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Thread: 'When You Think Of Me' (2 Replies, 1,431 Views) by Ruderz
Yeah it is isn't it lol.
Thread: 'Cross My Heart And Hope To Die; Just To Be By Your Side' (2 Replies, 2,653 Views) by Ruderz
Thanks :)
Thread: 'Cross My Heart And Hope To Die; Just To Be By Your Side' (2 Replies, 2,653 Views) by Ruderz
The days are getting colder,
And we are growing older,
My life seems to have no reason,
It is filled only with treason,
Then I close my eyes at night and I begin to dream,
The scent of you...
Thread: 'My Little Savior' (0 Replies, 845 Views) by Ruderz
Have you ever had a friend?
Just a real, true and honest friend?
One you could trust with your life,
Your soul, your secrets, your strife....
What we had was perfect,
But no-one understood...
Thread: 'When You Think Of Me' (2 Replies, 1,431 Views) by Ruderz
I can’t escape it...
It’s taking over me bit-by-bit...
I close my eyes and it’s waiting there,
Ready to pounce, no moment to spare,
I hate it and I love it at the same god-damn time,
No time...
Thread: 'Our Lives are Parallel' (1 Replies, 2,097 Views) by Ruderz
Why is it always me?
Who tries and fails to see,
What was given to me?
Are you happy with him?
And it’s not just a whim?
My lights go dark and dim...
Forget about a kid,
Whose name would have...
Thread: Goodbye (6 Replies, 1,764 Views) by Ruderz
:(
Why leaving?
Good-bye :(
Thread: Theres only one of you (3 Replies, 1,307 Views) by Ruderz
Very, good work. Outstanding.
Thread: Remeber Me (14 Replies, 3,943 Views) by Ruderz
This is good so far! Nice and emotional. Try to remember about spacing however, after a comma ( , ) you have a space.
This is wrong: He kicked the ball,playing in the garden.
This is correct:...
Thread: And They F*cked (7 Replies, 3,631 Views) by Ruderz
This was really good, a very nice subject to write about.
Thread: Cry#2 [ Rap ] (3 Replies, 977 Views) by Ruderz
I applaud this. Great work.
Thread: Are these lyrics okay, and what should the title be? (4 Replies, 1,080 Views) by Ruderz
'Fire of Passion'
Thread: 'Why Love Hurts' (3 Replies, 1,382 Views) by Ruderz
Cheers guys!
Thread: 'Unexpected Twists' (7 Replies, 1,454 Views) by Ruderz
Thanks! :D
Thread: 'Unexpected Twists' (7 Replies, 1,454 Views) by Ruderz
That's the power of lyrics folks, can do miracles. You're welcome Paris13. :)
Thread: 'Unexpected Twists' (7 Replies, 1,454 Views) by Ruderz
(For Paris13)
Woah, what an Unexpected Twist!
I didn’t think you were such a *****!
You had my heart in your safe,
Little did I know you’re nothing but a knave!
You think you can f*ck me...
Thread: who is a better song writer (11 Replies, 2,098 Views) by Ruderz
The arrived guy, from what I've seen of him, is a *******. ;)
Thread: 'Why Love Hurts' (3 Replies, 1,382 Views) by Ruderz
You know you never expect it,
When you’re landed with bad ****!
And you feel like it’s over,
You’ve ran out of four leafed clovers!
You think “What am I doing?
I know I’m gonna start losing,...
Thread: 'Sick of Your Games' (0 Replies, 2,023 Views) by Ruderz
Now to start us off,
I want to say first-off,
I never wanted to do this, to sit and write these words,
But you pushed me to my limit, and these words are superb!
I don’t why you’re doing this, ...
Thread: haha, my boyfriend just broke up with me so I wrote a song (9 Replies, 3,549 Views) by Ruderz
That's pretty deep, and emotional. Sorry to hear about your ex.
Thread: Make your line, (9 Replies, 1,123 Views) by Ruderz
And how does that make you feel? (So we're not rhyming the same sounds over and over again... we should change it sometimes.)
Thread: Make your line, (9 Replies, 1,123 Views) by Ruderz
This love potion that I clearly need for you,
Thread: Heyy ^.^ (4 Replies, 1,887 Views) by Ruderz
Cheers guys!
Thread: Who's me?? (comments are welcome!!) (15 Replies, 2,463 Views) by Ruderz
Only one song posted, but you've seen it and posted in it. :)
And you're welcome! :)
Thread: "Now It's All Apart" | I'm new to the site (2 Replies, 1,512 Views) by Ruderz
A piece of advice I would give to you is to make your verses longer.
But on a good note, I like the chorus.
Thread: Senseless(please comment) (3 Replies, 1,824 Views) by Ruderz
This song is like, a replica of what's been happining to me xD
Thread: Make your line, (9 Replies, 1,123 Views) by Ruderz
I regret hanging with that crew
Thread: 'This Song is for You' (6 Replies, 1,663 Views) by Ruderz
Thank you guys! :D Really makes me happy that you guys think it's beautiful. :D
I'm impatient, so I posted Anyone? as a way of asking people to review it. Yeah, I know, I'm an arsehole lol.
...
Thread: Make your line, (9 Replies, 1,123 Views) by Ruderz
And me getting you is due,
(great idea btw.)
Thread: Who's me?? (comments are welcome!!) (15 Replies, 2,463 Views) by Ruderz
I've never been, but I love the Outback and animals etc... My uncle and cousins live somewhere along the coast I think.. I'm not too sure.
I write emotional raps, so inbetween songs and poems.
Thread: Who's me?? (comments are welcome!!) (15 Replies, 2,463 Views) by Ruderz
And I have family in Austrailia, and I love the country. :)
Thread: Hi! I've just registered! (16 Replies, 3,383 Views) by Ruderz
Welcome along!
Thread: Too Late!! (10 Replies, 3,262 Views) by Ruderz
The Hook doesn't have to be the song title however, you find song artists who name their songs one name, and don't even mention it in the song, however you still find yourself singing along in the...
Thread: 'This Song is for You' (6 Replies, 1,663 Views) by Ruderz
Anyone?
Thread: Please comment on this song i wrote for the girl i like (6 Replies, 5,235 Views) by Ruderz
3,2,1
Here we go
Lets start our show
This bit, I loved.
And go for it my friend, it's always worth the shot. Your reputation is worth the risk.
Thread: Who's me?? (comments are welcome!!) (15 Replies, 2,463 Views) by Ruderz
I have to say, most of mine also come from past experiences and draw from my own feelings. lol.
Thread: Heyy ^.^ (4 Replies, 1,887 Views) by Ruderz
Heyy there guys!
I'm Martin Bell, from Irvine Scotland. I'm 14, going on 15 in February.
My main hobbies is Music (a-duh lol), Gaming, Karate and Efedding. :)
I'm a song writer, and I mainly...
Thread: Simple/ Noob lyric song. (8 Replies, 1,571 Views) by Ruderz
I do indeedy like this song
It had a nice beat all along
And even if it was made for fun
It was a nice thought now it's done.
:)
Thread: Love song i wrote about a girl i like. Please comment. (15 Replies, 7,809 Views) by Ruderz
I like the rhymes... Nice and deep, I also like "Emily, just be with me" because "ily" and "me" rhyme together. Nicee...
Thread: Too Late!! (10 Replies, 3,262 Views) by Ruderz
I like this, I can relate to this song too! I really like the whole feel to it.
Thread: Contradiction (first post on site, first song ever wrtten) (1 Replies, 1,088 Views) by Ruderz
I indeed like this, really dark and deep. I like it!
Thread: Simple Abc's Please Comment!!!!!!!! (7 Replies, 3,259 Views) by Ruderz
That is really good, I laughed out loud whilst reading.
"One of them just ate a shoe"
Made me lol. XD
Thread: Who's me?? (comments are welcome!!) (15 Replies, 2,463 Views) by Ruderz
I love the idea of this song, I really like it. I also like the chorus, and I can relate to it lol.
Thread: 'This Song is for You' (6 Replies, 1,663 Views) by Ruderz
Where could I begin?
To sing this song and repent my sins?
I find this too hard to just say...
So I’ll sing this song everyday.
You are the sun in my solar system,
The producer in my ecosystem,...