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  • Best song ever.

    Thread: Crimson Night (2 Replies, 1,814 Views) by JeffM


    Best song ever.

  • "Memories"

    Thread: "Memories" (0 Replies, 1,394 Views) by JeffM


    This is a song I wrote maybe 4-5 months back, and currently the only one that I finished writing music too as well. If I receive good feedback I may post a recording. Be honest with me about it :)
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  • Thank you! I appreciate that. And thank you for...

    Thread: Love is Grand (2 Replies, 2,012 Views) by JeffM


    Thank you! I appreciate that. And thank you for finding the other typo, I will fix it now :D

  • Love is Grand

    Thread: Love is Grand (2 Replies, 2,012 Views) by JeffM


    Who am I to write a song
    To tell the world where I belong
    Lyrics of the past to view
    Fail to say something new

    So instead I'll try to find
    A way that I can clear my mind
    Focus on the thought...

  • I like these lyrics, really captures the thoughts...

    Thread: Misunderstood (3 Replies, 1,589 Views) by JeffM


    I like these lyrics, really captures the thoughts behind people in situations like these. Great job with it. When you get the chance, would you kindly look at some lyrics I posted about a year ago? I...

  • Take the Light and Shine it

    Thread: Take the Light and Shine it (0 Replies, 2,467 Views) by JeffM


    Well here we are
    After Dark
    Moonlight shining in
    And as we lay
    It's hard to say
    Where my mind has been

    I wish that I could be
    The one to make you see
    Just what you have to give

  • I absolutely agree with you there. I have found...

    Thread: No One Cares (5 Replies, 1,723 Views) by JeffM


    I absolutely agree with you there. I have found that when I'm having a rough time and I write about it, by the time I am finished my emotion has left me. Almost as if it has been transferred out of...

  • This song has quite a strong emotion, and made me...

    Thread: Choke (4 Replies, 1,759 Views) by JeffM


    This song has quite a strong emotion, and made me think of some of the things that have happened lately in my life. Great job!

  • Thank you, I appreciate the reception I have had...

    Thread: End It (6 Replies, 1,771 Views) by JeffM


    Thank you, I appreciate the reception I have had so far from all of you. This is actually the first song I ever wrote, and it seems you got the feeling that I had when I wrote this.

  • Crimson Night

    Thread: Crimson Night (2 Replies, 1,814 Views) by JeffM


    Listen up now, remember every word
    Pay attention, I'll only say this once

    Listen to my voice...

    You hear me!?


    Lift those fists, one more time
    Strike her flesh, you'll be mine

  • That is some good advice, and I will certainly...

    Thread: End It (6 Replies, 1,771 Views) by JeffM


    That is some good advice, and I will certainly work on a slightly altered scheme. I read a few of your lyrics so far, and they are pretty good. Always seems to have a good message between the lines....

  • Thank you, I always appreciate tips. What exactly...

    Thread: End It (6 Replies, 1,771 Views) by JeffM


    Thank you, I always appreciate tips. What exactly do you mean by adding a little bit more? I'm rather new to writing lyrics and just started because of some recent inspiration. Are you referring to...

  • End It

    Thread: End It (6 Replies, 1,771 Views) by JeffM


    Can someone please tell me why
    I really don’t understand
    Girls just go for the bad guy
    They get the back of his hand

    It will not happen again
    But these words he said before
    He says he loves...

  • Decision Time

    Thread: Decision Time (0 Replies, 1,425 Views) by JeffM


    How stupid I've been
    Living this way
    How stupid I've been
    Letting you play

    These games are finished
    My will's diminished
    Decision time
    Will you be mine?

  • Nothing Changes

    Thread: Nothing Changes (0 Replies, 1,396 Views) by JeffM


    Another night
    Another dream
    Another lie
    I tell myself

    Ive tried forgetting
    Tried deserting
    Tried Convincing
    Nothing changes

  • Have You Truly Won?

    Thread: Have You Truly Won? (0 Replies, 1,695 Views) by JeffM


    Impressed at the start
    I gave you my heart
    I felt you were it
    Then it turned to s***

    Weeks passed as I learned
    That all I had earned
    Was a broken heart
    You damned from the start

  • I just started looking on this forum and I'm glad...

    Thread: Cursed To Love (13 Replies, 2,476 Views) by JeffM


    I just started looking on this forum and I'm glad I did. This is the second song I have read, and it is really good. The first one I read was good as well. Some great lyricists on this site, glad I...

  • I just looked at this website for the first time....

    Thread: Just Another Suicide (5 Replies, 4,948 Views) by JeffM


    I just looked at this website for the first time. I wanted to look at some metal lyrics because I have been writing a bit myself. I have to say, these lyrics are really, really good. Amazing job.