Here is a love song im workin on. Im a rap/hip hop artist! What you think?

Baby would you be my valentine, All you gotta do is be mine
Just for one night see how things go, cuz your body so amazin even got the halo
you an angel the sweetest girl ever, i would hurt you never
in a lifetime dont you know who I is, Im Yung B one of the flyest kids
And now finding the right one is such a tough fight, Baby we were love at first sight
Girl i only gotta ask one time, will you go ahead and be mine

I'm not one who listens to rap or hip hop, but hey, I like it.
idk about 'even got the halo', but hey, we like different styles, so whatever.