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• "Now You're Gone" (working title and incomplete)

  Thread: "Now You're Gone" (working title and incomplete) (1 Replies, 1,753 Views) by singthesorrowx666

  
  

  verse 1:
  
  Let the light just touch your face
  No longer here, his soul set free
  Let the darkness fade away
  No longer here, where all hope bleeds
  
  
  chorus maybe:

• I like your thinking, but I have to keep the last...

  Thread: "Remember Me" (4 Replies, 1,399 Views) by singthesorrowx666

  
  

  I like your thinking, but I have to keep the last two lines of the chorus as they are for the rhythm.. Unfortunately its become a case of the music being more important than the lyrics :(

• thanks for the well thought out comment :) I...

  Thread: "Remember Me" (4 Replies, 1,399 Views) by singthesorrowx666

  
  

  thanks for the well thought out comment :)
  
  
  I know the song's a bit weak, so I guess it needs a tune-up... I'm not sure about the use of heart either, but that will definitely be tweaked before...

• "Remember Me"

  Thread: "Remember Me" (4 Replies, 1,399 Views) by singthesorrowx666

  
  

  hey... this is my first post, a song dedicated to my late boyfriend. Creative criticism appreciated before I take it to my band x thanks x
  
  
  
  I lost all faith in you
  **** the trust, **** my...