So it's definitely not the best it could be. it's a bout a giirl or guy talking to someone who apparently had big ideas and dreams and it was all working, but then...
Thread: My song :"Falling Apart" (22 Replies, 10,075 Views) by Acheramee
Well, the part "It was in my heart and now it's waking" has a personal significance. Something me, and even my family went through. The whole song refers to that. This part" it’s just a waste of time...
Thread: Shadow (6 Replies, 3,774 Views) by Acheramee
Naa, I love confusing, It's so simple yet, it really brings the sweetness out, like a normal person is saying it. I like that .Great job!
Thread: Everyone is crazy but me (Please comment?) (6 Replies, 2,441 Views) by Acheramee
LOL, like this part
Everyone is crazy,
And it’s sending me insane,
What a civilization,
What a sweet terrain,
These broken bottles,
Bottle up the brain,
Splashing around,
In the falling...
Thread: Let Me Rest In Peace (comment please :P) (7 Replies, 1,733 Views) by Acheramee
Well, it's certainly a good idea, but I'm not fond of using not-so-nice language in songs, somehow it ruins the beauty of them.I would like it a lot better if you skipped out that one phrase in the...
Thread: slow techno songs (0 Replies, 6,479 Views) by Acheramee
This sounds really weird, but what I mean is songs like Mark Ceol's "for those you love" and DJ tiesto's "Close to you"
http://www.acidplanet.com/components/embedfile.asp?asset=1082945&T=4766
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