I need lyric help?

Thread: I need lyric help?

Tags: help needed, lyrics, rap
  1. R&R said:

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    I need help with this rap I am making...its nothing serious just wanting to see if I can wright at all its about call of duty


    Bang bang all day,
    C.O.D is what I play,
    Shell Shock Dual Glocs,
    droppin kids in 2 shots
    Don't know what I got,
    Double kill is how I drop,
    and you know I am gonna bring the pain
    When my bullets in your brain.

    Tac knifing like a beast,
    Noobtoobers be deceased,
    snipers lined up in a row,
    quick scopers gotta go,
    Cut throat,
    no joke
    Stabbing *****es till they choke,
    Hardcore is all I play,
    Stealth bombers ring the rain.
    bang bang ACR
    Killing kids from afar,
    drop shot Top notch
    head shots is all we got......
  2. Saybers Lyricals said:

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    Its decent but try to mix between ryhming patterns as if every 2 lines ryhme it can be repetitive