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Thread: Zoology (0 Replies, 786 Views) by Alex Robinson
Any Discworld fans?
Like a Samaritan warrior im a bit out of place
When all I am is peace in a passionate space
People move way too fast like they’re lives are built on haste
Why not just...
Thread: Whiskey And Wheels (by 2numbers and Back In Black) (5 Replies, 4,674 Views) by Alex Robinson
Indeed, nicely structured.
Thread: Topside Box (0 Replies, 583 Views) by Alex Robinson
I don't get it sometimes, I am literally the happiest/most content **** on the planet yet when it comes to love, **** that ****, just doesn't work for, regardless of that I tried to write a love...
Thread: "Reigns" (5 Replies, 4,280 Views) by Alex Robinson
Thank you!
Thread: "32 Bar Cypher" (2 Replies, 8,676 Views) by Alex Robinson
Much preferred the 2nd verse to the first, first seemed a bit lazy especially with that aqua man reference.
Thread: "32 more" (2 Replies, 7,092 Views) by Alex Robinson
Verses could do with being linked together a bit better, first 16 was good and the second started off well then went a bit off topic to the theme of the rap with the whole dealer talk, again just my...
Thread: "Ray of Sunshine" (6 Replies, 2,361 Views) by Alex Robinson
Nothing much wrong with this, maybe lose a syllable or two on the 3rd and 4th lines of the second verse/stanza, could do with being a little longer but thats just a preference.
Thread: "Old Nick At The Front Door" (2 Replies, 1,728 Views) by Alex Robinson
Like the expressions and theme, but hard to gauge what the flow would be for it. Might just be me but the song structure is a bit strange too me, the hook/chorus is rather large, more so than i think...
Thread: "One Thing" (2 Replies, 1,992 Views) by Alex Robinson
When you say, "the four horseman are riding", what are you referring too?
Thread: "Adversary" (2 Replies, 2,550 Views) by Alex Robinson
Thanks for the feedback on my stuff btw. Read this a few times over and all i can say is I like it, has a great natural flow too it and the theme and expressions are right down my alley! Dont suppose...
Thread: Wits and Steel (6 Replies, 3,983 Views) by Alex Robinson
Thanks for the feedback, ive reworked it a bit, do you think this is more appropriate.
Wits and Steel
(V1)
Mind sharp, big bastard sword gleaming
Coupled with my heart a deadly double...
Thread: Wits and Steel (6 Replies, 3,983 Views) by Alex Robinson
Wits and Steel
(V1)
Mind sharp, big bastard sword gleaming
Coupled with my heart, that’s a deadly double teaming
Coming from the start is that robinson reeling
Minds aerial so high, cracked...
Thread: "Reigns" (5 Replies, 4,280 Views) by Alex Robinson
Thank you truly, means a lot to me! will be adding more soon, hope you enjoy them as much!
Thread: "Reigns" (5 Replies, 4,280 Views) by Alex Robinson
Reigns
(v1)
My dynasty will shine eternal
Millennia could pass summarised in a journal
Crushing historians left and right
Flared and fisted, Solar might
Learned from time, I’ll be a humble...
Thread: "What she said" (3 Replies, 2,509 Views) by Alex Robinson
Precise and flows quite naturally!