Lyric #64: Fallen Angel's Blue

This song was came up with idea of melody to use however it was similar the the band "Lucifer" yet different their words are not english but the melody is, the song they sang is Datenshi Blue(Fallen Angel Blue) so those words are to fit the melody.

Hey fallen angel, show me your cry
A shed of black tears cutting through the sky
The god is angry that you’ve kissed the devil
Feeling bitter and bleak is on your level

Your pure light was tainted in gray
Your chance of living in White night’s swayed

Fake loves is the ending of your prologue
Climbing your way up to become a rogue
The vision of your world, the wind is blowing gray
The angel’s stardust is rotting into decay

Shows me your side but you’ve wear same face
If your heart’s not satisfied then your wall won’t brace
We’re the demons, not yet the angels
We were kicked out by the love’s triangles
The sun I’ve touch has become the icy blue
Now you had the fallen angel’s blue

Hey Fallen angel, Just hear me please
The god has bind me with the lease
Attain my wings to complete the task
Then my soul shall remove its mask

My sun getting cold from my loneliness
Your tainted love suppress my sadness

The hell is a place for angel to pay
Your chance of miraculous night has sway
You have a scar that was wounded by darkness
Tell me what it’s like to be consumed by hatred

Shows me your side but you’ve wear same face
If your heart’s not satisfied then your wall won’t brace
We’re the demons, not yet the angels
We were kicked out by the love’s triangles
The sun I’ve touch has become the icy blue
Now you had the fallen angel’s blue

See your black wings dispersing as your life running out
I’ve watch it to the end before your heart can shout
I have become the luminous wings that I don’t want to be
It’s doesn’t atone my sins because there weren’t any errors I can see

Shows me your side but you’ve wear same face
If your heart’s not satisfied then your wall won’t brace
We’re the demons, not yet the angels
We were kicked out by the love’s triangles
The sun I’ve touch has become the icy blue
Now you had the fallen angel’s blue

Shows me your side but you’ve wear same face
If your heart’s not satisfied then your wall won’t brace
We’re the demons, not yet the angels
We were kicked out by the love’s triangles
The sun I’ve touch has become the icy blue
Now you had the fallen angel’s blue

I know about purity and gentleness from the White night
The pains and despair were brought out from the black light
Stuck in between the paths of them, I don’t know if they’re true
That why I have no answer, that’s why I feel so blue… It's The fallen angel’s blue….

Mmmmm.. is this a translation from your mother tongue? I suppose it makes as much sense as a lot of song lyrics do nowadays, but I am not sure it is quite idiomatic enough to convey a coherent message.

I suggest you keep polishing it. Maybe you could express the message you wish to convey in your mother tongue, then work with a native speaker of English to render it into this language.

Forgive me if this is not the answer you were hoping for. I know I could not do as good a job in your language.

Gnash