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Thread: "Out There", surfing and philosophy at once... (1 Replies, 1,612 Views) by monsterauge
Hey everyone,
I posted some lyrics some time ago and then forgot about this forum because my band was expanding (if you can say that) so much...
I had asked for correction, my problem is that...
Thread: Hero (4 Replies, 2,384 Views) by monsterauge
I really like these lyrics, (as far as I understand them :) )
do you have got music for them ?
Thread: Runaway, Invisible & Helpless (15 Replies, 3,880 Views) by monsterauge
I recorded two songs, invisible and lazy day, for those who are interested!
http://www.cbrauer.de/downloads/070330invisible2.mp3
and http://www.cbrauer.de/downloads/070331lazyday.mp3
Thread: Runaway, Invisible & Helpless (15 Replies, 3,880 Views) by monsterauge
Waah, that's great CrazyBautiful! Thanks for your nice encouragement, and for the new Chorus :)... I like it, the context is okay, too. The only thing I struggle with is the line "It's obvious he...
Thread: Runaway, Invisible & Helpless (15 Replies, 3,880 Views) by monsterauge
okay, then next time I'll just write 15 so I don't have to think about the spelling!
I'm from Hamburg, Germany.
I haven't finished learning English, and I need the help as long as I can't check my...
Thread: Runaway, Invisible & Helpless (15 Replies, 3,880 Views) by monsterauge
thanks a lot you two!!
The result of your advice, SOULstice: :)
Runaway
So he says he won't live at home anymore
anyway, he says he's old enough
you may call him a stupid show-off
but...
Thread: Runaway, Invisible & Helpless (15 Replies, 3,880 Views) by monsterauge
Get a life? Sorry, I'm fiveteen, I think I don't have to worry about that now. You're pretty discouraging, you know. this was the first song I wrote in my life and I'm no native English speaker. I...
Thread: Runaway, Invisible & Helpless (15 Replies, 3,880 Views) by monsterauge
Yeah.. I'm talking to myself :D
Now, here's the link to Emergency Exit, if anyone is interested: http://www.cbrauer.de/downloads/emergencyexit.mp3
And there's another lyric.......
why...
Thread: Runaway, Invisible & Helpless (15 Replies, 3,880 Views) by monsterauge
aaahh.. can't someone correct them???
and there's another song... PLEASE! we want to record them and there's no one else I could ask for help...
Emergency Exit
I don't know the language of...
Thread: Runaway, Invisible & Helpless (15 Replies, 3,880 Views) by monsterauge
Help, help, HELP... I need to know the mistakes!! Could someone just write in two or three sentences... would be great
Thread: Jantje Smit - Ein Blick In Deine Augen (2 Replies, 5,926 Views) by monsterauge
Evening by evening
I meet you and everytime I ask
would you dance with me
then you say, smiling
you haven't time, have
to go home, you feel sorry
But a glance into your eyes says
for me and...
Thread: Runaway, Invisible & Helpless (15 Replies, 3,880 Views) by monsterauge
Hello, it's me again...
I've got three new lyrics, and the song "Runaway" is recorded, you can listen to it here: http://www.cbrauer.de/downloads/runaway.mp3
But I bet there are soo many...
Thread: I need help! (4 Replies, 2,043 Views) by monsterauge
Thanks ...
Yes... I agree, but the grammar should be right, I think :)
I've got another one. It's about an outsider who' s at my school. It's a bit more thrown together... but I love playing it. I...
Thread: I need help! (4 Replies, 2,043 Views) by monsterauge
Thanks for the reply!
I don't really know the meaning of it, too... it should be you'd better don't know oF it, though... or about, maybe ?
Thread: I need help! (4 Replies, 2,043 Views) by monsterauge
The point is that I wrote some English lyrics and we will record our songs soon.
BUT I'm really insecure about the grammar, tenses, expressions and so on(for English not my first language)
I...