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Thread: My first song!!!!! Please help me with some tips!!! (5 Replies, 1,276 Views) by thj625
pretty good! you need to break it into a definite chorus and need to use more metaphors so it won't be too literal. there is a definite story which is good.
please check out my songs to review!
Thread: the one (1 Replies, 1,098 Views) by thj625
reallly pretty check out my songs
Thread: good for my standards (2 Replies, 1,392 Views) by thj625
Good! Just don't keep it too literal.....love it!
Check my songs out!
Thread: My love song lyrics please read (3 Replies, 1,891 Views) by thj625
You make my head spin round
If I fell I know you wouldn't let me hit the ground
Don't know how to tell you
You leave me breathless
How could I stop thinking 'bout you
Your love has become my...
Thread: first song, comment and be truthful! (2 Replies, 1,383 Views) by thj625
Thanks! I will check out your songs....
Thread: please tell me wat u think of my lyrics (5 Replies, 2,006 Views) by thj625
amazing and so true......look at my second song!
the one thing I would think about would
be more metaphors or something not
so literal....talent!
Thread: No Love Lost - thoughts appreciated (1 Replies, 1,485 Views) by thj625
amazing love how you piece it together
Very relatable
Favorite line is
"we should start and end this tale as strangers"
Love love love
Check out my first song!!
Thread: please read, my second song! (1 Replies, 1,423 Views) by thj625
Felt it in the first moment
The poison sinking in
Knew nothing would keep this love burning
Didn't care
What they would say
I was falling swiftly
Didn't know you'd let me hit the ground
...
Thread: first song, comment and be truthful! (2 Replies, 1,383 Views) by thj625
You want an apology
But baby I'm not sorry
You want an answer
Well it's a yes, a no, a maybe
You want a rose
I can give you thorns
You want my heart
Then where did you put the pieces
You...