One lonesome night

One lonesome night
When you were out of sight
I hopped into my car
And went a little too far
No destination in mind
Got myself into a little bind

Do you ever feel
like you're in a trap
With no map
Or in a box
With no visible locks
And no matter how much
you thrash about
There is no way out
That is how I felt

I thought I fell asleep
When a little beep
Made me realize
To my surprise
That I was paralyzed

Do you ever feel
like you're in a trap
With no map
Or in a box
With no visible locks
And no matter how much
you thrash about
There is no way out
That is how I felt

I looked all around
But noone was to be found
I was in a rocky room
And I realized to my doom
That I was in a tomb

Do you ever feel
like you're in a trap
With no map
Or in a box
With no visible locks
And no matter how much
you thrash about
There is no way out
That is how I felt

I dug really deep
And then fell asleep
When I did wake
I realized I made a mistake
I had gotten drunk
And was trapped in the trunk

This reminds me of Wake Up Little Susie by the Everly Brothers.Kind of "being in the wrong place at the wrong time"!Love it!

Haha true! I never even thought about it before. I wrote both songs last night in an hour and a half. I don't even know how I came up with this one. I just started messing around with a box and a maze and no locks and then I had the chorus down and the rest just came suddenly. I have never even drank but i thought it would be a funny ending.

If you wrote both in the same night,your creativity must be at a peak.Try to take full advantage of it,it won't last forever!P.S.......while I'm here.......check out Pumpkinhead,it has the same rhyming vibe as this.(I said "vibe" so it's not exact!)

Haha I already did. I wrote 7 songs in 7 days. All except for I thought you were my fairytale.

Originally Posted by meli2235

Haha I already did. I wrote 7 songs in 7 days. All except for I thought you were my fairytale.

Could you explain the last sentence!!!!!!!

I wrote all of my songs in one week except for "I thought you were my fairytale" I wrote it when I was 16 which was a while ago

Originally Posted by meli2235

I wrote all of my songs in one week except for "I thought you were my fairytale" I wrote it when I was 16 which was a while ago

Great!Now I understand!

haha sorry. I was typing too fast before

Is this song similar to Hearts- All I wanna do is make love to you?