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Thread: when love turns on you (1 Replies, 1,415 Views) by thischick
Breakin up,
Puts you through so much.
Start to see things differently.
Don’t put yourself through the mental torture
“why wont he love me?”
its not you,
don’t think like that,
and its not...
Thread: SOLVED Please help identify a song (3 Replies, 1,018 Views) by thischick
do you know any of the lyrics?
Thread: A song about " RAIN" (27 Replies, 20,789 Views) by thischick
this is a little late i think but theres also
Like The Rain by Clint Black:
I never liked the rain until I walked through it with you
Every thunder cloud that came was one more I might not get...
Thread: song about giving a relationship a second try (4 Replies, 6,220 Views) by thischick
im gonna ask him.
i just dont know if i should wait a little bit to see what happens or if i should just ask him and not waste any time..
Thread: song about giving a relationship a second try (4 Replies, 6,220 Views) by thischick
so i dated this guy for a few months, but something happened and we couldnt see eachother for about a few weeks. so we ended up breaking up. and we stopped talking completely. but now we have started...
Thread: just another day (1 Replies, 1,066 Views) by thischick
theres something about this i really like
Thread: i wrote this about a stupid guy (4 Replies, 1,386 Views) by thischick
haha i agree "Ultimate Worrier"
haha and i was venting. so yeah, youre right.
Thread: Deleting Posts (3 Replies, 3,575 Views) by thischick
well like.. i can stilll edit it but i dont see anything that says "delete message"
Thread: i wrote this about a stupid guy (4 Replies, 1,386 Views) by thischick
thanks. i think it definately needs some work. but im workin on it.
Thread: mixed feelings .. (3 Replies, 4,649 Views) by thischick
for the one where you knew he was a player but you didnt care or whatever, try "so what" by ciara.
Thread: want him to know im better than her..... (18 Replies, 29,384 Views) by thischick
ok wow im going through something almost the exact same as you. and ive been looking for songs like that too. i havent found many.
but theres "let me love you" by mario.
"be with me" by j.holiday...
Thread: Betrayal Causes Success (2 Replies, 1,862 Views) by thischick
it seems more like a story that rhymes than lyrics. (no offense)
Thread: Figure It Out (rough Draft 1) (6 Replies, 3,286 Views) by thischick
"All I know is that
You'r enot the boss of me"
im not sure i get how this fits into the song.
it sounds like its about someone lying or cheating so i dont understand why you would say they arent...
Thread: A Millie A Millie - Freestyle (2 Replies, 2,510 Views) by thischick
i think these are good lyrics.
Thread: simple questions (2 Replies, 2,395 Views) by thischick
i like these lyrics.
i dont quite get the last line, but i really like these parts:
'Around that point I wake up
With a knife in my chest
Finding myself laying in a bed where a lonely man...
Thread: My Turn (6 Replies, 1,600 Views) by thischick
i think its ok. i kinda dont get why its a "complicated relationship"
but other than that, its pretty good.
maybe add a little more detail.
Thread: im looking for songs that get you "ampted up" (0 Replies, 1,901 Views) by thischick
i play sports and i like to listen to music before games that get me ready. upbeat songs are best.
any suggestions?
Thread: I miss you- read and review (2 Replies, 1,391 Views) by thischick
i really like the chorus. and i like :
"cause we never looked
into the future
didn't care about the ending"
Thread: Texas Country__1st attempt at writing music. (3 Replies, 1,640 Views) by thischick
haha wow. that is really good. :)
Thread: we're over.. (1 Replies, 1,080 Views) by thischick
i think this is really good. i like the whole thing, especially the chorus.
i also really like this part :
"a love that had to fall
i wish it wouldn't of happened at all
i'm missing your love...
Thread: the real me (2 Replies, 1,382 Views) by thischick
i agree with 'spudmunky' haha.
what you have is good, and i think if you built on it, and added more, it could be very good.
Thread: Live Your Life (1 Replies, 1,611 Views) by thischick
i like it. its really original. i dont know that ive ever heard a song (especially a rap) that just says to live your life and not care what anyone thinks.
Thread: New to Lyric Writing...."All Again" (1 Replies, 971 Views) by thischick
i think this is really good. especially since youre new to writing.
and i really like the chorus.
Thread: First Alternative-Type Song (1 Replies, 1,401 Views) by thischick
i think its really good.
Thread: Day by the Sea (1 Replies, 856 Views) by thischick
its good. theres no chorus though. so it just seems more like a poem than a song. but i like it.
Thread: Half of us - read and review (2 Replies, 2,292 Views) by thischick
this song is realllly good.
i totally got what you were trying to say.
i wish i could actually hear it haha.
Thread: Why- Please read and review (1 Replies, 1,593 Views) by thischick
i think its pretty good. it would probably sound even better with the tune haha.
i like the chorus alot.
Thread: My rap lyrics (6 Replies, 15,201 Views) by thischick
its ok. i think its kind of hard to understand exactly what youre trying to say.
its obvious you can rhyme.
dont worry so much about it rhyming perfectly.
just make sure you get your point across.
Thread: Heartbroken- Please read and review (1 Replies, 1,230 Views) by thischick
"it acctually hurts to be heartbroken
you acctually fall out of place"
"cause I don't want it
thought I did"
- i really like those parts.
i think its pretty good.
original too.
Thread: i wrote this about a stupid guy (4 Replies, 1,386 Views) by thischick
that was jsut a cop-out
dont even know what this is about
im sick of this b***s***
dont make me shout
you took my trust and turned it all into doubt
baby that was just a cop-out
you sit here...
Thread: Deleting Posts (3 Replies, 3,575 Views) by thischick
how do you delete lyrics after youve posted them?
Thread: a song i wrote called horrible kiss (6 Replies, 3,392 Views) by thischick
i think its a good start.
haha maybe dont put so many "yeah"s.
Thread: Bam's Unholy Union Ep. 1 (2 Replies, 3,183 Views) by thischick
"Are You With Me" by "Vaux"
i think is the last one