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Thread: I'm Not Going To Cry (4 Replies, 2,082 Views) by SlimCahill
Wayne, Awesome lyrics great story!! I agree with Mr.Alexander ....just smooth it out a little and its a hit.
Slim
Thread: Stolen Heart (0 Replies, 1,606 Views) by SlimCahill
Stolen Heart
Copyrights 2011 Slim Cahill
Who's gonna take it gently not break it
the passion is there, my passion is right
steal my heart like a thief in the night
a stolen heart is what...
Thread: I'll Hold Your Heart In My Soul (3 Replies, 2,648 Views) by SlimCahill
SkylarNicole, Thank you I'm glad you liked it....wait till you here it.
ironynotlost, Thank you sir, lol on "old farts dance". It was a neighbor I had when I was a kid in the old neighbor hood.> "...
Thread: A few I have started let me know how they are. (2 Replies, 1,682 Views) by SlimCahill
Well I'll give you a pointer on one.
"I am the enemy*
What do i do
Where do I go
All I see*
All I see is hate
Hate is all I am
All I'll be
Thread: More Than Friends (7 Replies, 3,222 Views) by SlimCahill
Awesome lyrics. I really like :
My nights are full of dreaming of what our life could be,
My days are wasted in reality,
Although there are a lot of good lines in this song, I like that one the...
Thread: I'll Hold Your Heart In My Soul (3 Replies, 2,648 Views) by SlimCahill
I wrote this a few months ago its kind of a very soft rock or country rock song
Think of it as a male/female duet. I'm currently working on the music.
I'll Hold Your Heart In My Soul
(c) Slim...
Thread: Ideas for "our song" (3 Replies, 12,800 Views) by SlimCahill
How about a song I wrote called, "I'll Hold Your Heart In My Soul"
http://soundcloud.com/slimcahill/if-tomorrow-should-ever-end
Slim
Thread: Need a co-op songwriter for now and future! (6 Replies, 5,411 Views) by SlimCahill
Hey Nick you are awesome! I write a lot of lyrics for all kinds of music. I have a book published with some of my work called " Songs That Need To Be Written". Check out my blog with some samples not...
Thread: Ok what do you all think about this one " If Tomorrow Should Ever End " (0 Replies, 1,382 Views) by SlimCahill
If Tomorrow Should Ever End
(c) Slim Cahill 6/29/2011
It seems our walks take a bit longer
ev'n though they're much shorter
and a simple task seems to get harder
with every year gone past.....
Thread: Not Together But Not Alone (what you think) (1 Replies, 965 Views) by SlimCahill
With all the views and no comments does it mean my lyrics are no good?
Thread: Rockin The Universe ( what ya think?) (1 Replies, 1,176 Views) by SlimCahill
I guess with all the views nobody likes my lyrics
Thread: Cults and so on (4 Replies, 1,754 Views) by SlimCahill
Thats awesome!
Thread: Rooftops (3 Replies, 1,552 Views) by SlimCahill
I like it too its very good nice flow
Thread: Title: Lost ( tell me what you think) (1 Replies, 1,237 Views) by SlimCahill
Good content but too much detail. When you read it to yourself try to hum music to it and see what you think. just my thoughts
Thread: Time Heals (2 Replies, 1,480 Views) by SlimCahill
I like it but I cant feel the beat or music. Its very good though.
Thread: Is someone interested in writing lyrics for the following song?? (Katy Perry style) (4 Replies, 6,277 Views) by SlimCahill
Wow I really like your melodies I know I could write to them but I may already have something that fits. I will see what I have. If not i will try to write one. I've got over 200 lyrics written.
Thread: Hate Crime...(Full Track Lyrics) (Wrote By JD) (3 Replies, 1,763 Views) by SlimCahill
I like it a lot
Thread: Turned Down Heaven (1 Replies, 1,921 Views) by SlimCahill
Its good but verse 3 shouldnt be any longer than the other 2 verses..
just opinion
Thread: My Setting Sun (6 Replies, 1,751 Views) by SlimCahill
Sounds good so far but I do agree on the structure change
Thread: Not Together But Not Alone (what you think) (1 Replies, 965 Views) by SlimCahill
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Thread: Rockin The Universe ( what ya think?) (1 Replies, 1,176 Views) by SlimCahill
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Thread: Hi all nooby here (1 Replies, 1,548 Views) by SlimCahill
My name is slim and I've been writing lyrics for some time now I have a book coming out soon.
I hope to make some friends here and get some reviews on my lyrics.