Don't hold back (revision 3)

The night is single when i'm walking by
Looking at people, roaming outside
I've seen how they looks lost and pale inside
I've seen it countless time but it sow me fear in sight

I've tried to get to them but they can't come through
Looking at their faces, covered by their true blues
Seem to me that their souls were crushed enough to suicide
It wouldn't have to be this way if you have someone by your side

But let me say, from the dept of my heart
Take this chance to create a brand new start

So don't hold back
For anything that meant to happen
A light fade to black
People abandon you without reason
But soon in luck
Your love will meant to be given
But it never seem to say
that those words whispered away
Let your heart shout
Try to head for south
But don't try to stop
Until you reach for the top
But it never seem to say
That those words whispered away

I don't know how thing will turn out to be
Look at your life ahead to show what it means
Step into the future but the chaos meant to led
I will need you by my side to guide through this light

Let see how people answer your prayer
It's like the life have a printouts with layers
You can tell me what is bothering you
It's not like the life is too good to be true

But let me say, from the dept of my heart
Take this chance to create a brand new start

So don't hold back
For anything that meant to happen
A light fade to black
People abandon you without reason
But soon in luck
Your love will meant to be given
But it never seem to say
that those words whispered away
Let your heart shout
Try to head for south
But don't try to stop
Until you reach for the top
But it never seem to say
That those words whispered away

From Dawn to dusk
Was there anything to ask?
Shut your eyes, listen to the lesson
Feel the vibe to let it fade in

During the day
Try not to lose your way
Bearing the ominous pain
Can only be fade in the rain
But deep inside, it cannot be erased
Until your confessions are mades

So don't hold back
For anything that meant to happen
A light fade to black
People abandon you without reason
But soon in luck
Your love will meant to be given
But it never seem to say
that those words whispered away
Let your heart shout
Try to head for south
But don't try to stop
Until you reach for the top
But it never seem to say
That those words whispered away

Hold back then everything is gone
Can't get it back, it was lost for long...

Time

I love it, like usually <3

any criticism? i felt there something should be done in this.