#62: Apocalypse

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    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    this song was made incomplete by one of my bandmate so i fill in the blank for him and also re-adjust it too. it was his thought of the goverment lol

    Apocalypse


    The whole world is crashing down
    Endless mourning has been drown
    Cuts by the razors and the Blank stares from the dead

    With the slip of tongue and a throat that has slit, the dead tells no lies
    While the devil possess and eat away with your soul
    Step back before you’ll be the next one to die
    A hell where the fiends crawl, and the heat was foul
    Darkness with gateway lead to the land of horror
    The rule to survive is to deliver the terrors

    Is this not what you have come to see?
    The bombs that has set the demon free
    The payments to the devil’s fee is by blood

    With the slip of tongue and a throat that has slit, the dead tells no lies
    While the devil possess and eat away with your soul
    Step back before you’ll be the next one to die
    A hell where the fiends crawl, and the heat was foul
    Darkness with gateway lead to the land of horror
    The rule to survive is to deliver the terrors

    The crack of dawn brings nothing but pain and sorrow
    Till the night of this day, the feeling is shallow

    Make a contact with the undead symbolized Death and Hatred
    There no replacement for those that have been lost

    With the slip of tongue and a throat that has slit, the dead tells no lies
    While the devil possess and eat away with your soul
    Step back before you’ll be the next one to die
    A hell where the fiends crawl, and the heat was foul
    Darkness with gateway lead to the land of horror
    The rule to survive is to deliver the terrors
    Last edited by Krent_Calstro777; 06-24-2007 at 02:18 PM.
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.
     
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    Kates_Agony said:

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    Not bad, not bad at all.
    Well, I like it anyways. Very emo but hey it's good :P
     
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    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    Emo????? O.o but I don't like emo...It's hurt my ears lol
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.
     
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    Kates_Agony said:

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    -patpat-
    Hey, think you can rate some of my songs? >.>
    Or something....... >.>
    Well.
    Whatever yooooooooooooooou wanna call it.
    Lol it's good though.
    ♥ The agony has not yet begun ♥
     
  5. sparks said:

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    With the slip of tongue and a throat that has slit, the dead tells no lies
    ^^^^^
    that line is really great.

    the whole thing flowed really well, but I didn't like the two opening lines all that much, other than that it was a pretty good job.
     
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    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    well I believe it's need a bit of work but i gotta thank my drum boy lol
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.