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Thread: Crimson Night (2 Replies, 1,820 Views) by JeffM
Best song ever.
Thread: "Memories" (0 Replies, 1,394 Views) by JeffM
This is a song I wrote maybe 4-5 months back, and currently the only one that I finished writing music too as well. If I receive good feedback I may post a recording. Be honest with me about it :)
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Thread: Love is Grand (2 Replies, 2,012 Views) by JeffM
Thank you! I appreciate that. And thank you for finding the other typo, I will fix it now :D
Thread: Love is Grand (2 Replies, 2,012 Views) by JeffM
Who am I to write a song
To tell the world where I belong
Lyrics of the past to view
Fail to say something new
So instead I'll try to find
A way that I can clear my mind
Focus on the thought...
Thread: Misunderstood (3 Replies, 1,589 Views) by JeffM
I like these lyrics, really captures the thoughts behind people in situations like these. Great job with it. When you get the chance, would you kindly look at some lyrics I posted about a year ago? I...
Thread: Take the Light and Shine it (0 Replies, 2,487 Views) by JeffM
Well here we are
After Dark
Moonlight shining in
And as we lay
It's hard to say
Where my mind has been
I wish that I could be
The one to make you see
Just what you have to give
Thread: No One Cares (5 Replies, 1,723 Views) by JeffM
I absolutely agree with you there. I have found that when I'm having a rough time and I write about it, by the time I am finished my emotion has left me. Almost as if it has been transferred out of...
Thread: Choke (4 Replies, 1,763 Views) by JeffM
This song has quite a strong emotion, and made me think of some of the things that have happened lately in my life. Great job!
Thread: End It (6 Replies, 1,775 Views) by JeffM
Thank you, I appreciate the reception I have had so far from all of you. This is actually the first song I ever wrote, and it seems you got the feeling that I had when I wrote this.
Thread: Crimson Night (2 Replies, 1,820 Views) by JeffM
Listen up now, remember every word
Pay attention, I'll only say this once
Listen to my voice...
You hear me!?
Lift those fists, one more time
Strike her flesh, you'll be mine
Thread: End It (6 Replies, 1,775 Views) by JeffM
That is some good advice, and I will certainly work on a slightly altered scheme. I read a few of your lyrics so far, and they are pretty good. Always seems to have a good message between the lines....
Thread: End It (6 Replies, 1,775 Views) by JeffM
Thank you, I always appreciate tips. What exactly do you mean by adding a little bit more? I'm rather new to writing lyrics and just started because of some recent inspiration. Are you referring to...
Thread: End It (6 Replies, 1,775 Views) by JeffM
Can someone please tell me why
I really don’t understand
Girls just go for the bad guy
They get the back of his hand
It will not happen again
But these words he said before
He says he loves...
Thread: Decision Time (0 Replies, 1,431 Views) by JeffM
How stupid I've been
Living this way
How stupid I've been
Letting you play
These games are finished
My will's diminished
Decision time
Will you be mine?
Thread: Nothing Changes (0 Replies, 1,400 Views) by JeffM
Another night
Another dream
Another lie
I tell myself
Ive tried forgetting
Tried deserting
Tried Convincing
Nothing changes
Thread: Have You Truly Won? (0 Replies, 1,699 Views) by JeffM
Impressed at the start
I gave you my heart
I felt you were it
Then it turned to s***
Weeks passed as I learned
That all I had earned
Was a broken heart
You damned from the start
Thread: Cursed To Love (13 Replies, 2,478 Views) by JeffM
I just started looking on this forum and I'm glad I did. This is the second song I have read, and it is really good. The first one I read was good as well. Some great lyricists on this site, glad I...
Thread: Just Another Suicide (5 Replies, 4,960 Views) by JeffM
I just looked at this website for the first time. I wanted to look at some metal lyrics because I have been writing a bit myself. I have to say, these lyrics are really, really good. Amazing job.