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Thread: Annie Land (3 Replies, 21,545 Views) by meli2235
I like it! :)
p.s. has someone tried to break into your account? I've received about two e-mails telling me that somebody has :( I am a bit freaked out.
Thread: Say Goodbye (1 Replies, 3,160 Views) by meli2235
I like this song. It's really sad but relatable :)
Thread: Why Did You Go? (0 Replies, 631 Views) by meli2235
When you walked out on me
I was just three years old
You wanted to be free
No kids and no responsibilities
I fell into your well planned trap
One horrifying never ending slap
Did you care...
Thread: Don't Give In (1 Replies, 2,585 Views) by meli2235
First Verse
It might seem like you got nobody
But in life there is no guarantee
That you won't get hurt
or spend your time lost and feeling lonely
You're just like everyone else
You got your...
Thread: broken (2 Replies, 3,354 Views) by meli2235
I really liked this one. It is really emotional especially if you have ever had to fight "Your own demons"
Thread: Hi guys...its been almost a year since I last posted a song... (1 Replies, 776 Views) by meli2235
Of course it's worth finishing! It's difficult to start back up once you've stopped but don't give up. I put mine on hold for 10 years and it took a while to warm up but now it seems like I'm posting...
Thread: Don't Forget To Laugh (3 Replies, 1,748 Views) by meli2235
Verse 1
Remember when we first met?
You tripped on the sprinklers
I caught you before you fell
For my reward you got me soaking wet
Remember that
When I am long gone
And you are crying all...
Thread: Thanks A Lot!! (1 Replies, 1,001 Views) by meli2235
Haha this is really cute! :)
Thread: Ghosts Of Our Past or Forever Haunted (1 Replies, 760 Views) by meli2235
Not sure which title yet. It's just the chorus so far.
Verse 1
On cloudless days
Hand in hand
We would run
The air rushing through my hair
Laughing without a care
Wishing time would stop
If...
Thread: By The Way (I Thank You) (2 Replies, 1,640 Views) by meli2235
Haha sounds like the aftermath of my song lol I like it :)
Thread: "Doppelganger" (5 Replies, 1,440 Views) by meli2235
I liked it :) good rhythym and flow :)
Thread: not sure on a title yet... (2 Replies, 929 Views) by meli2235
You say that you love me,
But I think you love the fantasy,
Cause Who you think I am,
Is just an elaborate sham,
Why can’t you see,
I am who you want me to be
And now I am setting myself free
...
Thread: All I see are walking dead (2 Replies, 893 Views) by meli2235
Just needed to get away.
Had to clear my head,
Of the things that you said,
When I tripped on a hole,
It really took a toll.
Don’t know how long I lay,
Woke up faraway
What is this I see?...
Thread: "Against The Wall" (6 Replies, 1,763 Views) by meli2235
It's good because anyone can relate to it since you didn't specifically said what you did wrong. People can insert what they did wrong and were sorry for :)
Thread: I Think You're Fabulous (2 Replies, 1,026 Views) by meli2235
Haha I like the chorus :) the super duper part especially :)
Thread: Give Me A Chance (2 Replies, 936 Views) by meli2235
Verse 1
How do I let you know,
You might be the one,
To let my heart come undone,
How do I let it show,
That you are the only one
Chorus
Baby won’t you listen to my heart
Don’t let us be...
Thread: Breaking Free (0 Replies, 580 Views) by meli2235
You say that you love me,
But I think you love the fantasy,
Cause Who you think I am,
Is just an elaborate sham,
Why can’t you see,
I am who you want me to be
And now I am setting myself...
Thread: Insomnia (14 Replies, 2,324 Views) by meli2235
Thanks! And yours are awesome too :)
Thread: Not Good Enough (5 Replies, 1,249 Views) by meli2235
Changed it! I didn't even notice that :)
Thread: Not Good Enough (5 Replies, 1,249 Views) by meli2235
Thanks! and it does come from personal experience
Thread: The Redheads and the Virtuous Butler (3 Replies, 1,013 Views) by meli2235
So a random man wants to have the butler's baby?
Thread: Not Good Enough (5 Replies, 1,249 Views) by meli2235
Why did you have to go
didn’t you think I had the right to know?
Did you ever look back
And wish you were on the right track
Or that you could start over?
I would have let you start over
...
Thread: Beginning of a new song... Don't know the title yet. (6 Replies, 1,513 Views) by meli2235
Finished I think but I can't tell if that should be my chorus or switch one of the verses?
Thread: Beginning of a new song... Don't know the title yet. (6 Replies, 1,513 Views) by meli2235
True to both and yeah I probably will think of one later.
Thread: Beginning of a new song... Don't know the title yet. (6 Replies, 1,513 Views) by meli2235
This one will probably be the most emotional one that I have written yet,
Thread: Beginning of a new song... Don't know the title yet. (6 Replies, 1,513 Views) by meli2235
Why did you have to go
didn’t you think I had the right to know?
Did you ever look back
And wish you were on the right track
Or that you could start over?
I would have let you start over
...
Thread: Work Hard (3 Replies, 1,047 Views) by meli2235
I kinda like it!!! :)
Thread: Insomnia (14 Replies, 2,324 Views) by meli2235
haha that's usually when I am at my peak. Every song that I have ever written was when I had insomnia lool
Thread: Insomnia (14 Replies, 2,324 Views) by meli2235
Awesome! :)
Thread: I thought you were my fairytale (10 Replies, 2,376 Views) by meli2235
Thanks! This was the first song that I ever wrote when I was 16 :)
Thread: I thought you were my fairytale (10 Replies, 2,376 Views) by meli2235
I do like the oooh parts lol
Thread: I thought you were my fairytale (10 Replies, 2,376 Views) by meli2235
Does anyone know anywhere that i can send my lyrics?
Thread: My first rap song or hip hop song?? (4 Replies, 1,495 Views) by meli2235
I only repeated chance and I did it on purpose.
Thread: My first rap song or hip hop song?? (4 Replies, 1,495 Views) by meli2235
Sooooo... Do I have a future in the rap business? Haha
Thread: My first rap song or hip hop song?? (4 Replies, 1,495 Views) by meli2235
When the time is here
I won't cower in fear
I will grow a spine
And take what is mine
I'm not even close to a cliche
Even though I might sound that way.
I know this has been said before
And I...
Thread: I thought you were my fairytale (10 Replies, 2,376 Views) by meli2235
thanx! I have the chorus as fast and upbeat but the verses as slow and strong. My boyfriend is composing the music and as soon as he is done I will put up a link most probably a youtube one
Thread: One lonesome night (9 Replies, 1,882 Views) by meli2235
Is this song similar to Hearts- All I wanna do is make love to you?
Thread: One lonesome night (9 Replies, 1,882 Views) by meli2235
haha sorry. I was typing too fast before :)
Thread: One lonesome night (9 Replies, 1,882 Views) by meli2235
I wrote all of my songs in one week except for "I thought you were my fairytale" I wrote it when I was 16 which was a while ago
Thread: Not a pawn (5 Replies, 1,377 Views) by meli2235
Haha my boyfriend agrees
Thread: One lonesome night (9 Replies, 1,882 Views) by meli2235
Haha I already did. I wrote 7 songs in 7 days. All except for I thought you were my fairytale.
Thread: Pumpkinhead (36 Replies, 11,951 Views) by meli2235
Its cool! I like it! My boyfriend says that it really keeps your attention, has nice imagery, and has good pace.
Thread: One lonesome night (9 Replies, 1,882 Views) by meli2235
Haha true! I never even thought about it before. I wrote both songs last night in an hour and a half. I don't even know how I came up with this one. I just started messing around with a box and a...
Thread: Not a pawn (5 Replies, 1,377 Views) by meli2235
My boyfriend actually made that same suggestion for the title but I didn't know if people would like it or not so I went with Not a pawn but will probably change it now that I have 2 people who...
Thread: One lonesome night (9 Replies, 1,882 Views) by meli2235
One lonesome night
When you were out of sight
I hopped into my car
And went a little too far
No destination in mind
Got myself into a little bind
Do you ever feel
like you're in a trap...
Thread: Not a pawn (5 Replies, 1,377 Views) by meli2235
I pick up the phone
It's 11 at night
And I'm all alone
You say you need time
I thought you
would always be mine
Won't you tell me now
How can I move on
When it feels so wrong
Thread: Sick of you (5 Replies, 1,350 Views) by meli2235
Aaaaah!! OMG!! I sent 4 samples (the first verse and chorus) of my lyrics to a guy from Warners Music Nashville. He said he was in charge of radio promotions and he couldn't help but he said that I...
Thread: Sick of you (5 Replies, 1,350 Views) by meli2235
Haha the crayon part was my favorite part to write. It took me a bit to arrange the first 3 lines in order to make sense. I was thinking Avril Lavigne or someone like her.
Thread: Don't let me go (0 Replies, 852 Views) by meli2235
I'm not finished with this song yet but I did it today too. An angry song and a love song in one day. I guess I had a pretty emotional day. Haha :)
With eyes the color of honey
On a hot sunny day...
Thread: Cold (1/10/14) (6 Replies, 4,158 Views) by meli2235
I like this song and I really liked the chorus! :)