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Thread: Acid tongue (2 Replies, 1,379 Views) by nork
thanks
Thread: Acid tongue (2 Replies, 1,379 Views) by nork
Your acid tongue
It burns right through me
No respect you hold for me
Tearing dignity out from under me
You could let me
Attempt to rebuild whats left of me
But that would be to nice of you...
Thread: The boy who wasn't meant to be (4 Replies, 1,802 Views) by nork
Thanks a lot, really appreciate the feedback
Thread: maria tate (4 Replies, 1,027 Views) by nork
lol at "like the time you used a cucumber"
way to much rhyming though I think, especially in the last verse
Thread: The boy who wasn't meant to be (4 Replies, 1,802 Views) by nork
thanks for the feedback, I intend it to be lyrics, but im not in a band or anything yet so at this stage its all just ideas that will probably need working with once I get round to making them into...
Thread: The boy who wasn't meant to be (4 Replies, 1,802 Views) by nork
Just got the news
Doctors say there isn't long
That ill be gone soon
Was this intentional?
Maybe this world just wasn't for me
My life just wasn't meant to be
Don't feel sad
When you think...
Thread: The killers curse (6 Replies, 1,396 Views) by nork
Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it, and nice rap I enjoyed reading it, your good
Thread: Slik (1 Replies, 752 Views) by nork
definately an improvement from the first, I quite liked this, definately got some emotion in it and has potential. I didn't like some of the rymes though like
"just the same, I love it like I do a...
Thread: The killers curse (6 Replies, 1,396 Views) by nork
Thanks for the feedback. I quite like the "till death do us part" link with the line about marriage though, and I think it kinda shows that his victim is still alive inside his head
Thread: Untitled (1 Replies, 1,000 Views) by nork
I really like the concept of this, "I got to thinking, maybe I’m dead" is a pretty awesome opening line
Thread: Hatred (0 Replies, 874 Views) by nork
A song i wrote about hate and how pointless and dead ended it is, I kinda got the idea after watching american history x
Hatred is ugly
Such a downfall of man
It infects us
Like mental cancer...
Thread: Writing Songs (4 Replies, 1,624 Views) by nork
if your quite a musical person it will come in time, you just gotta find your style and things will start to flow, sometimes I can write a song in about 20 minutes and sometimes I play around with an...
Thread: Ritalin OD (1 Replies, 793 Views) by nork
I like this, it has a good message. It seems like pills are the answer to everything these days, you go to the doctors with some kind of "mental issue" and they'll just throw endless combinations of...
Thread: Shadow man (not finished) (5 Replies, 1,568 Views) by nork
good stuff, definately an improvement, feels quite freddy krueger-ish. Was that an influence by any chance?
Thread: How do you write your lyrics? (28 Replies, 6,743 Views) by nork
My lyrics usually start off as notes that I save on my phone, that way I can get it straight down as soon as an idea comes to me wherever I am, then once I have an idea that I think is good it...
Thread: War Song?????? (16 Replies, 7,201 Views) by nork
Metallica - One is my favorite war type song, its about a soldier who lost his sight, hearing, smell, speach, arms and legs, really good at showing the horrors of war, a very moving video
...
Thread: The killers curse (6 Replies, 1,396 Views) by nork
A new song I wrote about a murderer being haunted by his victim, let me know what you think
So, you killed me
You though I was gone
That it was all over
But its only just begun
My life may...
Thread: Struggling (4 Replies, 1,372 Views) by nork
Its cool man, its a decent song
"I open my eyes, just to see whats been happening,
I turn on the lights, just to find that I'm struggling."
is an awesome lyric!
Thread: Keepin' Me Down Again (5 Replies, 935 Views) by nork
how are you doing your recording just out of interest? like are you in a band, or you gunna do it all yourself? either way it will be cool to hear, I think its one thing writing lyrics and a whole...
Thread: Socks. (2 Replies, 862 Views) by nork
where you high when you wrote this by any chance? lol
Thread: Keepin' Me Down Again (5 Replies, 935 Views) by nork
yeah sure thing, it will be cool to hear some of your stuff played out
Thread: Keepin' Me Down Again (5 Replies, 935 Views) by nork
that was awesome! I like your style
Thread: ROYGBIV (can somone give a better name lol) (1 Replies, 1,139 Views) by nork
I really like this, you could call it "corrupt rainbow" or something similar
Thread: Toxic Love (1 Replies, 951 Views) by nork
*bump* (just thought I'd get them back on the first page cos they kinda got drowned in the flood lol)
Thread: Struggling (4 Replies, 1,372 Views) by nork
dude, 31 songs in less than an hour..your kinda taking the piss now, give it a rest
Thread: Summer Never Stays (2 Replies, 1,190 Views) by nork
Your good, but rekon you could stagger your songs a little? feels like a bit of a domination of the forum
Thread: Go Away (a song I wrote when I was about 13 lol) (0 Replies, 874 Views) by nork
I found this the other day when I was looking through my old school books because I was bored and thought I would post it for a laugh lol, I think I intended it to be like a pop/rock song and it just...
Thread: Toxic Love (1 Replies, 951 Views) by nork
A song I wrote from the point of view of a woman trapped in an abusive relationship
Im your precious
Your flower
At least thats what you tell me
The object of your desire
Is what I am
...
Thread: Death (0 Replies, 4,917 Views) by nork
If you are a metal head and don't own the albums "symbolic" and "spiritual healing" by Death then seriously, stop what your doing right now and buy them, you need these albums in your life! For me...
Thread: Devils claws (0 Replies, 927 Views) by nork
This is a song I wrote after seeing a thing on TV about christian "hell houses" that made me angry, where pretty much the objective is to make children terrified of hell by putting on grotesque shows...
Thread: Shadow man (not finished) (5 Replies, 1,568 Views) by nork
I like the concept of the song, but I think there's a bit to much rhyming in the first part. The last 2 verses are definately my favorite
Thread: A Funeral on friday (3 Replies, 1,399 Views) by nork
I really liked it, reminds me of the first funeral I went to when I was younger, which was also for my grandmother
"Your skin never looked so porcelain
Underneath these holy lights
Your eyes...
Thread: This beautiful view (3 Replies, 1,141 Views) by nork
Thanks a lot for the feedback guys. Yeah I think the last line does kinda stick out a little, I quite like "and now new beauty is growing"
Thread: Poisoned (2 Replies, 973 Views) by nork
Thanks a lot, yeah I think "now their unlocked" makes a bit more sense
Thread: Badass/Angry Music list (5 Replies, 4,568 Views) by nork
Pantera:
Im broken - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DWzmyI75SE4
****ing hostile - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eKUX8qaGfWs
Walk - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8qRVNyot34o&feature=related
Thread: Interesting songs (4 Replies, 5,073 Views) by nork
Tool - H
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AeXCm9-OoXw
One of my favorite songs, I love the raw emotion in it, they don't even play it live hardly ever because its too emotional for the singer
Thread: Juicy Inspirational Song about Life (4 Replies, 2,865 Views) by nork
Tool - Lataralus
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wS7CZIJVxFY
I find this song really inspiring and it encourages me to try and live life to the full, the video I posted explains the song as it goes
Thread: Suicidal Love Songs???? (7 Replies, 16,171 Views) by nork
"HIM - Join me" is what came into my head when I read the thread title, not sure if its the kind of thing your after
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mAqK4dElUEI&feature=related
Thread: Please someone get me a record deal! (6 Replies, 1,534 Views) by nork
are you for real? some of those lyrics don't even make sense, I don't think your going to be the next eminem im afraid. How old are you just out of interest? because you sound quite young, judging by...
Thread: Poisoned (2 Replies, 973 Views) by nork
I wrote this song about insanity and loosing it on a bad trip, let me know what you think
The poison placed under my tongue
Breathing slow, keeping calm
Sitting, waiting
Unaware of the gravity...
Thread: Path (1 Replies, 864 Views) by nork
that was beautiful, I like the emotion in it
Thread: This beautiful view (3 Replies, 1,141 Views) by nork
A love song i wrote, let me know what you think
You look just like an angel
Your skin glowing in this light
It brings me to tears
Your desire to be here with me
Holding me tonight
Getting...
Thread: Emotional healing (a work in progress) (3 Replies, 1,950 Views) by nork
Thanks, glad you like it. I like your line but I kinda like the rhyme between "quickens" and "stricken", but I dunno, do you think the "quickens" part sounds a bit silly?
Thread: Emotional healing (a work in progress) (3 Replies, 1,950 Views) by nork
This is a new one im working on, let me know what you think of what I have so far
When your thoughts race
And your pulse quickens
And you sink to the floor
Anxiety stricken
Don't hide
Take...
Thread: far gone (5 Replies, 919 Views) by nork
I agree with LyricsAngel
"theres a divine war
going on inside
god's
fighting the devil
but i forgot to pick a side"
Is such an awesome lyric
Thread: half finished (4 Replies, 906 Views) by nork
awesome, you have a pretty cool way with words
Thread: Thoughts Like Mental Poison (4 Replies, 2,632 Views) by nork
I thought that was cool, I really like the lines
"Color falls out the lines that once held my soul" and
"All I see is black in a million different shades"
Thread: Stagnant waters (4 Replies, 1,138 Views) by nork
Thank you for the feedback, really appreciate it, yeah I added the "by" to that lyric, cheers for the tip
Thread: You won't like this very much (1 Replies, 1,212 Views) by nork
Good stuff, I really like the chorus
Thread: Stagnant waters (4 Replies, 1,138 Views) by nork
A song I wrote about the loss of innosence and how humans mess things up, let me know what you think
Its such a tragedy
Our innosence is lost
Eroded by the sands of time
Happiness where did you...