Give Me A Chance

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  1. meli2235 said:

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    Verse 1
    How do I let you know,
    You might be the one,
    To let my heart come undone,
    How do I let it show,
    That you are the only one

    Chorus
    Baby won’t you listen to my heart
    Don’t let us be over before we start
    Give me a single chance,
    Let me give you a little romance,
    Maybe if we get together.
    We’ll have a little pleasure,
    Then if you want to stay,
    You better never walkaway.

    Verse 2 or 3(not sure yet)
    Won’t you pick up your phone,
    I am feeling all alone,
    Am I ever on your mind,
    Baby give me a sign
    Or maybe I should I just resign

    Chorus
    Baby won’t you listen to my heart
    Don’t let us be over before we start
    Give me a single chance,
    Let me give you a little romance,
    Maybe if we get together.
    We’ll have a little pleasure,
    Then if you want to stay,
    You better never walkaway.

    I know the first verse is a bit lacking and I am going to change it and to it. I had to put it in though because it did build the rest of my song It's not finished yet either.
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Hey Meli!

    I keep wondering, why there's always this feeling of eternity when it comes to love.
    Maybe relationships would have a better chance of lasting, if there'd not be the "don't you dare to leave"threat subtly hidden in it.
    "then if you want to stay
    you better never walk away"

    What do you think?
    Though that seems a natural reaction when falling in love, it's maybe a wrong choice.
    Good you put that in words though and that's the purpose of lyrics:
    interpretation of feelings and impressions, points of view etc...
    Keep on writing, Meli!
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    Yeah, people want to link love with eternity. Problem is, we only live for a short while.