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• The Book

  Thread: The Book (0 Replies, 2,279 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  The Book
  
  Look back, into the Book
  Read the scripts, all covered in blood
  Remember all, the lives you took
  This is your past, it's dragging you down
  
  The Book
  Pages upon pages
  All your...

• Very nice. I like that a lot.

  Thread: Hypocritical? Yes... The answer? No... (comment pretty please!) (3 Replies, 1,086 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Very nice.
  I like that a lot.

• Hmm, well, I guess I'm satisfied with 'ok' then....

  Thread: Fallen (3 Replies, 1,672 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Hmm, well, I guess I'm satisfied with 'ok' then. If it's not really your style, I mean.
  Thanks for the honest feedback.

• Fallen

  Thread: Fallen (3 Replies, 1,672 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Well, this lyric was written very quickly (I'm way too fond of doing it that way)
  
  
  Fallen
  From my higher ground
  Laying waste to all hope
  The weight of dreams
  Too much to take
  
  Get up

• I am glad I decided to take a look at the forums...

  Thread: Did You Know (She Will Leave You) (9 Replies, 3,117 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  I am glad I decided to take a look at the forums today, because those lyrics are really moving me, everybody should be able to relate to those lyrics.
  I know I can.
  "Did you know
  You are the...

• Actually I made that verse (it isn't really a...

  Thread: A little something (2 Replies, 1,821 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Actually I made that verse (it isn't really a verse, either) different on purpose, but I can see how it might be a bit confusing. I agree on the part of changing leaves with thorns, so I will change...

• Hmm... not quite what I meant but, still :p I...

  Thread: plz rate this... (11 Replies, 2,499 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Hmm... not quite what I meant but, still :p
  
  I meant that the text itself needs to make itself more obvious, but I think I've had a change of heart about that tip anyways.... I know, it's a bit...

• To be honest, the last text wasn't quite as good,...

  Thread: plz rate this... (11 Replies, 2,499 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  To be honest, the last text wasn't quite as good, but, as you said, it isn't finished yet. I'm not quite eloquent enough to write my exact thoughts, but it lacks the emotions the first one had, still...

• Cool cant wait to read more of your lyrics ;)

  Thread: plz rate this... (11 Replies, 2,499 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Cool cant wait to read more of your lyrics ;)

• Wow.. I like this a lot, it seems so... Desperate...

  Thread: plz rate this... (11 Replies, 2,499 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Wow.. I like this a lot, it seems so... Desperate (for lack of a better word), but at the same time it feels like you (at least in the lyrics) is giving up...
  It's kind of sad, but at same time so...

• I agree with Liulkun on this one, but I kind of...

  Thread: Red Water (1st post...need feedback) (5 Replies, 2,618 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  I agree with Liulkun on this one, but I kind of like the emotions I start to see in the words (Needs to be longer, though). And I think the verse needs to be a bit longer than the chorus.

• A little something

  Thread: A little something (2 Replies, 1,821 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  This is one the lyrics I've used the most time on
  but it still feels unfinished somehow, is it just me or is it something lacking?
  
  
  You are hiding
  Rose in the bushes
  Thorns and lies
  Rose in...

• Poll: Guess it all would come down to the way it's...

  Thread: Lost by TGS (3 Replies, 2,536 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Guess it all would come down to the way it's going to be sung, but in it's 'pure' text form, I love it, many little details that makes me think...
  Love it, seems very 'messy' at first but then I...

• I've taken piano lessons for a few years, and...

  Thread: What musical instruments do you play? (73 Replies, 74,307 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  I've taken piano lessons for a few years, and I've writen a few songs on the keys.
  But I've recently started picking up the drumsticks, due to my band lacking a drummer...
  But really, I try to play...

• A little something called G.O.D. Days long...

  Thread: A song by me. Torn apart (7 Replies, 2,453 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  A little something called G.O.D.
  
  
  Days long since passed
  Still play in my mind
  Making me hope for a day
  When it will all go away
  No anger there
  It is replaced by fear

• I too felt the new line was better, tanks again.

  Thread: A song by me. Torn apart (7 Replies, 2,453 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  I too felt the new line was better, tanks again.

• Joshido, I never even thought if that, but I...

  Thread: A song by me. Torn apart (7 Replies, 2,453 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Joshido, I never even thought if that, but I believe it would work, even though it's not really my way of doing it, but it would make a decent chorus :P
  
  SpudMunky, I must agree with your post, the...

• Another lyric (Though this one is not finished...

  Thread: A song by me. Torn apart (7 Replies, 2,453 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  Another lyric (Though this one is not finished yet)
  Better to add all my lyrics to one topic... or so I figured :P
  
  
  
  Something is missing
  Nothing is right anymore
  I feel no hope, only despair...

• I loved the first verse there, I actually loved...

  Thread: Days Like These (1 Replies, 2,040 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  I loved the first verse there, I actually loved the entire song
  It felt kind of bittersweet, reminded me sort of my life:P

• A song by me. Torn apart

  Thread: A song by me. Torn apart (7 Replies, 2,453 Views) by Unsettled & koRny

  
  

  A song I wrote today
  It is perhaps a bit rushed and sloppy
  which is the reason I'm posting it here
  to be told what I can improve
  
  Torn apart
  
  Tearing apart the fabric
  Of my made-up reality...