I tried to translate the song, but I am not sure that I have translated it well in some parts, soo plsss help

EDITED:

Tužno sam ptiče
I am a sad birdie
Što mekim kljunom Kljuca o kamen
That pecks on a stone with it's soft beak

Tražeći vodu
searching for water

Baš ko i ljudi Tako i ptice
just like the people, birds also
Najdraže traže Onda kad odu
search for their most precious (person/partner), when they leave

Slika, ritam, osijećaj i riječ
a picture, a rhythm, a feeling and a word
Zar je tako brzo prošlo već
did it pass so fast already
Znam ja dobro gdje si, kad i s kim
I know well where are you, when and with whom (you are )
Znam da duša sama bira tim
I know that the soul itself chooses
Al' ne mogu...
but I can't...

Nedostaješ
I miss you
Tako mi nedostaješ
I miss you so much
Za sve što prošlo je nedostaješ
for everything that has gone, I miss you
Nedostaješ
I miss you
Tako mi nedostaješ
I miss you so much
Za sve što dolazi nedostaješ
for everything that comes, I miss you

Tužno sam ptiče
I am a sad birdie
Slomljenih krila
with broken wings
Za posmatrače
To bystanders
Tako sam čudan
I am so weird (?)

U snu se može Svemogući Bože
Almighty God, in a dream (can happen)
Sve osim jedno
everyhing can happen, execpt one thing
Ostati budan
to ramain awake

Slika, ritam, osijećaj i riječ
a picture, a rhythm, a feeling and a word
Zar je tako brzo prošlo već
did it pass so fast already
Znam ja dobro gdje si, kad i s kim
I know well where are you, when and with whom (you are )
Znam da duša sama bira tim
I know that the soul itself chooses
Al' ne mogu...
but I can't...

Nedostaješ
I miss you
Tako mi nedostaješ
I miss you so much
Za sve što prošlo je nedostaješ
for everything that has gone, I miss you
Nedostaješ
I miss you
Tako mi nedostaješ
I miss you so much
Za sve što dolazi nedostaješ
for everything that comes, I miss you

Hey Velvet_sky, good to see you here again
I've italicized the corrections for you.


Dino Merlin - Nedostaješ ~ I miss you

Tužno sam ptiče
I am a sad birdie
Što mekim kljunom Kljuca o kamen
That pecks on a stone with it's soft beak
Tražeći vodu
searching for water

Baš ko i ljudi Tako i ptice
Just like people, birds also
Najdraže traže Onda kad odu
search for their most precious (person/partner), when they leave

Slika, ritam, osijećaj i riječ
A picture, a rhythm, a feeling and a word
Zar je tako brzo prošlo već
did it pass so fast already
Znam ja dobro gdje si, kad i s kim
I know well where are you, when and with whom (you are )
Znam da duša sama bira tim
I know that the soul itself chooses
Al' ne mogu...
but I can't...

Nedostaješ
I miss you
Tako mi nedostaješ
I miss you so much
Za sve što prošlo je nedostaješ
for everything that has gone, I miss you
Nedostaješ
I miss you
Tako mi nedostaješ
I miss you so much
Za sve što dolazi nedostaješ
for everything that comes, I miss you

Tužno sam ptiče
I am a sad birdie
Slomljenih krila
with broken wings
Za posmatrače
To bystanders
Tako sam čudan
I am so weird

U snu se može Svemogući Bože
Almighty God, in a dream (can happen)
Sve osim jedno
everyhing can happen, execpt one thing
Ostati budan
to remain awake

Here are two more versions of the translation:

Dino Merlin - Nedostajes

Though.. maybe we should translate "nedostajes" = "you're missed"

Thank you both!
Nice to see you again, helping me with the lyrics, hehe (hug)

yeah velvet! i hope you dont plan to disappear again!

Originally Posted by Spring

Though.. maybe we should translate "nedostajes" = "you're missed"

It could, but he's also singing 'tako mi nedostajes'. In that case I think 'I miss you' sounds better.

Originally Posted by velvet_sky

Thank you both!
Nice to see you again, helping me with the lyrics, hehe (hug)

Anytime!

Yes you are right.. but still ..

I hope to have more time to stay here and to have many new songs to be translated, so that I can practise translating