Invisible Song I wrote

Invisible

He's my
prince Charming, Romeo
Call him whatever you want
He isn't with me

He's My neighbor, best friend
that only thinks of me
like a sister

(Pre-Chorus)
I'd do anything
For him just to notice me
But no matter what I do
I'm still

(chorus)
Invisible, see through
The color clear
No matter what I do
I wish he loved me
The way he loves her
The way she does him
The way I do
But I'm always Invisble
When I am with him

I can't even be mad at him
He's my best friend
And he did nothing wrong
But I hate him

I wish he saw my tears at night
Crying for him
But he never will

(Pre-chorus and Chorus)

(Bridge)
Maybe one day
He will see me
the way I see him
Everyday
But that may never happen

I wish he were mine
And when I define the problem
He just stops and
stares and
says

You feel invisible, see through
The color clear
No matter what you do
You wish I loved you
The way I love her
The way she does Me
The way you do
Any guy would be lucky to
Have you as their girl
I'm in love with you
As a friend
But you're not invisible
To him
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Hey sorry I haven't posted anything new. I ahve been really busy and have had no creative thoughts at all lol.
As you all know I am only 13 but be a tough critic.

Seriously, it's awesome! I have some ideas of lines you could add somewhere or use ideas from,
Don't you see, there's something more to me than just a friend?
Don't you see, my racing heart when you look at me?
Don't you see, that the bond we have isn't as close a it can be?
Don't you see me?

Originally Posted by Tracy-Turnblad

Seriously, it's awesome! I have some ideas of lines you could add somewhere or use ideas from,
Don't you see, there's something more to me than just a friend?
Don't you see, my racing heart when you look at me?
Don't you see, that the bond we have isn't as close a it can be?
Don't you see me?

It could be the bridge

That's a great idea Tracy-Turnblad! oer it could be another verse. Thanks for commenting on my song!

Oh and by the way I love Hairspray too, I was wondering why your username sounded so familiar. Matter of a fact for my last Show Choir concert we performed "You Can't Stop The Beat." with dance moves. It my fave song from the movie

But thanks for teling me that it was awesome! I finally have a song that someone likes! Haha just kidding. I have another new song that ( added a little bit ago called 11:11, you should check it out!

Yeah I'll check it out! My favourite song is probably without love, or come so far (got so far to go). My favourite song when i'm watching the movie is Ladies Choice cuz you see lots of Link!

Haha yea, I can't wait to Watch High School Musical 3 because of that. lol it's a little to young for my age. Oh well. But I heard In HSM1 that he ddidn't do the singing just the acting. Some guy called Drew Seely Did.

Yeah, they said his voice was too low. I'm determined to get tickets for the HSM3 premiere. I'm told you have to enter competitions so i'm entering all of them! Have you heard the opening song, Now or Never from HSM3? You can listen to it on Youtube

Yea I downloaded to my MP3 player. But I dont think it was very legal...
:-)