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  • My Phantoms

    Thread: My Phantoms (3 Replies, 1,761 Views) by SljSlj


    A lyric about drugs and addiction.

    MY PHANTOMS

    Verse 1
    The most haunting phantom
    Is not made of ectoplasm
    Just lots of drugs and cheap rum
    The real horror...is yet to come

  • Thank you both very much. I'm well aware that my...

    Thread: All Or Nothing (3 Replies, 1,861 Views) by SljSlj


    Thank you both very much. I'm well aware that my style is different and not for everyone, but you seem to have enjoyed it enough. If you'd like, you can check out my entire collection of lyrics (the...

  • All Or Nothing

    Thread: All Or Nothing (3 Replies, 1,861 Views) by SljSlj


    ALL OR NOTHING

    I've been here several times before
    Several hundred in my mind
    Every time I leave this hellish place behind
    In the glow of my taillights
    It is soon iluminated again
    Ten-fold,...

  • I've no particular genre in mind. I'm partial to...

    Thread: This Damaged Soul (2 Replies, 2,269 Views) by SljSlj


    I've no particular genre in mind. I'm partial to metal (specifically prog metal), so I'll probably do something that fits into that genre if I ever record this one.

    Thank you for your kind words,...

  • This Damaged Soul

    Thread: This Damaged Soul (2 Replies, 2,269 Views) by SljSlj


    THIS DAMAGED SOUL

    This damaged soul
    Makes peace null and void
    Who do we blame?
    The soul itself?
    Or the world in which we live?

    There is no end to violence
    Not until the world is silenced

  • Untitled

    Thread: Untitled (0 Replies, 1,393 Views) by SljSlj


    Living a life of a dead sort
    Knowing if fate asks, I've no retort
    'Cause these secrets I'll never tell
    I'll take 'em with me, even if that means taking 'em to hell

    Dieing a death a lively sort...

  • Thank you. "Non-cliche and clever" are among the...

    Thread: God? (3 Replies, 2,262 Views) by SljSlj


    Thank you. "Non-cliche and clever" are among the best compliments a poet can recieve, so I appreciate it.



    I have plenty of lyrics and poems that talk of the non-existance of God (or gods)....

  • man... I think.... Thank you. People give me...

    Thread: Set On Fire (3 Replies, 1,652 Views) by SljSlj


    man... I think....

    Thank you. People give me alot of reviews on other sites saying it's too unoriginal and cliched. Of course, that doesn't bother me much... I like it and that's really all that...

  • Pretty good. I'm not feeling the flow, but it may...

    Thread: First song in months I had a block please comment (5 Replies, 1,902 Views) by SljSlj


    Pretty good. I'm not feeling the flow, but it may just be the way I'm reading it... know what I mean?

    But I like the story itself. Seems like you're saying you're torn between trying to make a...

  • I hear a Dragonforce type sound, though much...

    Thread: all They want is War (2 Replies, 1,436 Views) by SljSlj


    I hear a Dragonforce type sound, though much heavier, when I read this. Sorry if I'm way off.

    I have nothing constructive to say about it, but I just wanna say that I enjoyed it, and would love to...

  • God?

    Thread: God? (3 Replies, 2,262 Views) by SljSlj


    GOD?

    There's something very wrong
    This world ain't what it used to be
    Something I can feel, but I cannot see
    Is it God?

    Is time fast or slow?
    Will we ever know?
    Or will we die before we...

  • Door

    Thread: Door (0 Replies, 1,465 Views) by SljSlj


    DOOR

    God, my head hurts so bad
    But not as much as my soul

    I'm heading down a dark corridor
    At the end I see a dead-end, but...
    Is that a door?

    And sometimes I lose my feet

  • Set On Fire

    Thread: Set On Fire (3 Replies, 1,652 Views) by SljSlj


    Blackened thrash metal.

    SET ON FIRE

    Whether you're the disease or the diseased
    Whether you're the bringer of death or the deceased
    Whether you're the lie or the liar
    Tonight, your soul will...

  • What Is Reality?

    Thread: What Is Reality? (0 Replies, 1,216 Views) by SljSlj


    WHAT IS REALITY?

    Everything around me
    Is this reality?
    I can't accept that this all
    Life has to offer
    Maybe it's just insanity
    But I question
    What is reality?

  • Arachnoid / Faux Serenity

    Thread: Arachnoid / Faux Serenity (0 Replies, 1,204 Views) by SljSlj


    ARACHNOID / FAUX SERENITY

    Arachnoid
    Hiding in the void
    Between two realities
    In your faux
    Serenity

    Little boy
    Hiding with your toys

  • I Say

    Thread: I Say (0 Replies, 1,268 Views) by SljSlj


    I SAY

    Hating, when anyone else would love
    And I'm fading, out of the minds of everyone
    They've all had enough

    I say I'm growing
    Say I'm doing fine
    I say I'm happy
    Say my head's in line

  • I Thought...

    Thread: I Thought... (0 Replies, 1,678 Views) by SljSlj


    I THOUGHT...

    I thought when I found the meaning of life
    I’d know the next step I’d have to take
    But in this universe, there’s no escape
    In the mirror, always redundancy
    Fitting perfectly in...

  • You Suck

    Thread: You Suck (0 Replies, 1,117 Views) by SljSlj


    One I wrote almost a year ago that I realized I hadn't yet posted here. Enjoy.

    YOU SUCK

    You suck
    You bit a chunk from my leg
    Apologized to my face
    Before gnawing off my arm

    Your words

  • Thanks. You're not the first person to imply that...

    Thread: I Say (2 Replies, 1,483 Views) by SljSlj


    Thanks. You're not the first person to imply that it's too short, assuming that's what you mean by "I'd love to see you expand on this.", but I intended for it to be short and have no plans of adding...

  • I Say

    Thread: I Say (2 Replies, 1,483 Views) by SljSlj


    I SAY

    Hating, when anyone else would love
    And I'm fading, out of the minds of everyone
    They've all had enough

    I say I'm growing
    Say I'm doing fine
    I say I'm happy
    Say my head's in line

  • By Your Own Tongue

    Thread: By Your Own Tongue (0 Replies, 1,217 Views) by SljSlj


    Okay, got a new one for ya. This one was inspired by Lamb Of God's song, Omerta, and just the overall concept of omertà.

    BY YOUR OWN TONGUE

    You are nothing but tongue
    Nothing at all when your...

  • I'm thinking doom metal, like Triptykon or...

    Thread: Nibiru (4 Replies, 1,798 Views) by SljSlj


    I'm thinking doom metal, like Triptykon or Electric Wizard, but I'm not really sure yet, I might make it a dark hard rock kind of thing.

  • Nibiru

    Thread: Nibiru (4 Replies, 1,798 Views) by SljSlj


    This is a song about a planet some believe exists just beyond our solar system called Nibiru, or sometimes Planet X, something I'm very interested in. It is supposedly four times the size of Jupiter...

  • From The Inside Out (Now)

    Thread: From The Inside Out (Now) (1 Replies, 2,029 Views) by SljSlj


    FROM THE INSIDE OUT (NOW)

    I thought I cut problem at the root
    But every day, another black leaf
    I'll take one more sip of pesticide
    And leave the garden's fate
    For mother earth to decide
    ...

  • Hail-Oh

    Thread: Hail-Oh (0 Replies, 1,460 Views) by SljSlj


    My second attempt at black metal lyric, more like black hard rock, but w/e, just trying something new. It doesn't read exactly way I sing it, so some parts my seem not to flow well when actually they...

  • By Your Own Tongue

    Thread: By Your Own Tongue (0 Replies, 1,647 Views) by SljSlj


    BY YOUR OWN TONGUE

    You are nothing but tongue
    Nothing at all when your throat is slit
    You will not be missed
    For a life like yours has barely begun

    Ignore the reaper
    Running your mouth
    The...

  • Those Who Look To Heaven Burn In Hell

    Thread: Those Who Look To Heaven Burn In Hell (0 Replies, 1,622 Views) by SljSlj


    This is my first attempt at black metal. I based it off my experiences and research in spiritual satanism. I do not mean offend anyone with this and I apologize if I do.

    THOSE WHO LOOK TO HEAVEN...

  • Well, thank you. This one is very personal to me,...

    Thread: Red And Black (2 Replies, 1,950 Views) by SljSlj


    Well, thank you. This one is very personal to me, so it's very flattering that you enjoyed it so much. I get better with each lyric I write, so please keep checking back for my new stuff.

    Thanks.

  • The Picture On The Wall

    Thread: The Picture On The Wall (0 Replies, 2,411 Views) by SljSlj


    THE PICTURE ON THE WALL

    The picture on the wall is frightening
    But I can't seem to look away
    It causes me to do things I'd never do
    The picture on the wall
    The picture on the wall

    I wanna...

  • Red And Black

    Thread: Red And Black (2 Replies, 1,950 Views) by SljSlj


    RED AND BLACK

    There's no morality
    In addiction
    Nothing but insanity
    And internal friction

    I can never be afraid
    That I might die
    Not when every single day

  • Red And Black

    Thread: Red And Black (0 Replies, 1,501 Views) by SljSlj


    RED AND BLACK

    There's no morality
    In addiction
    Nothing but insanity
    And internal friction

    I can never be afraid
    That I might die
    Not when every single day

  • Let's Just Get This Over With (working title)

    Thread: Let's Just Get This Over With (working title) (0 Replies, 2,208 Views) by SljSlj


    LET'S JUST GET THIS OVER WITH (working title)

    I just wanna start over
    Because over and over
    I lost myself

    No four-leaf clover
    When Summer's over
    I lost my purpose

  • Worth Living

    Thread: Worth Living (0 Replies, 1,650 Views) by SljSlj


    WORTH LIVING

    Desire
    To destroy yourself
    A fire
    You keep feeding
    You're a liar
    Don't tell me your okay

    Forgive yourself

  • The Fight For Freedom

    Thread: The Fight For Freedom (0 Replies, 1,498 Views) by SljSlj


    THE FIGHT FOR FREEDOM

    I'm only looking to stay true
    To myself
    I'm only looking to keep it real
    For myself
    There is no one else

    A million paths converge
    I feel it in my head

  • Destruct / Positive Negatives

    Thread: Destruct / Positive Negatives (0 Replies, 1,479 Views) by SljSlj


    DESTRUCT / POSITIVE NEGATIVES

    All these birds flying at me
    Looking to peck out my brain
    I can't, why can't I wave them away?
    I just let them eat me a little longer

    Until...

    I destruct

  • Sorry I didn't reply right away... I had alot...

    Thread: Keep Your Eyes On The Sky (working title) (2 Replies, 2,418 Views) by SljSlj


    Sorry I didn't reply right away... I had alot going on over the course of the past week. I'm so happy you enjoyed it! This is one my favorite things I've written. I'll keep 'em coming just as long as...

  • Deconstruction

    Thread: Deconstruction (0 Replies, 1,271 Views) by SljSlj


    This is about me getting help (therapy) with my drug addiction and suicidal depression.

    DECONSTRUCTION

    Take it down

    A lifetime spent building
    Walls that, quite honestly, aren't stable...

  • Sun Exits Sky

    Thread: Keep Your Eyes On The Sky (working title) (2 Replies, 2,418 Views) by SljSlj


    The message of this is hard to explain, but maybe it's one that is better left to the reader to decipher. Btw it's a poem, not a lyric.

    SUN EXITS SKY

    Sun exits sky
    But there's still light...

  • Borrow Your Pain

    Thread: Borrow Your Pain (0 Replies, 1,256 Views) by SljSlj


    BORROW YOUR PAIN

    I'd like to borrow your pain
    Just for a little while

    I'd like to borrow your pain
    Cause it hurts me less this way
    I just wanna see you smile

    For just a little while

  • Broken Mirror (Fake It 'Till I Make It)

    Thread: Broken Mirror (Fake It 'Till I Make It) (0 Replies, 1,355 Views) by SljSlj


    BROKEN MIRROR (FAKE IT UNTIL I MAKE IT)

    Reflection in a broken mirror
    Don't you look at me that way
    I know just where I'm lighting this fire
    Under my ***, under my soul
    And don't tell me it's...

  • New

    Thread: New (0 Replies, 1,259 Views) by SljSlj


    NEW

    There's gotta be two sides to this
    I'll find the point where it splits
    The point where I split in two

    Don't think I know what I want
    But i don't think I want to know
    I'd give anything...

  • Out Of The Into

    Thread: Out Of The Into (0 Replies, 1,231 Views) by SljSlj


    OUT OF THE INTO

    How much more can I take?
    Before I'm over-riden by hate
    And you commit suicide by my hand

    Maybe we weren't meant to be
    Why should I stick around and see?
    God, I wish I could...

  • One pill

    Thread: One pill (0 Replies, 1,326 Views) by SljSlj


    ONE PILL

    I’m losing myself to my decisions
    Only one thing can give me another second to breathe
    Unfortunately, I must drown at this point
    But I might as well go into the water
    With my head...

  • I've definitely read worse things than this, but...

    Thread: Here's my first song, what do you think? (4 Replies, 1,773 Views) by SljSlj


    I've definitely read worse things than this, but it could be alot better.

    It's typical for beginners to try to rhyme every line, something that's not at all necessary. Overuse of rhyme, to me,...

  • Thank you very much.

    Thread: Lie, Then Die (2 Replies, 1,391 Views) by SljSlj


    Thank you very much.

  • Hurts Like Nothing

    Thread: Hurts Like Nothing (1 Replies, 1,533 Views) by SljSlj


    This is one I wrote some time in the first half of last year, I believe. I wrote this because after my gf broke up with me, she would not even acknowledge me and naturally, that made me upset....

  • Holy?

    Thread: Holy? (0 Replies, 1,386 Views) by SljSlj


    HOLY?

    Holy arsenal
    Jesus as a weapon
    It's phemonenal
    The way they can take
    This beautiful concept
    And make it a deathtrap

    Sympathy they've felt

  • Lie, Then Die

    Thread: Lie, Then Die (2 Replies, 1,391 Views) by SljSlj


    These are not yet dark times
    But rather time for preparation
    Getting ready for devastation

    And once we lied, we lied
    To try to hide the horns creeping in
    As they poked barely through the skin...

  • I'd like to here what y'all think of this,...

    Thread: Eight-Thousand Hours Sleep... A Blissful Coma (1 Replies, 1,853 Views) by SljSlj


    I'd like to here what y'all think of this, please. I just haven't heard enough feedback across the web on this one as I would like.

  • Well, it will be a bit better by the time the...

    Thread: The Light Seeping Through The Cracks, Pt. 1 and 2 (9 Replies, 2,197 Views) by SljSlj


    Well, it will be a bit better by the time the album is finished 'cause we talk often about what we could do to make it better and have made about half a dozen minor changes, and one big one (the...